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1、AB 以以 “Housework ”为题写一篇英语短文为题写一篇英语短文你认为中学生有必要干家务吗？请表明自己的观点并说明原因你认为中学生有必要干家务吗？请表明自己的观点并说明原因（至少三条，不少于词）。（至少三条，不少于词）。 I think we should do housework. First, in a family mother does the most housework. If you dont want your mother to be too tired, do some housework to help her. Second, housework can hel

2、p us do everything all by ourselves, and it can also help us take good care of ourselves when we leave home one day. Third, housework can relax ourselves. Every day after school, I usually feel tired after hard study. So I can relax myself by doing housework. Do housework ! Enjoy it ! We should do s

3、ome housework because we are students. We do housework every morning, every afternoon, every evening. My mother does housework, my father does housework, So I do housework, too. Doing housework can help us in our study. AB1.弄清主题、确定时态弄清主题、确定时态2.连词成句、覆盖要点连词成句、覆盖要点3.巧妙组合、顺畅过度巧妙组合、顺畅过度4.推敲检查、查漏补缺推敲检查、查漏

4、补缺 某地教育局将每年的月日定为爱心慈善日，今年某地教育局将每年的月日定为爱心慈善日，今年活动的主题是活动的主题是“人人为贫困孩子献爱心人人为贫困孩子献爱心”现在请你以学生现在请你以学生会名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：会名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：、许多孩子因贫困而上不起学、许多孩子因贫困而上不起学;、他们没有足够的学习用品和衣物、他们没有足够的学习用品和衣物 、每个孩子都应该有上学的权利、每个孩子都应该有上学的权利、我们应该做一些力所能及的事去帮助他们，比如、我们应该做一些力所能及的事去帮助他们，比如have the right to do somethingDear students

5、, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.Thanks for your joining. Students Union poor too.to.school things and clothesas possible as one canDear students, In some parts of our country, there are manychildren out of school. They are too poor to go toschool. At the same ti

6、me, they dont have enoughschool things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. Sowe should help them as possible as we can, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will enjoy the same

7、chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school. Thanks for your joining. Students Union Mike是你班的一位来自澳大利亚的同学，他患是你班的一位来自澳大利亚的同学，他患了感冒，去药店买了一盒药，并向你询问服药的方法。了感冒，去药店买了一盒药，并向你询问服药的方法。请你根据药品说明，向请你根据药品说明，向Mike解释，并告诉他如何预解释，并告诉他如何预防感冒。（词数：防感冒。（词数：80个左右，给出的首句不计入总词个左右，给出的首句不计入总词数。）数。） This medicine is used f

8、or curing cough, headache and something like that caused by cold._【服用说明】【服用说明】适用于由感冒引起的咳嗽、头痛等症状适用于由感冒引起的咳嗽、头痛等症状 饭前口服饭前口服. 一次一次12片片, 一天一天3次次, 一个疗程一个疗程35天天. 偶有瞌睡感偶有瞌睡感 服药期间服药期间, 忌食鱼、酒、辛辣食品忌食鱼、酒、辛辣食品等级等级 分数分数 要求要求优优22-25分分 要点内容齐全，意义连贯，语言规范，行文变要点内容齐全，意义连贯，语言规范，行文变化有致，无语法错误，书写整齐美观，字数不化有致，无语法错误，书写整齐美观，字数

9、不少于少于80个单词。个单词。良良18-21分分 要点内容齐全，意义较连贯，语言形式基本正要点内容齐全，意义较连贯，语言形式基本正确，有少量语法错误，字数不少于确，有少量语法错误，字数不少于80个单词。个单词。中中13-17分分 要点内容基本齐全，意义不够连贯，有较多语要点内容基本齐全，意义不够连贯，有较多语法错误。法错误。差差7-12分分要点遗漏较多，意义不连贯，很多语法错误。要点遗漏较多，意义不连贯，很多语法错误。很差很差 0-6分分 只有个别要点，或错误连篇，不知所云。只有个别要点，或错误连篇，不知所云。 (One Possible Vision) This medicine is us

10、ed for curing cough, headache and something like that caused by cold. Take one or two pills each time, and three times a day before meals. Sometimes you might feel like sleeping after you take it. But it doesnt matter. Dont have fish, wine or hot food these days while youre taking this medicine. And

11、 youll be fine in three or five days. By the way, I think youd better take good care of yourself and keep healthy. For example, put on more clothes when you go outside on a cold day; keep the air in your room clean; have more water, fruit and vegetables. And the most important of all, do more sports

12、 every day to be stronger. I wish youll be all right soon. 请根据自己的日常生活习惯及自己所了解的知识请根据自己的日常生活习惯及自己所了解的知识,介绍一下中西方不同的饮食习惯介绍一下中西方不同的饮食习惯. (80字左右字左右)要点包括要点包括: 1.食品食品 2.餐具餐具 3. 餐桌礼仪餐桌礼仪 There are many differences on eating habitsbetween China and western countries_ There are many differences on eating habit

13、sbetween China and western countries. First, Chinese people eat a lot of freshly-cooked rice,noodles, vegetables, meat and soup. And the food is often cooked in many ways. Western people prefer bread, milk and salad. They also eat a lot of fast food like hamburgers and potato chips. Second, westerne

14、rs are used to eating meals with the knife and fork, and Chinese use chopsticks. Third, westerners think its rude to make a noise during the meal, but it is common for Chinese to talk with friends when they are having dinner. Also, westerners dont hold bowls up to have soup as Chinese do. They use s

15、poons instead. 中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次当的方式放松自己。你代表班级在一次 “The Ways for Students to Relax”的学校座谈中与二的学校座谈中与二(1)班的班的Terry讨论了这一讨论了这一话题，请根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教话题，请根据他的观点和你自己的观点，用英语给你的外籍教师师Mr. Griffin写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。写一篇有关这次讨论的汇报材料。His ideasYour ideas1. Watchin

16、g TV1. 2. Playing computer games2. 3. Hanging out with friends3. 1. 开头和结尾已经写好开头和结尾已经写好 2. 可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的话语,使内容连贯使内容连贯 3. 所写内容所写内容必须包括上面表格中他的观点必须包括上面表格中他的观点和和你自己至少你自己至少三个观点三个观点 4. 词数：词数：70字左右。字左右。Mr. Griffin Recently I have had a discussion about The Ways for Students to Relax wit

17、h Terry, a student from Class One Grade Two . (As we study too long every day, every student should choose ways to relax.) In his opinion, the best ways are watching TV and playing computer games. He also believes that sometimes hanging out with friends isnt a bad way. However, Im not quite agree with him. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a good way to help us relax. I think listening to music and playin