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1、大作文写作步骤:1 .看标题,找主语(数量,比例)数量: number, amount ( money, time)可数不可数比例: percentage, proportion, share2 . 看X-Y轴3 .找规律-反常interpret解释(分析数据) comments评论重要表达方式:1.图表类型graph图标,table表格,bar chart柱状图,pie chart饼状图3 / 92.图标指向3.4.The graph illustrates The bar chart shows data forIt can be clearly seen from the pie cha
2、rt that时间段over the past 5 yearsover this span of 28 yearsduring the period from March to Maythroughout the periodfor the rest of the period动词percentage 百分比,number 数量(amount )experience huge fall图表说明条形图显示的数据从饼图可以清楚地看到在过去5年在这28年的跨度在3月至5月期间整个期间在剩余的时间经历巨大的衰落巨大的:vast, massive, enormous, immense, tremendo
3、us意外发生会有something unexpectedoccurred There be Japan experienced a massive increase in car ownership in the 1930 s日本在20世纪30年代经历了汽车拥有量的大幅增长5. 变化趋势1) 增加/上升/提高逐渐上升迅速爬升rise gradually (rose)climb rapidly (climbed )go up significantly ( went up)显着上升rise slightly略有上升The number experienced slight rise.数字略有上升
4、。experience dramatic increase经验显着增加People holding a Bachelor s degre e only managed a moderate increase of $5 per week.持有学士学位的人只管理每周适度增加5 美元。2) 减少/下降drop slowly ( dropped)慢慢下降fall sharply ( fell )大幅下降go down by a big amount( went down )大量下跌diminish slightly ( diminished )略有减少gradual decline逐渐下降3) 保质
5、平稳/不变remain fairly constant / steady / stable / unchanged 保持相当稳定level off变得稳定change slightly轻微改变earnings amongst university在大学中的收入graduates remained fairly steady after 1985.毕业生在1985 年以后保持相对稳定。4) 起伏/波动There are minor(small) fluctuations between在 a向间有较/J、的波动rise and fallfluctuate slightly / dramatica
6、lly6. 比较 compared with和 相比in contrast to相比之下huge difference巨大的差异Between 1965 and 1985, there was significant(little) difference in the earnings between high school leavers and university graduates.In 1980, professionals with a Masters or a Doctoral degree earnedslightly more than those with a Bachel
7、or s degree.The biggest change occurred in the period from 1985 to 1995, when high school leavers enjoyed the greatest increase in earnings.During the same period, professionals with a Doctoral degree enjoyed the same average earnings as those who had done postdoctoral research.在 1965 年和 1985 年之间,高中
8、毕业生和大学毕业生的收入之间存在显着(小)的差异。1980 年,获得硕士或博士学位的毕业生的收入略高于那些具有学士学位的毕业生。最大的变化发生在1985年至1995年期间,当时高中毕业生的收入增长最大。在同一时期,具有博士学位 的专业人士享有与从事博士后研究的人相同的平均收入。7. 数值表达The rate of female smokers remained stable at 320 until 1994.女性吸烟者的比率在1994年之前保持稳定在320。The spending dropped by two thirds to 14% in 1996.1996年的支出下降了三分之二,达到
9、14%。8. 结论in conclusion结论是overall总的来说consequently因此 /所以It can be concluded that 可以得出结论:9. 结论分析While people s earnings increased according their level were far smaller than would be expected.然而人们的收入水平增加远远小于预期。What s more interesting, howeverjs that the increase in earnings amongst high school leavers
10、was far higher than the earnings for university graduates.更有趣的是,高中毕业生的收入增长远远高于大学毕业生。,at+静止数值(at 15%)-by+ 变化数值(by about 15%)费用,花费:cost, spending, expenditure, expense替换词组: 另夕卜: Moreover, Furthermore, What s more, In addition, 事实上:In effect, Indeed, In fact, 因止匕: Consequently (As a consequence) , Thus
11、, Therefore,然而:However,大作文框架:(150200词)总体描述 it can be clearly seen from the that 史 change during the period from 时间 i to 时间 2. Firstly, we can easily find that细节描述.起点解释一 What more,细节描述.变化规律一 In fact,变化规律. 变化规律二Moreover,变化规律.反常现象一 However, what surprises us mos is that反常细节.反常现象一 Interestingly,反常细节.The
12、re are several factors that may account for such change规律原因反常原因First of all, an evident reason lies in the fact that 规律原因. However,反常原因.table表格/ bar chart柱状图/ line chart 曲线图 饼状图第一句:It can be clearly seen from the pie chart that 主题 massively vary based on the pie chart.从饼状图中可以清楚地看出,主 题基于饼图大量地变化。Thus,
13、 Given the analysis above,it can be concluded that 芭论.建仅 Therefore, it is fairly reasonable and wise tha犍议.仅一 In addition, another suggestion is that建议.从图表类型中可以清楚地看出,主题在时间1到时间2期间发生了变化。首先,我们很容易发现,细节描述。此外,细节描述。实际上,变化规律。此外,变化规律。然而,令我们最惊 讶的是,反常细节。有趣的是,反常细节。有几个原因可以解释这种变化。首先,一个明显的原因是,规律原因。然而,反常原因。因此,根据上述分
14、析,可以得出结论,缜渔。因此,建议是相当合理和明智的。另外,另一个建议是建议。5 / 9No.1大学生时间分配变化表Academic worksSportsUnion activities大一50%15%35%大二55%15%30%大三95%2%3%总体解释 ,.L(主语).L . . .It can be clearly seen from the table that time using proportions of college students change during the period from 1st yearto 3rd year.起点解释一 In the beginn
15、ing year of study, college students spent exactly half of their time doing academic works.起点解释一 And time for union activities ranked 2nd (at 15%) and sports time least.文化规律 Then the three shares remained fairly constant during the 2d year.反吊现象 However, what surprises us most is that , during the 3d
16、year, the percentage of time for academic works rose dramatically to 95%, whereas time for the remaining two categories fell(shrunk) sharply to 2% and 3%.从表中可以清楚地看出,大学生的时间使用比例 在第一年到第三年期间发生了变化。在学习的初期,大学生花费了一半的时间做学术工作。而社团活动的时间排名第二(15%),体育时间最少。然后三个分配在第二年保持相当稳定。然而,令我们最惊讶的是, 在第三年,学术工作的时间百分比大幅上升到95%,然而其余两
17、个类别的时间大幅下降(缩小)到 2%和3%。There are several factors that may account for such changes. Firstly, it is natural for college students to use most of their time, no less than half, to do academic works. Moreover, during the first two years, sports and union activities are both essential for physical and spi
18、ritualhealth. In effect, spending almost all of their time on studiemust result from the fact that junior,1, _,一.(现在完成进行时)students have been preparingfor graduate entrance examination.有几个原因可以解释这种变化。首先,大学生自然而然地使用他们大部分的时间,不少于一半,做学术工作。此外,在头两年,体育和社团活动对身体和精神健康至关重要。实际上,花费几乎所有的时 间在学习上一定是因为 大三学生已经准备毕业考试。. .
19、(主语)r I. Given the analysis above, it can be concluded that time allocation of college students massively varies in different stages of enrollment. It is fairly reasonable and wise that, while the largest time share should be utilized for academic improvement, college studentshould not ignore the es
20、sential benefits provided by sports.根据上述分析,可以得出结论,|大学生的时间分配 在不同的入学阶段大不相同。这是相当合理和明 智的,虽然最大的时间分配应该用于改善学习,大学生不应忽视 体育的基本好处。中国居民交通工具使用变化表自行车私家*公交车198070%0%30%199530%25%45%201035%45%20%心 It can be clearly seen from the table that the percentages of traffic tools of China residentschange during the period
21、from 1980 to 2010.起点解释一 Firstly, we can easily find that in 1980 the cyclists (the proportion of bicycle rideraccounted for the largest share, which was 70%.起点解释一 Moreover, there was exactly no one owning a private car at that timie.化规律 In effect, the percentagesof private car owners rose gradually
22、throughout the period.反吊现象 However, what surprises us most is that the proportions of cyclists dropped dramatically from 70% to 30% before they climbed slightly to 35%.反常现象一 Interestingly, the share of bus takers just experienced opposite route(direction).从麦中可以清楚地看出,|中国居民的交通工具的百分比 在1980年到2010年期间发生了变
23、化。首先,我们很容易发现,1980年骑自行车的人占了最大的份额,为70%。此外,当时没有人拥有私家车。实际上,私家车拥有者的百分比在整个期间逐渐上升。然而,令我们最惊讶的是,骑自行车的比例从 70%急剧下降到30%,然后略微上升到 35%。有趣的是,乘坐巴士的人的份额恰好经历了相反的路径(方向)。There are several factors that may account for such change.规律原因 First of al l, an evident reason lies in the fact that when the economy has advanced to
24、 a high degree, urban residents must tend to consider private car as the most efficient traffic tool. 反吊原因 However, the modern citizen always take bicycle as their primary means either to safeguard the negative impact of climate change or improve the physical condition.结沱 Thus, it can be concluded t
25、hat buses as an economical means of travel will never vanish.建仅 Therefore, it is fairly reasonable and wise that urban dwellers should utilize bicycles as frequently as possible. In addition, another suggestion is that 有几个原因可以解释这种变化。首先,一个明显的原因是,当经济发展程度很高时,城市居民必须倾向于将私家车视为最有效的交通工具。然而,现代市民总是把自行车作为主要手段,
26、以保护气候变化的负面影响或改善身体状况。 因此,可以得出结论,公共汽车作为经济出行的手段将永远不会消失。因此,城市居民应该尽可能频繁地使用自行车是相当合理和明智的。另外,另一个建议是我国居民年医疗开支和收入变化表(单位:万元)心 i It can be clearly seen from the bar chart that the medical cost and total income of China s residenChange during the period from 1985 to 2015.起点解释 Firstly, we can easily find that bot
27、h medical spending and whole income accounted for the smallest share throughout the period.变化规律 In effect, there was enormous difference between the medical expense and total income. Moreover, both data rose steadily from 1985 to 2005.反吊现象 However, what surprises us most is that the total income fel
28、l slight from 2005 to 2015.反常现象一 Interestingly, medical expenditure shrunk significantly during that period.从条形图可以清楚地看出,中国居民的医疗费用和总收入 在1985年到|2015年期间发生了变化。首先,我们可以很容易发现,医疗开支和整体收入在整个期间占比最小。实际上,医疗开支和总收入之间存在巨大差异。 此外,这两个数据从1985年到2005年稳步上升。然而,令我们最惊讶的是,总收入在2005年到2015年期间略有下降。有趣的是,医疗费用在这一时期显着缩水。There are sev
29、eral reasons that may account for such change.规律原因 Firstly, when economy has advanced to a high degree, China s resident can afford more advanced medical c which must be based on higher cost, positively correlated to growing income.反吊原因 However, slightly decreased income may lead medical consumers t
30、o cut off their expense mostly due to the panic caused and the loss of sense of security.有几个原因可能导致这种变化。首先,当经济发展程度很高时,中国居民能够负担更高级的医疗服 务,这必须基于更高的成本,与收入的增长呈正相关。然而,稍微减少的收入可能导致医疗消费者切断 其费用,主要是由于恐慌和失去安全感造成的。销售量第一季度第二季度 I第三季度第四季度总体解释 It can be clearly seen from the pie chart that the sales volumevaries correspondingI _ , rr _ _ I |_ 起点解释一to different stage of a whole year.Firstly, we can easily find that the data of the 4thMoreover, it is interesting thatquarter accounted for the smallest
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