2020年浙江省宁波市十校联盟高三3月模拟联考英语作文读后续写写作指导(含范文)

1、2020 年浙江省宁波市十校联盟高三 3 月模拟联考英语作文读后续写写作指导一、续写原题It was a peaceful night. I was sleeping with my brothers, feeling warm and comfortable. Mama was sleeping nearby, covered by snow. Papa was somewhere nearby, watching over us. There was a bright moon and we had all had a good meal of venison （鹿肉 ） Papahad

2、caught earlier."Uncle Louis is coming," Papa said. We lovedUncle Louis . Hewas a funny wolf, and always had interesting things to tell us and show us.A little while later, Uncle Louis appeared. We did notapproachhim with respect the way we approached Papa. We flew at him, jumped all over h

3、im, and rolled him in the snow. Uncle Louis laughed and patted us with his paws. He is black all over, with yellow eyes, and he is very tall."It's the longest night of the year," Uncle Louis said, "Does everyone feel like taking a run through the woods? I want to show you somethin

4、g unusual ."Hearing that, Papa warned that it was dangerous to go near that pack of humans who lived in the woods ."They are hardly dangerous ," Uncle Louis laughed, "They are so clumsy and make so much noise. They are not able to get near us or even see us if we don't want t

5、hem to. Besides, this is their special night. They are quite peaceful and won't be bothering about wolves.""Oh, please, Papa, let us run through the woods with Uncle Louis and see something unusual!" We all begged."It is a fine night," Papa smiled, "I must admit, I

6、do feel like running."Paragraph 1 :And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods.Paragraph 2 :We stopped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans' place.二、下水续写“ 7+7 ”模式Paragraph 1 : And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods.1. Under the company of my parents and

7、 Uncle Louis, my brothers and I began the long journey to the unusual world that we had never been before. .2. Before our eyes was a sea of snow.3. We ran, jumped and sometimes yelped in excitement.4. From time to time, Papa turned around and shouted, "Hurry up!", giving us a serious look.

8、5. After what seemed to be ages, we reached the woods, extremely exhausted.6. Watchfully, my parents and Uncle Louis moved forward on tiptoe, afraid that we might run into humans.7. Fortunately for us, there was nothing dangerous happening as we went through the woods.Paragraph 2 :We stopped and sat

9、 on a hillside and below us was the humans' place.1. Deep down the valley, the whole village was bathed in the bright light of the moon.2. Colorful lights twinkled in the trees, waves of hearty laughter ran out of every house and delicious smell filled the air.3. Stunned by the scene in front of

10、 us, we just sat there with our mouth wide open as if we were in a dream.4. "What are they doing?" I asked in a low voice, breaking the moment's silence.5 ."It's Christmas Eve, a peaceful and special night for humans to get together with family and friends," replied Uncle

11、 Louis.6. Suddenly it dawned on me that humans are just like us animals they have feelings and they love each other.7. For a moment, time seemed to stand still and with big snowflakes drifting down, we sat closer and closer.Paragraph 1 :And we were off, all of us, heading towards the woods. Under th

12、e company of my parents and Uncle Louis , my brothers and I began the long journey to theunusual world that wehad never been before. Before our eyes was a sea of snow. We ran, jumped and sometimes yelped in excitement. From time to time, Papa turned around and shouted, "Hurry up!", giving

13、us a serious look. After what seemed to be ages, we reachedthe woods ,extremely exhausted. Watchfully, my parents and Uncle Louis moved forward on tiptoe, afraid that we might run into humans. Fortunately for us, there was nothing dangerous happening as we went through the woods.Paragraph 2 :We stop

14、ped and sat on a hillside and below us was the humans' place. Deep down the valley, the whole village was bathed in the bright light of themoon . Colorful lights twinkled in thetrees, waves of hearty laughter ran out of every house and delicious smell filled the air. Stunned by the scene in fron

15、t of us, we just sat there with our mouth wide open as if we were in a dream. "What are they doing?" I asked in a low voice, breaking the moment's silence."It's Christmas Eve, a peaceful and special night for humans to get together with family and friends," replied Uncle

16、Louis. Suddenly it dawned on me that humans are just like us animals they havefeelings and they love each other. For a moment, time seemed to stand still and with big snowflakes drifting down, we sat closer and closer.参考范文：ParagraPh 1： And e Were Ojfi al! Of US) heading 9y ards the WoOdS It was almo

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