北京市高考英语二轮复习专题精讲第20讲书面表达二1(上)(一)

1、第20讲书面表达二经典精讲（上）请根据下面所示内容，用英语写一篇短文，比较高中学生“减负”前后的有关情况。1本现在（减负前）（“减负”后）.作业时间其它 时间课棠 时间1 .短文须包括所有图表内容，可以适当增加细节，使短文连贯;2 .词数为100个左右。题二:假设你是李华.你将代表学校参加国际中学生论坛，就你所在城市的教育状况发表演讲。请根据以下两幅图表，介绍你市高中学生构成情况及毕业去向的选择，并针对两幅图表中的任何一个数据所反映的情况发表你自己的看法。汪息:1 .文章开头和结尾已经给出（见答卷）2 .词数120左右（不包括已给部分）3.参考词汇：图表： chart职业学校：vocation

2、al school外来务工人员：non-localworkers高中学生构成图91餐高中学生毕业去向选择困大学职校出国留学Ladiesandgentlemen,ImLiHua.Today,Imgreatlyhonoredtospeakhereonbehalfofmyschool.Imgoingtotalkaboutthehighschooleducationofmycity.Ibelievethefutureofeducationinourcityispromising!Thatsall.Thankyou.题三：根据下列图示，以TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”为题

3、，为某一中学英语报写一篇短文，说明你校目前新课改中的这一举措以及你对学校实施这一举措的认识。要求：词数120字左右，开头已为你写好，不计人总词数参考词汇：评分体制gradingsystem tests notes homework classparticipation teamwork题四:汪息:2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图( pie chart )所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。1.对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯2.词数150左右，开头已给出，

4、不计入总词数。3.植入广告：product placementThe 2010 Spring Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes.题五：下图是你校学生会在全校同学中就北京奥运会给你留下最深刻印象是什么这一问题的调查结果。请根据此图写一篇短文，客观描述调查结果并发表个人观点。注意：1、短文必须包括图表的所有内容，可适当发挥；2、短文开头已为你写

5、好，不记入总词数；3、词数：100左右。成功的组织工作3.5%中国运动员的出色表现题六:卜面的图表显示了某校高三学生周末放假的学习生活情况。Waystospendtheweekend户外运动15%回家休息60%在校学习25%根据上图信息，请以Waystospendtheweekend”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下：1.简要描述图中的信息；2.说明原因（为了高效学习；锻炼身体；争分夺秒）；3.谈谈你的看法。注意：文章标题和开头已给出（不计词数）WaystoSpendtheWeekendAscanbeseenfromthechart,题七：最近，你班同学就“父母是不是最好的老

6、师”这一话题展开讨论，有些人认为父母是最好的老师，有些人认为也不尽然。请根据下表提示，介绍讨论结果以及你的个人观点。观点原因同意不完全同意1教会如何生活过分溺爱2指出缺点，指明方向强加兴趣、价值观3教会富后爱心希望值过高要求：1、根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文通顺连贯。2、词数：100词左右。3、开头已给出，不计人单词总数。Recently,wehavehadadiscussioninourclassaboutwhetherparentsareourbestteachers.Somestudents题八：最近国家教育部门就“是否取消中学文理分科”面向全国征求意见。下面是腾讯网就“中学文理是

7、否应该分科”这以话题进行调查的结果。网友观点投票数百分比理由应该分科17279348.48%中学生负担太重现代社会更需要专业人才/、应该分科18359351.52%分科不利于人的全面发展分科导致全民整体素质下降请你结合上表，写一篇英语短文，并谈谈自己的看法。注意：1.词数120左右；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。题九：假期将至，据一份网上调查，显示出了学生、家长对于补课的不同观点。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。假期补课调查表学生观点60%、同意40%W意理由疲惫；应给予时间空间放松、调节能多学点东西豕长观点同意但收费过高理由有人看着安全，补了总比不补好，多少学点要求：1.字数：120词左右；

8、2.必须谈出自己的看法。参考词汇：extralessonsn.补课relaxv.放松题十：假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该偏难还是该偏易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。赞成偏难，反对偏易赞成偏易，反对偏难1 .喜欢挑战，越难越好；2 .有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，改进学习方法。1 .题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考；2 .题目容易，易得高分、获自信。注意：1.词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。RecentlyIhavemadeaninvestigationonwhet

9、heramodel-testpaperforSeniorThreeshouldbedifficultoreasy.Opinionsaredividedonthismatter.题十一：同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况并发表自己的感想。一些同学认为另一些同学认为1 .应从儿童时期开始学习英语2 .儿童时期记忆力好，可以记住很多单词3 .能为以后的英语学习打卜坚实的基础1 .不应从儿童时期开始学习英语2 .儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语，易混淆3 .会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习讨论未取得一致意见参考词汇

10、：为打下坚实基础一layasolidfoundationfor汉语拼音一Chinesepinyin题十二：随着高考的临近，部分住校生要求搬出学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子住。请你根据下表7提供的内容，写一篇英语短文，阐述学生和家长的观点，并表达自己的看法。高二部分住校生搬离学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子住多数学生宿舍吵闹，影响学习和休息熄灯制度限定了学习时间许多家长提供好的学习环境方便照顾饮食起居你的看法注意：1.陈述所有要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数120-150（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。3. 参考词汇：熄灯制度-blackoutruleWiththecollegeentrancee

11、xaminationapproachingdaybyday,someSeniorThreestudentsaremovingoutfromtheirdormsandlivinginarentedapartmentneartheirschools.第20讲书面表达二经典精讲（上）题一：Inthepast,seniormiddleschoolstudentswereheavilyburdenedwithallkindsofhomework.Becauseofvariousexaminations,theyspentabout6.5hoursintheirclassroomaday.Athome,a

12、bout3.5hourswasspentontheirhomeworkandthereforemostofthemgotlessthansevenhourssleepanight,withonlyaboutthreehoursfreetimeforotherthings.Asaresult,theirhealthwasbadlydamaged.Nowthingsaregettingbetter.Aboutfivehoursisspentinclassandhoursforhomeworkisshortenedtoabouttwosothattheycanhavetwomorehoursslee

13、pandalsotwomorehoursfreetimetodowhatevertheylike.点评：本文根据这两个柱状图把高中学生“减负”前后情况准确地表达了出来；本文使用了一些高级短语、宾语从句、状语从句和过渡词。题二：Ladiesandgentlemen:ImLiHua.Today,Imgreatlyhonoredtospeakhereonbehalfofmyschool.Imgoingtotalkaboutthehighschooleducationofmycity.FromChart1,wecanseehighschoolstudentsarefromdifferentfamily

14、backgrounds.Besideslocalstudents,whomakeup91percent,eightpercentofthestudentsarethechildrenofnon-localworkers.Thereareeven1percentforeignstudents.Accordingtochart2,thestudentschoicesaftergraduationhavepresentedawidervariety.Sixtypercentofthemintendtogotouniversity.Thirtypercentchoosetoentervocationa

15、lschools,andtheresttenpercentplantogoabroadforfurtherstudies.（1）Ithinkwehavemorefreedomtochoosewhatwewouldliketodoaftergraduation.Goingtocollegeisnolongertheonlychoiceformostofusasitwasyearsago.OR（:2）Ithinkourcitygovernmenthasmademoreeffortstohelpthenon-localworkers.Forexample,theirchildrencanenjoyt

16、heequalrightofagoodeducationwiththecitystudents.OR:（3）Ithinkwiththeeconomicdevelopmentofourcity,moreforeignersareattractedtosetupbusinesseshereandtheyarehappytosendtheirchildrentolocalschoolstolearnmoreaboutChinaandChineseculture.Ibelievethefutureoftheeducationinourcityispromising!Thatsall.Thankyou.

17、点评：作者准确地把两幅图表所反映的高中学生构成情况及毕业去向的选择表达出来，并针对两幅图表中的任何一个数据所反映的情况发表了自己的看法；作者使用了宾语从句和一些高级词汇短语。题三：TheNewgradingsysteminOurSchoolInordertohelpstudentsdeveloptheirabilitiesinallfields,ourschoolnowhasaskedtheteacherstomakesomechangesinthegradingsystem.Thischartshowshowitworks.Thestudentsfinalscorewillbemadeupo

18、f5parts.About30%ofitwillcomefromtheirtestresults.Therestofthescoreisdecidedbytheperformancesofthestudentsinthefollowingparts:20%comesfromyournotes,andanother20%isdecidedbyhowyoudoyourhomework.Ifyoutakeanactivepartinclassroomactivities,youcangetanother20%ofthescore.Teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyo

19、uwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.Inmyopinion,ourschoolhasmadeagooddecision.Tobeginwith,thisnewgradingsystemhaschangedthewaythestudentsperformancesinschoolonlydependedupontheirtestresults.Secondly,itwillcertainlyhelptoimproveourselvesinmanyways.点评：作者把图表所反映的学校新的评分体系

20、准确地表达出来并发表了自己的看法；作者使用了使用状语从句、定语从句、不定式、被动语态、高级短语和过渡词。题四：The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.Asisshowninthepiechart,20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkitacceptable,fortheproductplacementappearsintheprogrammes

21、naturally.And15%ofthemconsideritnecessaryforCCTVtomakemoneyfromproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentofCCTVitself.However,amongthepeoplesurveyed,morethanonethirdofthemcomplainthattheproductplacementhasnothingtodowiththeprogrammes.25%ofthemevenfeelhurtseeingsomuchofit.Furthermore,ther

22、est10%holdtheviewthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.Fromthechartwecandrawaconclusionthatmostofthepeoplesurveyedareagainstproductplacementintheprogrammes.Inmyopinion,productplacementnowadaysisalmostunavoidable,butitshouldnotdamagetheartoftheshowandshouldtaketheaudiencesfeelingsintoaccount.点评：能够

23、把饼状图中“人们对今年春晚植入广告的态度”准确地表达出来；文中使用了定语从句、同位语从句、并列句，使得文章具有更强的表达力；此外，本文还多处使用过渡词，使上下文衔接紧密。题五：Recently,asurveyhasbeendonebyourschoolStudentsUniontofindoutwhatimpressedthestudentsmostabouttheBeijingOlympicGames.Theresultsareshownbelow.Morethanhalfofthestudents,tobeexact,60.4%,aredeeplyimpressedbytheexcelle

24、ntperformancesofChineseAthletes.Ontheotherhand,26.1%ofthestudentscantforgetthegrandandfantasticOpeningCeremony,whichalmostdoublesthenumberofthosewhothinkthesuccessfulorganizationoftheBeijingOlympichasimpressedthemthemost.Inmyopinion,theBeijingOlympichasbeenasuccessfuloneineveryaspect,includingtheper

25、formanceoftheChineseathletes,theOpeningCeremonyandtheorganization.点评：作者把图表中所反映的学生对北京奥运会最深的印象准确地表达了出来并发表了自己的看法；作者使用了定语从句、过渡词和插入语。题六：WaystoSpendtheWeekendAscanbeseenfromthechart,seniorthreestudentshavedifferentwaystospendtheirweekends.Goingbackhomeandhavingagoodrestiswhatmoststudentswouldliketodo,whil

26、e25%studentschoosetostudyatschoolduringweekends.Thefeweststudents,accountingfor15%,takeoutdooractivitiestospendtheirweekends.Variousreasonsareresponsiblefortheirdifferentchoices.Thosewhochoosetogobackhomebelievethatagoodrestdoeshelpthemrelaxandworkmoreefficientlyduringtheschooltime.Outdoor-activityl

27、oversholdtheopinionthattakingexerciseisawonderfulwaytorefreshthemselves.However,asmallnumberofstudentslivingfarawayfromhometendtostayatschooltosaveeveryminutetostudy.Personally,despitetheheavystudypressure,seniorthreeyeardoesntnecessarilymeanstudyingallthetime.Sometimesagoodrestandproperexercisecanb

28、eofvitalimportance.点评：作者把图表中所反映的度过周末的方式准确地表达了出来并分析的原因和发表了自己的看法；作者使用了名词性从句、定语从句、非谓语动词、高级词汇短语和过渡词。题七：Recently,wehavehadadiscussioninourclassaboutwhetherparentsareourbestteachers.Somestudentsagreetothepointbecausetheythinkparentshelptopointouttheirmistakesintheirlives.Theyteachthemalotabouthowtoliveame

29、aningfullife.Whatsmore,parentslovehelpstoteachthemhowtoloveothers,Soparentsaretheirmostimportantteachers.However,notallofusholdtheviews,Somethinkthattheirparentsgivethemtoomuchlove,andtheyaretooeagertopassontheirvaluesandintereststothem.Moreover,theirparentssometimesexpecttoomuchofthem,whichmakesthe

30、mfeeltheirgoalstoodifficulttoreach.Inmyopinion,parentsareourimportantteachers,Butparentsshouldalsotrytounderstandtheirchildrenmoreandlimitthegenerationgap.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了同位语从句、宾语从句、状语从句和过渡词。题八：0nepossibleversion:Recently,theTencentWebsitelaunchedanonlinesurveyonthetopicwhetherscie

31、nceandartsshouldbeseparated.Accordingtothesurvey,about48percentofthepeopleareinfavourofthepracticeofseparatingscienceandartseducation.Theythink,foronething,highschoolstudentstodayaresufferingfromaheavylearningload;foranother,whatthemodernsocietyneedsaremoreprofessionalsinvariousfieldswhilemorethanpe

32、rcentofthenetizensdontthinkso.Theybelievethatthepracticeofseparationgoesagainstapersonsall-rounddevelopmentanditleadstothefallingofoverallqualityoftheentirenation.Inmyopinion,scienceandartseducationareofequalimportanceandneithershouldbeignored.Eventhoughthepracticeofseparationisacceptable,astudentsh

33、ouldntabandoneitherscienceorartseducationcompletely.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了名词性从句、状语从句和过渡词。题九：60percentofthestudentsareagainstgivingextralessonsduringvacation.Theythinktheyshouldbegivenenoughtimeandfreedomtodeveloptheirowninterestsandenjoysomeoutdooractivitiestorelaxandprepareforabettersta

34、rt.However,theothersabout40percentareinfavorofitandtheywanttolearnsomethingmoreduringthisperiodoftime.Comparedwiththeviewsoftheirchildren,parentsagreetoit,thoughtheycomplainaboutthehighpricetheyhavetopay.Theythinkhavingsomeonetakecareoftheirchildrenisbetterthanleavingthemabout,andthatstudentscangets

35、omethingoutofclasses,howeverlittleitis.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了名词性从句、状语从句、使用了非谓语动词和过渡词。题十：RecentlyIhavemadeaninvestigationonwhetheramodel-testpaperforSeniorThreeshouldbedifficultoreasy.Opinionsaredividedonthismatter.Somestudentsthinkthatadifficultexamisjustlikeachallenge.Theharder,thebette

36、r.Itcanhelpstudentsfindoutwheretheyareweakinstudiesandimprovetheirlearningapproaches.Others,however,areagainstadifficultexamIntheiropinion,ifitisverydifficult.,theymaybecomediscouragedandfeelterribleaboutthecomingCollegeEntranceExamination.Besides,withaneasyexam,theycangethighmarksandgainconfidence.

37、Ipreferittobeneithertoodifficultnortooeasy,becauseifitistooeasy,teacherswillnotknowhowweareactuallygettingonwithourstudies,andifitistoodifficult,wewillloseheart.点评：作者把表中的信息完整地表达了出来并发表了自己的观点；作者使用了名词性从句、状语从句、高级句式和过渡词。题十一：ThestudentsofNo.4HighSchoolhadadiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessarytostartlearningEnglishfromchildhood.SomeofthemthinkthatEnglishlearningshouldstartfromchildhood.Aslittleboysandgirlshaveaverygoodmemory,theycanlearnalotofEnglishwordsbyheart.Thiswillhelpthemlayasolidfounda