2016高考英语二轮复习第一部分微专题强化练三短文改错

1、1短文改错强化训练（一）（2015 课标全国n）One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.lt was verycrowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quicklywalked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time , he turned around and found where his parents were miss in g.T

2、 ony was scared and beg un to cry.A womansaw him crying and telling him to waitoutside a shop.Five minutes later , Tony saw parents.Mom said ,“How nice to see you again ! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised herthat this would n ever happe n aga in.答案：One day , little Tony went to a shop

3、p ing cen ter with hispare nt .It was verypare ntscrowded.Tony saw a toy on _ a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quicklyinwalked into the shop.Afterlooks at the toy for some time , he turned around andlook ingfound where his pare nts were miss in g.T ony was scared and begun to cry.A wom

4、a nthat 或 wherebega nsaw him crying and telli nghim to wait outsidea shop.Five minutes later,TonytoldthesawAparents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terriblehisterriblyworried.”Tony promised her that this wouldn ever happe n aga in.解析：第一处：pare ntpare nts由下文的 his pare nts were.以及倒数第

5、二句中的妈妈说的话中可知托尼是和爸爸、妈妈一起去的，所以应该用复数形式parents。第二处：onfin表示在商店的橱窗里，用介词in。第三处：去掉 very 句中使用了 so.that. 结构，very 多余，故将其去掉。第四处：looksflooking该动词位于介词 after 后，要用动词的-ing 形式，故把 looks改为 looking。第五处：wherefthat 或去掉 where found 后是一个宾语从句，句子意思和成分完整，2应该用只起连接作用的that 引导，也可以省略。故把where 改为 that 或去掉 where。第六处：begunfbegan 本文描述的是

6、过去的经历，and 连接的两个并列成分应当时态致，故此处用一般过去时，把begun 改为 began。3第七处：tellingtold 由 and 可知，此处和谓语动词 saw 并列，故用过去式。第八处：athe这里指的是前文提到的shop，所以用定冠词 the 修饰，表特指。第九处：saw 后加 his这里特指托尼的父母亲，所以用物主代词his 修饰 parents。第十处：terrible 宀 terribly修饰形容词 worried 要用副词形式。（二）（2015 陕西）My soccer coach retired in last week .1 wan ted to do anyt

7、hing special for himat his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world , so I decideto ask her for help.Mum taught mesome basic step of baking.linsistedon doing mostof the bak ing myselfthought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some onthe floor after

8、 I was packing them up.At a party , my coach , with a biscuitin his mouth, asked surprisinglywho madethem and joked，“ I might have to retireagain next year just get some more of thesebiscuits. ”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits withhappy laughter!答案：anything s

9、pecial for him someth ingat his retirement party.My mummakes the better biscuits bestto ask her for help.Mum taught me some basicstep ofbaking.l insisted on doingstepsmost of the bak ing myselfthought the biscuits were really well.My on ly mistakegoodwas that I dropped some on the floorafterI was pa

10、ck ing them up.whe n/whileAt a party,mycoach,with a biscuit in his mouth,theasked surpris in glywho madethem and joked，“1 might have to retire aga in n ext year justAget some more of tothese biscuits.My soccer coach retired in lastweek .I wan ted to doin the world , so I decidedecided致，故此处用一般过去时，把be

11、gun 改为 began。4My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and meenjoy the biscuitsenjoyingwith happy laughter!5解析：第一处：去掉 in 用 last ， next 等表示的时间状语前不用介词，故去掉 in 。第二处：anything 宀 somethinganything 用于疑问句和否定句中，something 用于肯定句中，故将 anything 改为 something 。第三处：better 宀 best表示比较的范围是in the world，故改为最高级。第四处：

12、decide 宀 decided decide 意为决定，此处时态应与全文时态一致，故改为 decided 。第五处：stepTsteps step 是可数名词，前面有some 修饰，故用复数形式。第六处：wellTgood 系动词 be 后接形容词作表语，副词不能充当表语，故改well为 good。第七处： aftertwhen/while 句意为：我唯一的错误就是当我正在打包的时候掉地上 了一些。根据句意可知将 after 改为 when 或 while 。第八处： atthe第一段第二句中有提到 party ，此处为第二次提到， 故用 the 表特指。故将 a 改为 the 。第九处：

13、just 后加 to 分析句子结构可知， might have to 是谓语部分，从而 get 不 再是谓语动词，故只能是非谓语动词。此处表示目的，故用不定式。第十处：enjoyTenjoying 此处 my coach and me 作介词 of 的宾语，enjoy 与 mycoach and me 之间是主动关系，应用现在分词形式。（三）（2015 四川）Hi, Janice ，Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of theproblems I hav

14、e been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and afterschool.Weve been spending a lot of timesing in karaoke bars.Itsbeen three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wastingactivity! In fact， I don

15、t like to go anymore, so Im afraid Illlose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me， would you talkto him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace答案：6Hi, Janice ，7Its bee n a mon th since I came to this new school and I really wantto with yousome of the problems I have b

16、ee n experie ncing.As I tell you last time, I made three newfriend here.We hang out togethertoldfriendsduring lunch and afterschool.Wevebeen spending a lc)t of time singsin gi nginkaraokebars .I tsbee n three Saturdays now andit really costsme manyAnd Istartedto seemuchthis as a time-wasti ngactivit

17、y!In factI dont liketo go anymore.so rmafraidbutIll losetheir frien dship.How do you think I shoulddo? If you areme ,would youWhatweretalk to him?themPlease help with me and give me some advice.Grace解析：第一处：want 后加 to want to do sth.为固定搭配，意为想要做某事”。第二处：tell told根据从句中的时间状语last time 可知该动作发生在过去，故应用一般过去时。

18、第三处：friend 宀 friendsfriend 为可数名词，根据前面的数词three 可知此处应用复数形式。故将 friend 改为 friends。第四处：singTsingingspend some time(in) doing sth.是固定搭配，意为 花时间做某事”。故将 sing 改为 singing。第五处：man 尸 much 此处说的是在卡拉 0K 唱歌这件事让作者花费了很多钱，浪费了 很多时间。many 指代可数名词，much 指代不可数名词。故将many 改为 much第六处：SOTbut逗号前说不想再去了，而后面又说害怕失去友谊，由此可知逗号前后为转折关系，而非因果

19、关系。故将so 改为 but。第七处：HOWTWhat 该句中 do you think为插入语，分析句子成分可知动词do 后缺少宾语，而 how 为疑问副词，在句中作方式状语，作宾语应用what。第八处：areTwere 根据下文的 would 可知此处为 if 条件句的虚拟语气。 与现在事实 相反，应用一般过去时。故将are 改成 were。第九处：himTthem上文提到作者交了三个朋友，再结合上文中的their friendship可知此处指代那三个朋友，为复数。故将him 改为 them。Ashare8第十处：去掉 with固定搭配 help sb. with sth. 意为帮助某人

20、某事”，help 后宾语为人时不用介词。故去掉with。9（2015 浙江）My old classroom was interestingbecause three side of the classroom were madefrom glass.1 enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of theclass , I could easy see the football field .In the mornings , it was full of students

21、exercising.The viewfrom the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautifulpark withmany trees around them.Farther in thedistanee , I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road .Iwas always in terested to see the drivers i

22、n hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with itsview made me felt like I was dreaming.lf I was only a child when I studied in that classroom , I will neverforget it.答案：My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made sidesfrom glass .I enjoyedsiclose to the

23、 wi ndows and look ing at the view. On theofsitti ngleft-ha nd side of the class , I couldeasy see the football field .In the mornings ,easilyit was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also was splendid.Close tothe school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distanee , I could -enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On theitright side of the class was the road .I was always in terested to see the drivers inAhurry in the mornin g.The