怎样给作文润色2014

1、高考英语科考试说明中第五档（2125分）的给分范围和要求 覆盖所有内容要点； 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇； 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力； 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 全、准、顺 、雅怎样给作文润色 合理的想象和发挥 选词特色 句式的多样 关联词的使用 1. 多实少虚多实少虚 :A A nicenice person person2. 短语优先：短语优先：I cannot bearbear it.We wantwant peace. generous, humorous, smart,

2、 gentle, warm-hearted, hospitable, considerate,promisingI cannot put up with it.We are looking forward to peace. 弃旧取新弃旧取新:There are many trees in the street.There are many trees in the street. There is a clean river in the city1. 1. 较高级词汇较高级词汇Many trees line the street.A clean river winds through th

3、e city.复杂多样的句式 复合句 倒装句 强调结构 非谓语 感叹句 虚拟语气 独立主格结构、反意问句、并列句、名言、警句等 丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises 1)(Exercises 1)1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.1. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用（使用V-ingV-ing形式）形式）. .2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.2. To his surprise, the

4、little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）（使用名词性从句）3. 3. He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (He came in and there was a baby in his arms. (用用withwith结构结构) ) , please give me an e-mail. is that the little girl knows so many things.On his arrivingWhat surprises himHe came in , with a baby in

5、 his arms.4.(4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟MaryMary联系联系)( )(用用非谓语）非谓语） 5. 5. He did not know what had happened until he had He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型) ) 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 6. Tom and

6、Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装）使用倒装）It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that ，he cant get in touch with Tom Not knowing his telephone number he knew what had happened.丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises 2)(Exercises 2)Tom likes singing songs, Mary.so does7. She walked out of the lab and many

7、 students 7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (followed her. (使用过去分词使用过去分词) )8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使（使用句型结构）用句型结构）9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to 9. Because the weather is fine, ma

8、ny people went to climb the Western Hills. climb the Western Hills. （使用独立主格结构）（使用独立主格结构） by many students, she walked out of the lab. , a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. he spoke, excited he felt.丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构(Exercises 3)(Exercises 3)FollowedThe more the moreThe weather bei

9、ng fine关联词的使用（1）表时间的. （2）表顺序及过程的：first(ly), first of all, second(ly), at first, then, next, at last, finally, etc. （3）表转折的：but, yet, and yet, instead, however, although, though, otherwise, or else, in spite of, etc.（4）表结果的：thus, therefore, so, as a result, seeing that, luckily, (un)fortunately, etc.

10、（5）表强调的：first of all, above all. indeed, surely, certainly, of course, after all, at least, at most, etc. 6) 表递进的：besides, whats more, in addition, even, once more, what was worse, to make things worse, etc.（7）表解释或说明的：in other words, that is, that is to say, namely, for example, actually, and so on, such as, personally, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, according to this, for this reason, etc.（8）表比较的：just like, just as, in the same way, more or less, on the contrary, on o