公开课“概要写作”（课堂PPT）

1、1Summary2what the summary writing is the criteria of a good summaryhow to write a good summary1235After this class, I hope you will know:3普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明概要写作：概要写作：提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要。（满分25分）4评分原则评分原则本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分5Narration （记叙文）（记叙文）Exposition （说明文）（说明文）Forms of Literature

2、Argumentation (议论文）议论文）6Argumentation (议论文）议论文）TopicSupporting ideasConclusion7There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirtStep 1: Readtopic sentence: In what order does the passage develop to show the different “attitudes”? (para1)Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thin

3、g. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.8 (Para 2 )In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thoug

4、ht to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a noblema

5、n had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. (Para 3)Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is go

6、od to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War . Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. H

7、as the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? (Para 4)Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), e

8、ncourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.9There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirttopic sentence (in para1) supporting ideas (in para2-4)Find out the topic sentence of each paragraphthink, believe, consider, regar

9、d, argue, support, be convinced that, in ones opinion, from ones point of view10 Para 2: In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particul

10、ar danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon lear

11、ning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out. Examples of some European countries 11 (Para 3) Though the belief in the merit of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th

12、 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War . Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea; clothes need to be

13、whiter than white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far? 12 (Para 4) Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On

14、 the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter position is gaining some ground.13Step 2: Make an outline In the 16th centurysince18th centuryPeople thought that dirt on the skin was a means to b

15、lock out diseasehas no longer been regarded ascleaning away dirt is good to healthencourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system14 Step 3: Rewrite the sentences in other ways There is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.different, mixed, various反义转换opinions, views, idea

16、s同义词替换同义词替换 Peoples attitudes to dirt vary in different times. towards句型转换句型转换 People hold different opinions towards dirt over time. The attitudes to dirt is not always the same. 15 In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease. Have a try!16 In th

17、e early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease. think: believe, hold, consider, insist, argue, are convinced.同义词替换同义词替换block out disease: protect/keep away from illness; One possible version: In the 16th century, people believed that dirt protected people

18、 from getting ill. 17. dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health.wash off, get rid ofbenefits, is beneficial to, contributes toOne possible version: People began to change their attitudes to dirt abo

19、ut 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body is beneficial to our health.no longer been regardedbegin to change their attitudes toever since the 18th centuryabout 200years ago18 Nowadays, encourages people to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. One possible

20、 version:Nowadays, people are encouraged to be exposed to the dirt to improve our immune system.People are encouraged to语态转换语态转换be exposed to.improve/help ones immune systembuild up a strong immune system19 People hold mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. In the 16th century, people of some Euro

21、pean countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill. People began to change their attitudes to dirt more than 200 years ago. They have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. Nowadays, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.However,Nevertheless/But/howeverAdd two linking words to make the passage coherentStep 4: Make the summary coherent nowadays, 20Step 5: Revise( 67 words)People hold mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. In the 16th century, people of som