最新中考英语书面表达难题及答案(word)1

1、最新中考英语书面表达难题及答案（word） 1一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1.假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell

2、 me about your dream job in the future? What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes, Bill要求：1.参考提示语，可适当发挥；2 .语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3 .文中不得出现你的任

3、何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4 .词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job.Yours, Li Hua【答案】 例文 Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students an

4、d help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter

5、a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job! Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。【详解】首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill 提出问题，结束全文。【点睛】本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter. 然后开始主要内容，运用多种连

6、接词，比如because， Besides， To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上 口，不失为一篇佳作。2. ( B)根据要求完成大作文,词数:80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports 的短文 ,应该包含以下要点:1 , 学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异.2 .多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己.3 .男孩参加各项体育运动,希望运动能使自己更强壮.4 .女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康,苗条 .5 .你对运动的观点.6 .注意:文中不得出现自己的名字和学校的

7、名字7 .短文开头已给出,不计入词数.8 .参考词语:keep slim (保持苗条)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports.【答案】Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But differentstudents have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have

8、sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to l

9、ose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【详解】本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括：1.提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确

10、运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 have fun, in order to , as for, in my opinion 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。3.书面表达共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的照妖镜"，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势1 .随处可见，出行方便2 .启益健康，减少污染3 .费用小局，负担得起存在

11、问题1 .未及时归还2 .占道挡路你的观点我认为（考生自拟，至少2点）注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中 你的观点”一栏用23句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since t

12、hey appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can

13、 afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can't return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it's a way of living a green life.【解析】这篇作文要求

14、我们给21 世纪英文报投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通 过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或 者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不 同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文 章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成

15、分，使整篇文 章意思连贯、表达流畅。 点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成 了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一 些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层 次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如They can be seen everywhere so that it's easy for us toget around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicyc

16、les not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What's more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it. 这几个长 句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如 Also, What' s more, But, sometimes, After al等 等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。4 自信赋予人力量，带给人快乐。拥有自信，人生处处是舞台，生活越来越精彩。假如你是李华，请你为校刊英语园地“自信

17、助我成长”专栏写一篇短文，谈谈自信的重要性，分享一次使你更加自信的经历，并说说我们如何更加自信。提示词语：powerful ， happy， believe in ， keep doing提示问题：Why is it important to be confident?What experience made you more confident?How can we become more confident?It's very important to be confident【答案】It s very important to be confident. Se-lfconfide

18、nce can bring us courage to stick towhat we do. So it s valuable to us.When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it for many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot thewords at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself

19、. You can t believe how happy I cwaallsedwthheen I respeech and finished it successfully.My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.To build confidence, firstly we need to clearly know about our own

20、 advantages and try to develop them. It is the most important that we should put in enough effort to what we do. Then we can finally make it and gain more confidence.【解析】本文内容应包含表格中所提供的所有信息。灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如a

21、t the beginning of ； know about ； make a speech 等； When ； Although ； Then ； From then on, 等的运用，使文 章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。5 环境保护人人有责，如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。提示词语：pollution, protect, save,

22、recycle, take action提示问题： What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in ourdaily life? What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many thing

23、s we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action

24、. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let s work together to make a better place to live.【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要把我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文点评：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人称来叙述为改善环境我们能做什么；时态采用的是一般现在时，描述建议时，描写具体，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语： save energy； brush our

25、teeth ； put it into different bins ； take action ； make a big difference 。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins ； Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference 。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表

26、达，例如save energy； brush our teeth ； put it into different bins ； takeaction; make a big difference。以及状语从句等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。6 4 月 23 日是 “世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是

27、李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示问题： What kind of books should we read? Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.So I m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students,

28、the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge an

29、d horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future.Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.So I m here again to call on all of us to read meorbooks and read good books.Li Hua题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一

30、般现在时，描述倡 议时，描写细致，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语： Firstly； Secondly； Finally； a good way to do sth ； broaden our knowledge andhorizon。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills ； reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future 。7 上周，你们班就初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行

31、了一次讨论。现在，请你根据下表用 英语写一篇介绍讨论情况的短文。注意：1.短文须包括写作提示和表格中所列的全部内容；2.时态运用正确，书写工整、规范； 3.80-100词。生词提示：electric adj.电讨论结果25人表小同思35人/、同意理由1.这样很方便；2.能节约上学 途中的时间。1.年龄太小，骑电动车不安全；2.早上交通拥挤，骑电动车也快不起来。【答案】 Last week, our class had a discussion about whether junior students could rideelectric bicycles to go toschool.25

32、students of our class agreed with it , because they said it was convenient for them and it could takethem less time to go to school. But the other 35 students didn' t agree with them. They said it wasnot safe forthe junior students to get to school by electric bicycles , for they were too young.

33、 They also saidin the morningthe traffic was busy and the students couldn' t ride electric bicycles quickly.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以初中生能否骑电动自行车上学进行了一次讨论。根据所给要点写一篇80-100词左右的英语短文，而且要做到表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。根据所给要点可知，本文主要以一般过去时态书写。要注意把每一个要点都表达出来，不要遗漏任何一个，书写时一定注意时态的正确使用。观点分明，谈及理由按照要求至少要各写两点。并注意上下文要语句贯通。并且要围绕主题适当发挥。写作

34、亮点：短文中作者按照题目的要求，给我们介绍了持不同观点的学生各自的理由，结 构清晰，要点全面。时态运用正确，书写工整规范。该文中以下几个句子用得很好。Because they said it was convenient for them and it could take them less time to go to school.They also said in the morningthe traf fic was busy and the students couldn' t ride electric bicyclesquickly.阐述各自观点时，理由也很充分。 考点：

35、提纲类作文。8 .请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋 友 Mary。TimeGood habitsBad habitsIn the morningGet up earlyEat junk food for breakfastIn classAsk some questionsQuarrel (争吵)with her classmates sometimesAfter schoolAlways exerciseGo home lateIn the eveningHelp her parents with houseworkWatch TV or

36、 play computer games for more than an hour要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。3、词数不少于60个英语单词。4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。【答案】 One possible version Dear Mary,I ' m very glad to introduce介绍) my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every mornin

37、g. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises (for a long time ) . After supper she helps her parents with housework. (She is really a good girl. ) But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her

38、classmates in class. She doesn ' t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening.(This makes her parents unhappy. ) I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl.Do you think so?YoursHuang Deshun【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。写作中注意将张颖的情况 介绍清楚。根据

39、材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth 高兴做某事；a lotof 许多； get up 起床等。本文中时间词如After supper ， Sometimes， in the evening 等的巧妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.考点：考查提纲类作文9 朋友是我们生活的组成部分，他们

40、总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们。你最好的朋友是谁？你是怎么看待你们的友谊的？请以 “My Best Friend为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。1. 简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;2. 介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事；3. 你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的要求：1. 语句连贯通顺，文章衔接紧密2. 词数 80-1003. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.【答案】My best friendFriends are very imp

41、ortant in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others

42、 at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn t help cryiJenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got anA in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【详解】试题分析：这是一个提纲作文。题目给出了标题及写作要点。根据题目要求可知，人称以第三人称为主。时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。我们要做的就是用正确的英语句子来组织这些材料，在描写外貌和性格时，会用到系表结构，注意主谓一致关系。介绍发生的一件难忘的事情，要用到一般过去时态。另外在写作时可以适当使用一些连词，使之上下连贯，合乎逻辑。【点睛】人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型。内容可以是介绍自己也可以介绍他人，包括姓名、年龄、外貌特征、兴趣爱好，有时也可以包括日常活动。时态为一般现在