亲情类读后续写专项训练- 高三英语二轮复习.docx

1、【浙江省普通高校招生英语模拟考试续写】The first time we set eyes on "Big Red", Dad, Mom and I were walking through the freshly fallen snow on our way to Hubble*s Hardware store on Main Street in Huntsville. As we passed the Eaton's department store's window, we stopped as usual to gaze and do a bit o

2、f dreaming. The beautifully decorated window display held the best goods ever, which were all sat comfortably beneath the breathtaking skirt of Big Red.Mom's eyes were glued to the red shining dress, dotted with twinkling stars. "My goodness," she managed to say in wonder. "Would

3、you just look at that dress!1' Then, totally out of character, Mom gave a spin of a waltz on the slippery sidewalk. But soon she was her usual self again and shook her head in disgust. "Who on earth would want such a fancy dress?"As we continued down the street, Mom turned back for one

4、 more look. "My goodness! You'd think they'd display something a person could use!'1Christmas was nearing, and the red dress was soon forgotten. Mom, of all people, was not one to wish for, or spend money on, items that were not practical. Dad, on the other hand, liked to indulge （纵

5、容）whenever the budget allowed. Of course, he'd get a scolding for his occasional splurging （挥霍），but it was all done with the best intention.There were many other modern things that old farm needed, like electric range and a clothes dryer, but Mom insisted that those things would have to wait unt

6、il we could afford them. She had worn the heavy, grey wool coat every winter for as long as I could remember though she did have one or two nspecial" dresses saved for church on Sundays.Choosing something for Mom was much harder. When Dad and I asked, she thought carefully and then hinted modes

7、tly for some tea towels, face cloths or a new dishpan（洗碗盆）.On our last trip to town before Christmas, we were driving up Main Street when Mom suddenly exclaimed in surprise: "Would you just look at that!*' She pointed excitedly as Dad drove past Eaton's.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中

8、标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1: "That big red dress is gone,” she said in disbelief. "Its actually gone."Para 2: I'll never forget that Christmas morning as Mom unpacked a large box that read "Eaton's Finest Dishpan”.Para 1:The bird dr

9、opped like a rock, one wing flopping behind as it fell. I heard it thump into the dirt. Before lowering the gun, I realized what I'd done I'd killed my first animal. "Oh no,” My stomach was tied in knots and I prayed, “Oh God, please don't let it be dead." The bird lay there wi

10、th blood streaming from its beak, feathers large and small scattered about. I reached out and rolled it over, but its head drooped lifelessly to the side. After burying it, I hurried home, hiding my BB gun in the closet. (87 words)Para 2:When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was.

11、 I hesitated, and was momentarily uneasy that guilt crossed my face. My dad, a man of keen perception, quickly went into confrontation mode, asking what really happened. I replied, as if I had to choke the words out of my throat, tears streaming down my face. He didn't say anything but just look

12、ed at me, hand resting on my shoulder. That evening, my dad made me vow to never kill a thing again, explaining that once I got bored of animals, the next target could be something even more priceless. (91 words)(Possible Version 2)Para 1:The bird dropped like a rock, one wing flopping behind as it

13、fell. A surge of excitement ran through me, as if I were the king. Lowering the BB gun, I came up to check my target. It was still alive, with only one wing bleeding. “Why not take it home so that I can play with it?" I picked up the little creature and went home. When I placed it on the desk,

14、it was struggling to stand up but in vain. At the sight, I began to feel a little uneasy. With the night falling, I was on pins and needles. (90 words)Para 2:When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was. I was dead silent. Dad merely rested his hand upon me and waited with a soft lo

15、ok in his eye. "L .my voice cracked and I cleared my throat. "I shot a bird.” "Oh?” he replied, his expression unchanging. "Where is the bird now?" I led him to the desk. Seeing the bird, dad smoothed its feathers with his gentle fingers and fixed the broken wing with a band

16、age. Several days later, the bird was fully recovered. Seeing it fly away, I realized I should use the real power to protect rather than hurt lives. (95 words)二、A possible versionPlThe boy headed back down to the old man's house. He knocked on the door again and this time the old man came right

17、to the door. "Boy, I thought I told you no magazines!" The old man stared at him angrily. "I know that, sir. I just wanted to bring you a gift." The little boy handed him the dog figurine. Looking at the boy, the old man was too surprised to say anything and simply smiled in tear

18、s, as no one had ever shown him so much kindness. P2From that day on something changed inside the old man. He started coming out of the house and talking to his neighbors. Soon, he and the boy became friends. The boy visited the old man frequently and brought his real live dog to his house once in a

19、 while. He even invited the old man to join his family for Christmas dinner. With the boy's company, the old man was no longer a lonely soul.Paragraph 1:Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. Some things never change, Ally thought.Quickening her pace, she hurried to the rock by the s

20、tream where she and her father used to sit and eat lunch. She sat on it, with her face toward the sun. Overhead the sky was filled with birds busily diving to gather dried grass to place in their nests. Their sweet songs echoed throughout the woods. Ally felt content for the first time in a long whi

21、le. She could almost hear her father's laughter in the gentle breeze as she listened for the sweet song of the special bird. All too soon, the sun disappeared behind thick gray clouds.Paragraph 2:Determined to start out again the next morning, she was about to head home when a ringing birdsong f

22、loated down to her. It was prettier than any she had heard before. An excited feeling bubbled up inside Ally as she searched the sky. A flash of orange dashed down and rested on a nearby branch. For a moment Ally couldn't believe her eyes, but it was true. The tiny wood warbler just sat there,lo

23、oking around, as if it were waiting for something. Ally blinked back tears.''Thanks, Dad,"she whispered slowly lifting her camera and taking careful aim."Things will be different without you. Fll always miss our times together, but I feel better now*'四、Possible version 1Gracie发

24、现自己迷路了，最终被家人找到。经过这件事情，她最终感悟到家人的亲情和关爱才是彩虹末端 的财宝。Paragraph 1:But I soon found that my troubles had only begun. All at once I heard voices shouting and hallooing. I was frightened, fearing that some unknown animals were upon me! I could not find my way: I was lost in a wood! I could not tell which was

25、east or west, north or south, but wandered about here and there, crying and calling, though I knew that no one could hear me. I was hungry, cold, scared,一altogether very miserable indeed.Paragraph 2:At last I heard my own name called. Then came familiar voices near me. That was my family!Instantly,

26、I tried to respond loudly and urgently, "Here! Here!1'Within minutes, my family came into my eyes. Rushing towards them, I threw myself to their warm hugs. In a guilty tone, my brother said, "my poor little sister! T thought you would know I was only quizzing you."Smiling at him,

27、I said, "There is no treasure at the end of the rainbow. But our family are!'* Possible version?Gracie发现自己迷路了，在痛苦不堪之际，哥哥拖着病体找到她。她体会到了哥哥对她的爱。Paragraph 1:But I soon found that my troubles had only begun.I couldn't find the previous way! A chill crept over me. With my lips trembling, I was

28、 reduced to tears. Hoping to find something more, I still walked through the woods. However, it seemed that the god wasn't blessing on me. Ultimately, I sat down by the tree with my arms aching. I felt extremely tired and my spirits sank, tears streaming down my cheeks again.Paragraph 2:At last

29、I heard my own name called. A wild gaiety took hold of my sinking heart. Somebody was looking for me! Trotting quickly, I saw it was my brother, who was seized by a burst of anxiety. Seeing me with a big smile, eyes beaming with relief, he rushed to me and gave me a long and affectionate hug. This e

30、xperience in the summer afternoon gave me a lesson: There was no treasures at the end of the rainbow, but the love between my brother and me.五、One Possible Version:But I was determined to teach the little wild one a lesson. “You can't stay in the house if you don't listen to me," I said

31、 sternly. Instead of being obedient, Lulu stepped outside, facing me in a challenging way. A dull dread began seeping through my bodythe little one was wearing only her sweater and tights. "Okay, you've decided to behave,” I said quickly. "Come in now”. However, Lulu shook her head wit

32、h a stubborn look in her eyes. "Don't be silly, Lulu.” I was panicking. "It's freezing. You're going to get sick. Come in now.,Lulu's teeth were clicking repeatedly together because of cold but shu shook her head again. It suddenly dawned on me that I had underestimated Lul

33、u. She would rather freeze to death than give in. My mind racing, I changed tactics immediately, begging and bribing Lulu to come back into the house. When Mum end Dad arrived home, they found Lulu contentedly soaking in a hot bath, dipping a biscuit in a steaming cup of hot chocolate, desperately c

34、ute. Anyway, I love Lulu, a similar wild one with an angel's face.八、Paragraph 1:Suddenly, a painting on the wall caught Taylor's eye. "That's it," she exclaimed, her eves twinkling with excitement. Tavlor raced upstairs, grabbed her art supplies and got ready to paint She sat d

35、own at her desk,looking out the window at the remaining daisies below. As her brush moved smoothly across the papers, daisies came alive. At the thought that this ideal way may work, Taylofs face lit up with pleasure. During the days before the fair, Taylor made one painting after another, hoping to

36、 give Mama a big surprise which could make up for her mistake. Paragraph 2:The morning of the fair; Taylor came downstairs to invite Mama to see the surprise. Hardly had Mama opened the door when she was entirely surprised at the scene, utterly in disbelief at what she was seeing. Daisy paintings we

37、re everywhere, bright and cheerful in the morning light "Do you think anyone will buy them?nTaylor asked. Stroking her hair affectionately Mama wrapped her in a hug and nodded,"Oh, sweetie, yes. Pm sure they will.1' After loading the daisy bouquets and paintings into the van, they head

38、ed for the fair. No matter how much money the paintings valued, Taylor's warm heart and commitment were invaluable,One possible version Paragraph 1:“That big red dress is gone： she said in disbelief. "It's actually gone." Dad looked quickly and smiled, “Yes, it is not here!" &

39、quot;But who would like to buy that silly dress, which is neither practical nor cheap?" Mom marveled, but meanwhile both father and I could discern and inexplicable but conspicuous disappointment crept over her face. " Some romantic, reserved loving man might buy that for their wife."

40、 Father winked slyly at mom and me from the rear mirror as if he were the secretive devoting husband he depicted.Paragraph 2:I'll never forget that Christmas morning as Mom unpacked a large box that read "Eaton's Finest DishparT. My father handed mother a box. "Ta da, the most sill

41、y gift for my princess!” father exclaimed, eyeing at his wife in a loving and expectant way. Mother,looking at the box, too stunned to speak, received the box with her trembling hands. Her palms sweating, throat tightening, mother 9s hand sidled through the red satin and lingered at the twinkling st

42、ars. "Oh, Tom, you shouldn't have been that extravagant." "No, baby, you deserve the highest honor and my passionate love on this Special Christmas." They holding each other's hand start a waltz around our small Christmas tree.【杭州二中2021学年第一学期高三年级模拟考英语试卷续写】Rob was fifteen

43、years old and still on his father's farm.He loved his father.He had not known it until one day a few days before Christmas, when he had overheard what his father was saying to his mother."Mary, I hate to call Rob in the mornings. He*s growing so fast and he needs his sleep.If you could see

44、how he sleeps when I go in to wake him up! I wish I could manage alone.n"Well, you can't do the milking alone, Adam."His mother's voice was brisk."Besides,he isn't a child anymore. It's time he took his turnn"Yes," his father said slowly.nBut I sure do hate t

45、o wake him.*'When he heard these words, something in him woke: his father loved him! He had never thought of it before, taking for granted the tie of their blood. Neither his father nor his mother talked about loving their childrenthey had no time for such things. There was always so much to do

46、on a farm.He wished, this Christmas he was fifteen, he had a better present for his father. As usual he had gone to the ten-cent store and bought a tie.lt had seemed nice enough until he lay thinking the night before Christmas. Suddenly a thought struck him like a silver dagger. Why should he not gi

47、ve his father a special gift, out there in the barn?He laughed to himself as he gazed at the stars. It was what he would do,and he mustn't sleep too sound.He must have woken twenty times, scratching a match each time to look at his old watch-midnight, and half past one, and then two o'clock.

48、Paragraph 1:At a quarter to three he got up and put on his clothes.Paragraph 2:Back in his room he had only a minute to jump into bed.【One possible version 】Paragraph 1:At a quarter to three he got ud and put on his clothes. Careful of the creaky boards, he let himself out. A big star hung low over

49、the roof, a reddish gold. The cows looked at him, sleepy and surprised. It was early for them, too. He had never milked all alone before, but it seemed almost easy. He smiled and milked steadily. The task went more easily than he had ever know it to before. Milking for once was not a chore. It was a

50、 gift to his father. He finished, the two milk cans were full, and he covered them and closed the barn carefully.Paragraph 2:Back in his room he had only c minute to jump into bed. Before he heard his father get up. He put the covers over his head to silence his quick breathing. The door opened. “Ro

51、b!” his father called. "We have to get up, son, even if it is Christmas." "Awright," he said sleepily. "I'll go on out, ” his father said. "I'll get hings started." The door closed and he lay still, laughing to himself. In just a few minutes his father woul

52、d know. His dancing heart was ready to jump from his body. The minutes were endlesshe heard his father's footsteps again. The door opened. "Rob!"His father was laughing, a queer sobbing sort of a laugh. "Though you'd fool me, did you? Son. I thank you. Nobody ever did a nicer

53、thing-" "It's for Christmas, Dad!” His heart was bursting with love.【亲情类续写同类练习补充】、The day my dad gave me a BB gun was my twelfth birthday, and I almost couldn't help jumping up and down when I saw what it was.With a smile, he led me outside and showed me how to shoot-first loading

54、the gun, pumping it a few times, aiming, and, finally, firing. Before handing the gun to me, he said seriously, "I don't ever want to see you killing anything. That's not the reason why I bought you this gun., I thought he was afraid that I'd learn what real power felt like. Anyway,

55、 it was okay with me because I figured I'd find many other targets.“Hey, Mike." I yelled to my friend upon making one of my greatest discoveries. "Check this out.” I aimed at the top of the telephone pole. "What're you doing? ” he asked. I fired, and the BB hit the top of the

56、pole, causing a loud "DING" to ring out. "Cool." Mike said. I smiled like a kinga smile that grew even wider when Mike couldn't hit the same target. The good thing was that no matter how many times you shot those things they never broke. Then again, maybe that9s why it got bo

57、ring.A few months later, I found myself walking down the street, gun in hand, searching for new targets. I stopped by a telephone pole, popping off a few shots with nothing better to do. Suddenly, a bird swooped（俯冲） down and landed on the wire. It cooed and walked slowly, completely unaware of my wa

58、tchful eye. Here I was, a bored kid, holding a BB gun, and a bird standing right there in front of meand no one around to tell my dad. It was so perfect. I figured it was a sign from God. I aimed straight at the bird, held my breath, and squeezed slowly upon the trigger （扳机）.But I hesitated. I was a

59、bout to shoot a bird, feeling at one moment uneasy, at another excited. The exciting part won. I fired.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1: The bird dropped like a rock, one win flopping behind as it fell.Para 2: When my dad got home

60、 that evening, he asked me how my day was.A little boy selling magazines for school walked up to a house that people rarely visited. The house was very old and shabby and the owner hardly ever came out. When he did come out, he would not say hello to his neighbors or passers-by but simply just glare

61、 at them.The boy knocked on the door and waited, sweating from fear of the old man. The boy's parents told him to stay away from the house, and a lot of the other neighborhood children were told the same thing from their parents.As he was ready to walk away, the door slowly opened. "What do you want?" the old man said impatiently. The little boy was very afraid but he had a quota （份额）to meet for school with selling the magazines. So he got up the