高中英语作文技巧讲义高考作文通关

1、.高考作文通关书面表达的五个步骤：1.仔细审题4确定1体裁格式_2题材内容_3中心人称_ 4主体时态_假设你是卜曼宜，你购置了一部某外国公司消费的手机。因有质量问题,要求该公司更换。请根据以下要点, 用英文写一封电子邮件.1.问题：手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修.2.要求：公司应尽快予以更换.注意:1.词数为100左右;2. 参考词汇: 配件spare partThink about?The style:The main idea:Person:Tense:The style: expositionThe main idea: Present the

2、problems with the phone and ask for a changePerson: the first personTense: the present tense 描绘详细经历时那么要用一般过去时2. 提炼要点，确定重点词汇要点：三大问题+一个要求Point 1： not ring; send messagesPoint 2：sold out; changefor 或exchangefor 或replacewithPoint 3：model; no spare parts; repair/fix/maintain Point 4：require/request sb. t

3、o do sth 或demand of sb. to do sth.3. 连词成句1.手机不响铃,不能发短信 It doesnt ring . It doesnt send short messages.2.该产品已售完,无法更换 The model has been sold out . They cant change a new one for me.3.型号新,无配件,无法维修 It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 4.要求公司应尽快予以更换 I dem

4、and of /require/request your company to change a new one for me as soon as possible.4. 组句成篇1适当添加信息点，使文意通顺连接2巧妙使用连接词，使文章构造紧凑3灵敏运用好句式，使文章文采飞扬 （1） 适当添加信息点思路一： 串故事，按事情开展的先后顺序表达要点。增加的信息点多为时间词。思路二： 纯粹“诉说问题，按要点间的内在关系组织文章。增加的信息点多为逻辑关系词。（2） 巧妙使用连接词思路一：Ten days after that/ Several days ago, Then, Later思路二：To

5、begin with , Besides/ Apart from that/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/ Whats worse/ Even worse/ Worse still/ To make matters worse / As a result/ Therefore（3） 灵敏运用好句式方法一: 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档方法二: 巧用倒装构造增强句子的表现力方法三: 尝试多样化表达方式，如：1.感慨句 2.强调句 3.with短语 4.定语从句 5.各种名词性从句 6.各种状语从句 1. 手机不响铃,不能发短信整合

6、前： It doesn't ring . It doesn't send short messages. 整合后：a. It can't ring or send short messages.b. It doesn't ring at all and meanwhile it doesn't send short messages. 并列句c. It can neither ring nor send short messages.d. Not only does it fail to ring, but also it can't send

7、a message. 倒装句句式e.The mobile phone can't ring, nor can it send messages.同上2.该产品已售完,无法更换整合前：The model has been sold out . They can't change a new one for me.整合后：a.The new model has been sold out so that they can't change a new one for me .结果状语从句b. The model has been sold out,as a conseque

8、nce, it's impossible for them to change a new one for me.It作形式主语c. The model has been sold out, which makes it impossible for me to have a new one. 非限制性定语从句d. The fact that the model has been sold out makes me unable to change it.主语从句e. This kind of phones has been sold out. Therefore, I have no

9、 approaches to exchanging the phone for a new one. 副词3.型号新,无配件,无法维修整合前： It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. 整合后：a.Since it's a new model and there're no spare parts,I can't get it repaired .原因状语从句b.So new is its type without any spare par

10、ts that I can't get it repaired.倒装句c.With its new type and no spare parts left, I find it hard to have it repaired.with构造d.Due to its new model with no spare parts,I have no access to its repair.介短4.要求公司应尽快予以更换整合前：I require/request your company to change a new one for me as soon as possible.整合后：

11、a. To conclude, I demand/require that your company should have my phone changed as soon as possible.宾语从句和虚拟语气b. Id really appreciate it if you could replace it soon.代词itc. All that I request of your company is that you should get my phone changed as soon as possible.定语从句和表语从句d. I hope that my requir

12、ement that you should change a new phone of the same model for me can be satisfied as soon as possible. 宾语从句、同位语从句、虚拟语气及被动语态5. 检查誊写仔细誊写，保证字迹工整，卷面整洁。Possible version1Dear Sir, Ten days after that, it didnt ring or send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been

13、 sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new-model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a

14、new one of the same model within a month. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, XXX Possible version2 What bothers me is the quality of the mobile phone. The problems are as follows: To start with, not only does it fail to ring but also it cant send a message. Besides, this kind of phon

15、es sell so well that none can be found at the market. As a result, I cant change my phone for a new one. What's worse, there being such a new product, the spare parts of the phone are not available at the moment. As a consequence, its impossible to get it changed. As is known to all, the service

16、 of your company has been praised by many guests and I hope that your company can get my phone changed as soon as possible.Yours sincerely, XXX 英语高考作文模板背诵一、比照观点题型 1要求阐述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1有一些人认为 2另一些人认为 3我的看法 The topic of _主题is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions a

17、bout it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of _.支持A的理由一What is more, _ 理由二.Moreover, _ 理由三. While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly, _ 支持B的理由一. Secondly /Besides, _理由二. Thirdly/ Finally, _ 理由三. From my point of view,

18、I think _我的观点. The reason is that _ 原因. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . 2给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that _观点一. For example, they think _举例说明And it will bring them _为他们带来的好处. In my opinion, I never think t

19、his reason can be the point. For one thing, _ 我不同意该看法的理由一. For another thing, _反对的理由之二 Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that _我对文章所讨论主题的看法 二、阐述主题题型 1. 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进展阐述 2. 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义 3. 分析并举例使其更充实 The good old proverb _名言或谚语reminds us that _ 释义. Indeed, we can learn many

20、things form it. First of all, _ 理由一. For example, _举例说明.Secondly, _ 理由二. Another case is that _举例说明. Furthermore , _ 理由三 In my opinion, _ 我的观点. In short, whatever you do, please remember the say_名言或谚语. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you'll necessarily benefit a lot from

21、 it.三、解决方法题型 1. 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 2. 问题现状 3. 怎样解决解决方案的优缺点 In recent days, we have to face I problem_A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, _ 说明的现状Second, _ 举例进一步说明现状 Confronted/Faced with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _ 解决方法一.

22、For another _解决方法二. Finally, _ 解决方法三. Personally, I believe that _ 我的解决方法. Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because _ 带来的好处.四、说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再比照事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度利或弊出发，最后往往要求考生说明自己的态度或对事物前景提出预测 1. 说明事物现状 2. 事物本身的优缺点或一方面 3. 你对现状或前景的看法 Nowadays many people prefer

23、A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First _ 的优点之一. Besides_的优点之二. But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that _ 的第一个缺点To make matters worse, _ 的第二个缺点 Through the

24、above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to _ 我的看法 From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, _ 对前景的预测五、议论文的框架

25、 1 不同观点列举型 选择型 There is a widespread concern over the issue that _作文题目. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 观点一 . In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,

26、 原因一 .Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二 . So it goes without saying that 观点一 .People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that 观点二 . In their point of view, on the one hand， 原因一 . On the other hand, 原因二 . Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二 . As far as I

27、 am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二 .It is not only because _, but also because _. The more _, the more _. 2利弊型的议论文 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目 . In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题 . Generally speaking, it is widely belie

28、ved there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, 优点一 .And secondly 优点二 . Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", 讨论议题 is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一 . In addition, 缺点二 . To sum up, we should try to bring

29、the advantages of 讨论议题 into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题 3答题性议论文 Currently, there is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目 . It is really an important concern to every one of us. As a r

30、esult, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, 途径一 . In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is 途径二 . Above all, to solve the problem of 作文题目 , we

31、 should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, 方法 4 谚语警句性议论文 It is well know to us that the proverb: " _谚语 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means _谚语的含义_. Th

32、e saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. also theoretically A case in point is _例子一_. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb _谚语_.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: _谚语_. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in ou