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1、第14讲 如何写话题类记叙文巧记妙叙巧记妙叙,难以忘记难以忘记 一、魔法导航一、魔法导航话题类记叙文要注意以下几点:第一,掌握记叙文的“六要素”。一般按照事件发展的时间顺序来讲述,先交代事件发生的时间、地点以及事件所涉及的人物,然后叙述事件发生的原因、发展经过,最后交代结果。但有时也采取插叙和倒叙的手法。第二,首先确定时间立足点,并以此确定时态。报道、日记或故事类记叙文通常是记录过去发生的事情,因此经常采用一般过去时;叙述当前的事情或自然、社会现象则用一般现在时。第三,从谋篇布局角度讲,该类文章可分为三段:第一段引出话题;第二段讲述过程;第三段说明结果或发表感慨。二、常用句式二、常用句式(1)

2、One morning/day./Last week/Saturday./On a winter day./This morning./It was June 20,2010./On May 4,2010.(2).was doing sth.when suddenly./As soon as.+主句/When.+主句/Before I could.+主句(3)As/Because/Since+从句+主句(4)After some time./After a while./A few minutes later./A moment later./Then.(5)Some were doing.s

3、ome were doing.and/while others were doing.(6).just then./At that moment./Hardly had.when.(7)And./So./Therefore./As a result./For that.三、典题示例三、典题示例真题在线(2014课标全国)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。I often imagine what my life will be li

4、ke in the future. 文章体裁记叙文中心人称第一人称主体时态一般将来时要点布局1.引题句:我经常想象未来的生活(已给出)。2.主题句:统领下文,提炼主题,如十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。3.要点或扩展句:4. 结尾句:总结全文,紧扣主题,如我的生活将丰富多彩。:,:,:家庭 有自己的幸福家庭和可爱的孩子 在某地定居生活幸福 等等。工作 写出自己理想的工作 描述职场状态或工作意义等。业余生活 锻炼身体、个人爱好、旅游休闲等有意义的事情。审题谋篇审题谋篇考场作文:I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.In t

5、en years, I will have my own family, lead a happy life. As for my job, I will build up my own business. Not only will it helps me make a living, but it will also contribute to the development of the society. When I have free time, I will take regularly exercise and become a volunteer to help the eld

6、erly people. It is of great use to my life quality. In brief, I will spare no effort to make my future life meaning-ful. 文章提升:1.修改错误:1)lead如果作谓语动词前面应加连词and,故应将lead改为 。2)在not only引导的倒装句型中助动词will提前,主语后动词需用动词原形,故应将helps改为 。3)修饰名词需用形容词,故将regularly改为 。2.提升建议:将画线部分改为非谓语动词作状语的形式: 。阅卷现场阅卷现场参考范文:I often imag

7、ine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different from what it is today in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely baby. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my wo

8、rk and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my spare time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. During my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be richer and more colorful. 参考答案

9、1.修改错误:1)leading2)help3)regular 2.提升建议:When having free time 四、高分秀场四、高分秀场(2015山东临沂高三一模)假定你的名字叫鲁沂,你打算2015年高考结束后在暑假期间打工。现在请你用英文写一篇短文介绍自己。内容要点如下:年龄、性别性格、爱好打工理由注意:1.词数100左右。 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。我来试写 In the summer vacation,I am longing to take a part-time job.The first reason is that I can earn some pocket

10、 money to satisfy my daily needs and thus develop a sense of independence. Besides,I can build up new friendship and improve social skills so that I can develop my ability to adapt to the society.参考答案One possible version:Im Lu Yi,an outgoing boy aged 18. I take an active part in sports and outdoor ac-tivities,which is o