2018年九年级英语全册Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry第四节短文改

1、、二第四节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有io 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该增加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2 .只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。AA long time ago , in a rich and bea utiful country , there lived a unhappy king.He slept bad

2、 and did nt feel like eating.Hisface was always pale as chalk.He ofte n cried for not reas on. Thismade the quee n and his people worried.One day, a doctor was called in examine the king.But he found nothing wrong with his body. “Its all in hismind.Neithermedicine or rest can help him.What he need i

3、s the shirt of a happy personto wear.Thatll make him happy. ”The prime minister was called to the palace.But when they explained the kings situationto him, he said ，“ Although I have a lot of power, but it does nt make mehapp y.Im always worried about los ing mypower.Ma ny people are trying to take

4、my positi on.”Then, the kings banker cameto the palace. “Oh, rm afraid rm not happy, too，” he said. “I have a lot of wealth, but rm always worried about losing my money.Someone tries to steal mymoney every day. ”Next, the palace sin ger came to the kin gs room.But thiswas what he said :Its true that

5、rm famous and every one loves my son gs.But rm n ot happy because rm always worried about b efollowed by others .I cannot be free!”Fin ally , the kin gs top gen eral was told to go out and find a happy man in three days time.BPeter kept hi s eyes on the gro un d.He felt like there was a heavy weight

6、 on his shouldersas he walked home lonely.lt was the worst day of his life.His mind would not stop thinking about what happe ned onlyjust an hour ago in the school soccer field.How could he have missed score that goal ? He had let his whole teamdown.His stupid mistake made him angry.His team had los

7、t the game because of he.He was really worried that hiscoach might kick him off the team.As soon as he walked through the door, his father asked ，“ Whats wrong , son?” Petersfeelings written all over hisface. “I lost the game ，” Peter replied.Then he went into hisroom without another word.Ten minute

8、s late , Peter heard his father knocking on his bedroom door.He ope ned thedoor to let him in.Look, Peter.I dont know what happened.But whatever it was, dont be too ha rd withyourself. ”“ I lost the game , Dad.I failed my team.Theyll probably n ever let me play aga in.”“Soccer is about team effort.Y

9、oure the only reason your team lost.If you have a good team , you shouldsupport each other.Besides , winning and los ing isonly half the game.The other halfis lear ning how tocom muni cate with your teammate and lear ning from your mistakes.”2参考答案A long time ago * in a rich and beautiful country、the

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12、ied aboutlosing my power. Many people are trying to take my position.MThen, the king s banker came to the palace. ()hI m afraid I m not happy too .Mhe said. have a loteitherof wealthy but I，m always worried about losing my mon ey. Someonetries to steal my money every clay. ”Next, the palace singer c

13、ame to the kings room. But this was whathe said：It s true that Tm famous and everyone loves my sons, Iut Irn nut happy because I rri always worried about址followed l)y otliers.I can not be free!Finally, the kings top general was told to go out and find a happyman in threebiy生time.days4Peter kept his

14、iycs on rhe ground. He full liku the r(fcwas aheavy weight on his shoulders as he walked home lonely It was theworst day of his life, 11 is mind would alonenot stop thinking about what happened only just an Hour ago如theschool soccer field. How could he have onmissed scow that go a 1 ? I Ic had let h

15、is whole team scoringclown, His st Lipid mistake macle him anry. 1 lis tean had lost thegame because of址 .He was really worried himthat his coach might kick him olf the team,：s soon as he walked through the doorhis father asked . Whatswrongson?* Peteros feelings A written wereall over his face,UI lo

16、st the game,，?Peter replied. Then he went into hisroom without another word. Ten5minutes辿亡,Peter heard liis father knocking on his laterbedroom door* 1 le opened the door to let him in*I .ook. Peter* 1 don l know what happened. Rut whatever itwas.don11 be too hard with yourself, ”Oillost the game, DacL I failed my team. Theyll probably neverlet me play agaith 44Soccer is about team e