漫画作文公开课

1、Attention please!2012江苏高考说明江苏高考说明高考英语高考英语书面表达示例书面表达示例2-看图作文说明：看图作文说明：看图作文的看图作文的 “图图”不局限于某一类型不局限于某一类型的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片的图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图片、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根、照片、图表等情景材料。考生们可根据情景图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，据情景图示的寓意、内容或情节线索，自己组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较自己组织文字，进行描述、叙述、比较或表达思想观点。作文应覆盖提示的要或表达思想观点。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但应避免仅根据提示文字作简单翻点，但应避免仅根据提示文字

2、作简单翻译。译。 Different forms of picturesWriting based on cartoonsAre you familiar with this cartoon?What abilities should we have?1. 读图读图3. 谋篇谋篇2.解意解意.读图：读图：Topics of cartoonsTopics of cartoonsEnvironmental/Natural problemsSocial phenomenonAttitudes towards life.解意解意(theme)-to the point 注意注意: 文字说明部分往往含有

3、重要信息文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！切记要认真阅读！1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle) . 联系生活，明晰主旨联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme) 下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象，请你根据对，请你根据对 这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决此问题发表你的看法。此问题发表你的看法。Example1._角度角度comparison主旨主旨educationinequality The comparison indi

4、cates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.角度角度criticize主旨主旨The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.Example2Judge the themes of the followingcartoons as quickly as possible.Come on! Choose

5、 me! 213456People lack communication.Picture1Protect animals.No buying, no killing.Picture2People cant afford heavy medical fees. Picture 3Picture 4One false move may lose the game.Look before you leap.Money cant buy everything.Health is the best wealth.Picutre5 下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经典广告招画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？if u

6、nexpectedcant foreseeprotect ourselvesbuy insurancePicture6The advertisement above shows us that there are always some unexpected “ifs” in our life, but not all of us can foresee them clearly. So buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ourselves from a deadly “if”.Conclusion:When

7、 it comes to attitudes towards life, usingproper sayings makes sense.谋篇谋篇 -organizationStep1. Descriptionstep2. AnalysisStep3. Solutions发现问题发现问题解决问题解决问题分析问题分析问题Step 1 Description（人称（人称/时态）时态）To what degree should we describe the cartoon? OrganizationExamplea country boycryinglong for educationa city

8、 boyenjoy all the benefitsof educationAs is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture,In the picture, there are The picture shows a common phenomenon.Sentence structures:_, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education, in contrast, the city

9、 boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits.As is vividly shown in the picture,Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析联系实际分析)( facts / reasons/results)Sentence structures1.What are the reasons for this phenomenon?2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.3.The picture shows

10、 thatIt is the exact reflection of4.The picture indicates that we/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that5.This is a ironic (讽刺的讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongClues：描述一下他们：描述一下他们的的不同境遇不同境遇，并就，并就如如何解决此问题何解决此问题发表你发表你的看法。的看法。Indicate:education inequalityFacts:dro

11、p out of schoolsuffer fromlow standards ofcomparativelybetter opportunitiesResults:lower enrollment ratesworsen the problemExample The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Eve

12、n those who managed to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic quantities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education. (results) Thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment ra

13、tes than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality.As far as Im concerned/In my opinion,From my point of view,Only in this way can./Only if, can weStep 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions)It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Imm

14、ediate measures should be taken toThe government should make laws toThe media should appeal for We should raise peoples awareness ofEveryone should make great efforts to从大到小从大到小从意识到行动从意识到行动The governmentThe mediabe aware ofOnly ifsocial justiceharmonious societyExample To solve this problem , the go

15、vernment should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. Meanwhile, the media can appeal for the public donations for rural education. Moreover, all people in the community should be aware of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. Only if we do these can we h

16、ave more social justice and thus make our society more harmonious Practice 目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。

17、 _Clues: 简要简要说明图画中所表达的说明图画中所表达的内容，内容，重点重点阐述这种现象所带来的阐述这种现象所带来的后果后果和你的和你的观点观点。StepsContentsDescriptionAnalysisSolutionsan old mansuffer fromgo tohospitalmedical billcant affordanother attachResults:1.in debt2.bear the pain3.wait for death1.reduce medicalexpenses2.build upmedical insurance/caresystemHe

18、alth Care (Description) From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble/attack. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could affo

19、rdIts really another heart attack for him.SampleAnalysis At present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. (Results) Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait fo

20、r the last day of their life. What a pity! Solutions To solve the problem,we strongly call for the medical expenses to be reducedThe government should build up medical insurance system ,and try its best to explore and develop a new health care so that everyone will be able to enjoy their life as lon

21、g as possible. /Only in this way, can we enjoy our life as long as possible. Whatever the picture is, just remember:Proper descriptionAccurate analysisReasonable solutionsOnly if you keep these rules in mind, can you make it.Lets draw conclusionC第五部分第五部分 书面表达书面表达( (满分满分2525分分) )下图描述的是全球环境问题。请仔细观察这幅漫

22、画，用英语写一篇短文，阐明漫画中所反映的问题，并提出解决此问题的方法(至少三点)。_Consolidation_DescriptionAnalysisSolutionFrom the picture, we can see that pollution is posing a threat to our earth, which comes in many ways. Millions of chimneys of the factories are pouring heavy somok into air, which causes serious air pollution. A larg

23、e amount of waste water from the factories pollutes water, making our rivers fishless and our water unfit to drink and swim in. Furthermore, a lot of trees have been cut down without proper plans, which contributes to the soil being washed away. It seems that we really have no clean place to live(De

24、scription + Analysis)The pollution is so serious that we have to find effective solutions to it. As far as I am concerned, the government should pass laws to reduce polluted air. Some measures should be taken to purify the water before it is poured into the rivers of the seas. We should plant more trees to keep the soil in place. Whats more, people should be further educated to realize the importance of environmental protection. Only in this way, we will have a clean and tidy environment.(Soluti