考点5短文改错

1、考点5短文改错（2019 全国卷I ）I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident.One afternoon where I was in primary schoolwas walking by the school playground.Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me.I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground.To everyo

2、ne ' surprising,the ball went into the net.All the football player on the playground cheered loudly,say that I had a talent for football.From now on,I started to play my football with classmates after school.I am a good player now.【文章大意】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了由于一次偶然的经历 ，自己喜欢上了 踢足球,从此成了一名优秀球员。【答案】I became

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4、isinghe ball went hardsurpriseinto the net. All the football on the playground cheered loudIv.savthatl had a talent for football.From playerssayingnow onj started to play football with classmates dfte schoolarn a good player now. then1 .【解析】第一句 interesting 改为 interested 考查习，惯搭配。become interested in表

5、示对感兴趣”。【易错误区】interested还是interesting interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物;interested俵现出兴趣的）常修饰人。2 .【解析】第二句where改为when。考查定语从句。先行词afternoon表示时间， 且关系词在定语从句中作状语,故用关系副词when。3 .【解析】第三句Suddenly后加a。考查冠词。football为可数名词且是第一次 提到,故用不定冠词a。4 .【解析】第三句but改为and。考查连词。此处不是转折关系而是顺承关系，故 用 and。5 .【解析】第四句hardly改为hard。考查副t辨析。 hardly表示几乎

6、不"，hard 表示努力地用力地”。结合句意可知，把hardly改为hard。6 .【解析】 第五句 surprising改为 surprise 考查固定搭配。to one ' s surprs示“令人惊讶的是”。7 .【解析】第六句player改为players。考查名t的数。player为可数名词 淇前 有 all 修饰,故用复数形式。8 .【解析】第六句say改为saying。考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知，say在这里为非谓语动词,且与其逻辑主语为逻辑上的主谓关系,故用现在分词。9 .【解析】第七句now改为then。考查固定搭配。from now on表示 从现在起“

7、，from then on表示从那时起”结合句意可知，把now改为then。10 .【解析】第七句去掉play后的my。考查习惯用法。play football表示 踢足球”， 为习惯用法，football前不加代词。故将my去掉。（2019 全国卷H ）Since I was a kid,I ve considered different job I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform looked so coolly.Then,when I was in the five grade,I wanted

8、to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.When I studiedchemistry high schoolreconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.And the oth

9、er is that I wanted to help people in need.【文章大意】本文叙述了我期望的未来的职业。【答案】Since I was a kidj' ve cons id ered different Job I would like to doJirst.l wanted to be a fireman,whose jobsuniform looked s coolly.Then,when I was inthefiveRrade.l wanted to be 日 te曰匚卜曰because I liked my English coolfifthteach

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11、hat I wanted to help people in need.was1 .【解析】第一句中的jobjobs job为可数名词，根据前面的形容词different可 知要用复数形式。2 .【解析】第二句中的coolly cool根据前面的系动词looked可知需用形容词 作表语。3 .【解析】第三句中的five -fifth根据句意 在我上五年级的时候，我想当一名 老师，因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师。”可知要用序数词，故改为fifth。4 .【解析】第三句中的toovery/so结合句意可知副词要用非常”故用very或so修饰much。而too much强调 太多”之意。5 .【解析】第

12、四句中high school前加at/in。根据语境在中学”可知需加上介词 at或者in。6 .【解析】第四句中的or-and根据句意 我重新考虑了一下我的目标，决定成 为一名医生”可知两个动作之间为顺承关系而不是选择关系,故改为并列连词and。7 .【解析】第五句中的TheyThere根据句意我的决定有两个原因”可知本句 使用 there be.句型。.8 .【解析】第六句中的amazing amazed说明主语人的状态要用v-ed形式。修 饰物的时候通常用v.-ing 形式。9 .【解析】第六句中去掉more。修饰比较级better用副词much不可以用more。10 .【解析】第七句中的

13、is-was结合整篇短文的时态可知讲述的都是过去的事 情 ,故改为一般过去时。（2019全国卷出）I v e had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as

14、like “ TangDynasty ” .Itnhe cafe,customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style. 【文章大意】本文为说明文,主要

15、讲述了“我 ”的梦想。【答案】If ve hed many dreams since I was s child.Now my drearn is to opens a cafe.The ugh it may appear simplestopenmuied a lot of ideas and efforts .What I wa nt is not just an 01rdi nailv cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe requiresordinaryA have a special theme such aslik wTang Dyn

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17、解析】第二句opens改为open。考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知 is后 面为表语，作表语成分应该用to do不定式或者动名词形式，已经有不定式符号to, 故将 opens改为 open。2 .【解析】第三句required改为requires考查时态。根据整篇文章的主要时态 为一般现在时可知，此句中也应该用一般现在时，故将required改为requires3 .【解析】第四句ordinarily改为ordinary。考查形容词。形容词修饰名词，根据 cafe为名词可知，此处应用形容词修饰名词，故将ordinarily改为ordinary。4 .【解析】第五句cafe后加to。考查固定搭

18、配。want sb./ sth.to do sth为固定搭配， 表示 想让某人/某物做某事”故在cafe后加to。5 .【解析】第五句去掉like。考查介词。such as与like都有 像”的含义，表示举例 说明,它们不能连在一起用，故去掉like。6 .【解析】第六句yourselves改为themselves考查代词。句子主语为customers, 所以作宾语的反身代词形式为第三人称复数的反身代词形式，将yourselves改为 themselves7 .【解析】第六句what改为that/whicho考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知.is created for them 为定语从句，修饰先行词 th