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1、互动问题互动问题1.你是如何考虑结合上节的阅读课服务于本节写你是如何考虑结合上节的阅读课服务于本节写作课的？作课的？2.你本课的设计是如何体现你本课的设计是如何体现“过程教学法过程教学法”的优的优势的？势的？3.在本课的阅读和写作过程中，结合了大量的词在本课的阅读和写作过程中，结合了大量的词块的操练和教学是出于什么目的？块的操练和教学是出于什么目的？4.在写作前小组合作制作概念图的用意是什么？在写作前小组合作制作概念图的用意是什么？5.在写作后的评价阶段，你作了哪些尝试，觉得在写作后的评价阶段，你作了哪些尝试，觉得效果如何？效果如何？9B U2 Life in the future (Writ

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