2020-2021年中考英语书面表达专题(含答案)

1、2020-2021 年中考英语书面表达专题 （含答案 ）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1. 书面表达每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以 “A （ n） Ihave ”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意 义。要求： 1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺， 80 词左右。A（ n） I have【答案】 A( n) toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do

2、I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It s a black toy gun and it can shot somsmall plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun.They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a little boy, I lik

3、ed watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun.One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor thenand my father didn t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. Aweek later, father put a box to me. A black to

4、y gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it,father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I willremember my father s love forever. Every time I miss him, I ll take out the toy gun and sayyou,

5、my dear father!【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。写作的难度是逐渐加深的，在讨论其如何获得的时候要注意正确使用时态，在谈论意义的时候要注意表达的准确性，避免不熟悉的表达。写作亮点：这篇文章讲了自己最喜欢的玩具枪，描述玩具枪的时候有适当的细节补充，例如 a toy gunwrapped by yellow cloth (用黄布包着的玩具枪)，这里用到了过去分词作定语，作者还描述了玩具枪的功能( small plastic pills )，顺便还描述了自己小时候玩枪的经历，准确使用了时态。在描述得到的经

6、历的时候不落俗套，讲到了自己的家庭那时比较困难，父亲是通过努力工作为我赚钱买枪的，写作是富有感情的，也通过这段经历为这把玩具枪赋予了一定的意义。最后玩具的意义得到了升华，表达了作者的期望( I hope I can be a soldier )，上升到了保家卫国的层面，这样的一篇作文是有深度的，能够让人感动的，是一篇优秀的范文。2.书面表达难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以 My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文 介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意：1.词数9

7、0左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2 .短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺 ；3 .短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】 How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past,

8、I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn ' t do well

9、 in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn ' t havoad sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time bett

10、er. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以"My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题：结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和 一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文 意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达 出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中 not only but also,

11、 help a lot, share happiness and sadness, do well in , give up, besides, so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj., therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密；文章 的最后 I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了 自 己愿望与想法， 使文章增色不少，值得学习。3.共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到

12、人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给 21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势随处可见，出行方便 宿益健康，减少污染 费用不高，负担得起存在问题未及时归还 占道挡路你的观点我认为参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中 你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Public bicycles are becoming more a

13、nd more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have wonhigh praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can beseen everywhere so that it ' s35aByeo auound on public bicycles. Also, Riding bic

14、ycles notonly is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What' s more, using public bicyclcosts so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cann'public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are

15、in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it living a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括 4 个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯

16、的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。4 假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。你打算邀请外教Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。提示词语：school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示问题： When and where are you going to meet? What are you going to do there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it

17、 going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition inYanqing.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter ，How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school ga

18、te at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day.

19、 You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take somefood and drinks with you.I'm looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1 .题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。本文已经给出了主要写作要点， 动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提 示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。2 .例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。语言

20、的表述应该符合语法 的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。3 .高分亮点：短语：school gate； invite sb. to do； a lot of； plan to do。句型：not only but also You'd better ; T'm looking forward to 。5 .书面表达中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择 游玩。请根据旅行社提供的信息，将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。BritainTimeJuly 1 - July 14Activitiesvisit the Buckingham

21、 Palace（白金汉宫）visit the British Museum （大英博物馆）watch football matchesAttentionchangeable weatherCost20,000 yuanAustraliaTimeAugust 15 -August 24Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera House travel around the Gold Coast（黄金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalasAttentionwinterCost16,000 yuan要求：1 .所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有

22、信息及选择的理由；2 .结合游玩国家的情况，自拟希望可以安排的活动，并提出1-2点出游的注意事项;3 .文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4 .语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范；5 .不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。The summer holiday is coming. I think it' s a good idea to travel abroad.I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】 The summer holiday is coming. I think it ' s a good idea

23、 to travel abroad. I have read information about two countriesBritain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go toBritain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to

24、visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconv

25、enient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提 供了两个国家供你选择游玩。要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介 绍。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个 要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写

26、作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文 章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的 结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的 复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文 章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。6.随着网络的发展、人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然的发生变化。 阈购”已成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点(advantage)1.不需要出门；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累2.价格通常比较便宜3.可供选择的范围广

27、，品种多缺点(disadvantage)1.只看到图片， 看/、到商品本身2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费你的观点提示词汇：网购 shopping online; 商品 goods;导致 cause 注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面，可适当发挥；2 .文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；3 .词数：100词左右，文章开头已给出，但不计入总数。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】 With the development of the Inte

28、rnet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just with the click of a mouse, you can buy what you interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowd

29、s and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it' s very easy for youto buy goods that aren ' t like the pictures you see on the Internet

30、. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That' s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要讲述网购的优点和缺点。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时 态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如 convenient

31、 , disadvantage, ingood quality , figure out , have the chance to do , be attacked by , of course , take care of 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给 出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中 心突出、明确的关键。初

32、写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确 性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。7.书面表达根据下表用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，内容须包括：对下表中关于（ City A和City B）的全部信息进行比较，分析利弊，确定其中一个城市作为你的暑假旅游目的地。City ACity BFlying2 hours4 h

33、oursTemperature30 c18 cHotel Things to do Food In my opinion,is he better place to spend my summer holiday.【答案】例文In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is less comfortable, and even the food is not as delicious as tha

34、t in City B, I still choose City A. The most important reason is that I can have a lot of things to do in City A . I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there, which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable ex

35、perience.【解析】 【详解】试题分析：本题给出了两个城市的飞行时常、气温、旅馆情况。食物等相关信息，要求考 生对每个信息进行比较，选择自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。虽然字数要求不多，但可以很 好地考查考生英语写作的基本功，需要考生对常用的英语句型熟练掌握。熟悉英语的表达 方式。避免汉语式英语。句型不要都用简单句。另外，一定要注意题目要求，把每一个信 息都进行比较，不要有漏掉。写作亮点：本篇作文按照题目要求选择了城市A作为自己暑假旅游的目的地。对于城市 A的缺点，作者用了“Although层管一词轻轻带过。对于优点则重点突出，因为在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在这里用了词组“a lot of。

36、在比较的时候，作者用了多种方式，使句子不单调，比如在比较温度时，直接用比较级“higher在说旅馆时用了"less comfortable ,比较食物时，用了“asaT。在说选择城市 A的原因时，用了 that引导的宾语从句。本文大部分都是复杂句，显示了作者比较熟练的英语写作水平。8.李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说，她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华，请你给Jessica写一封信，介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：1. 中秋节的时间；2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭 , 赏月 , 吃月饼等；3. 我最期待的活动。要求：1.80-100 词开头和结尾已给出

37、 ,不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯 , 书写工整。Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival toyou.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15 th of the 8th lunar mo

38、nth. It s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest.With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to ea

39、t mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious.They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【详解】本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表

40、达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get together ， enjoy the full moon ， share our stories 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。9.书面表达初中就要毕业了，校报 英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根 据要点写一封信，说说你的计划。活动毕业晚会时间6月28日晚上七点地点学校礼堂school hall9T日全体初三学生和老师活动内容1 .邀请校长作演讲；2 .互赠礼物送祝福；3 .各班表演精彩节目4 .要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯 ；2.正确使用语态，

41、语法正确，书写整洁。3.80词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】Dear editor,I'm very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremonywill be held in our school ha

42、ll at 7 o' clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. Firstof all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan. Best