月的六级作文评分原则标准和范文

1、据去年12月份的考试，2012年6月份的六级考试写作部分也极有可能继续延续这样的命题方式，因此，考前我们务必应该做好充分准备，接下来，我们就手把手地教会同学们写这种新形式的六级写作题目。请看写作要求（directions），这篇作文的题目是 The Way to Success 成功之路，写作方式是评论美国总统林肯的一句名言“Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.”。我们应该从三个角度来“评论”林肯先生的这句名言：1.这句话的表面含义；2.这句话带给我们

2、的深层含义 3.这句话带给我们的启发，我们应该如何行动？其实，以上三个角度，就是文章的段落安排了。那么接下来，我们就一起将这篇文章写出来。文章第一段，直接引用名言，并对其表层含义进行阐述，就林肯的这句话，我们知道“6个小时砍树，要花4个小时来磨斧子”表面的含义就是：6小时砍树的过程，其实4小时用来磨斧子非但不会影响砍树，反而很重要。我们可以这么写：第一段：“Give me six hours to chop down a tree ,and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.”Abraham Lincoln once said. Al

3、though four-hours seems quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laborious in the rest two-hours.文章的第二段，也是写作中内容最丰富，得分最关键的一段。显然，这一段势必需要“评论”一下这句名言的深层、延伸含义 6小时砍树需要花4小时做准备工作（磨斧子），足以说明：充分的准备是达成成功的重要条件。既然我们已经读懂了林肯先生这句名言的深层含义，作为议论文， 我们必须拿出充分的论述和论据来论证“充分的准备对于成功的重要性”。综上

4、所述，文章的第二段，我们可以写成三句话：第一句话：说明这句名言的深层含义；第二句话：阐述这个含义的重要性或意义或价值或好处，总之，就是说这个含义为什么如此之好之重要；第三句话：用一个生活中、名人或是社会发生的热点事件的具体例子来论证。请看范文写作：The saying aim at informing us of a truth that no one can get things perfectly done without adequate preparation. Definitely , we cant emphasize too much of the importance of f

5、ull preparation in pursuit of success. Full preparation can help people reduce the risk of failure. As we can adopt counter plan when something unexpected occurs instead of being at a loss. It can also help people increase the chances of success. For example, how could you get a job offer without ad

6、equate preparation before an interview ?文章第三段，我们可以延伸开去谈谈针对这句名言给我们的启发，我们应该做些什么具体的行动。那么具体的，我们也可以写成三句话：第一句话，强调这个 含义的重要性；第二句话，因为意识到这个含义的重要性，所以我们应该怎么做来践行；第三句话，可以引用其他名人名言，来再次论证这个含义的重要性，用名人 名言收尾，既可以呼应本段的主题句，又可以给阅卷者留下考生拥有良好英文功底的印象。具体请看范文写作：We should bear in mind that no one can achieve their goals easily wi

7、thout preparation. Hence, dont forget to set up a proper goal, draw up a detailed plan and carry out a full investigation before we take actions. “Preparation breeds success.” Benjamin Franklin once said.至此，这篇六级文章，这个六级写作的新题型就完工了。同学们可以模仿这样的写作方式，并最终提炼出一个模板和写作思路。文章总共写三段，第一段评价 某句名言的浅层、表面的含义；第二段提炼这句名言的深层

8、含义并论证这个含义的重要性意义或好处；第三段表态，既然某个含义这么重要，那么我们应该怎么做 呢？各位同学在今后的备考过程中，应该有意识的通过各种途径，搜集名人、身边或社会发生的事情作为举例论证，也应该背诵一些名人名言谚语等，来增加文章的亮点。最后，希望大家都能顺利通过考试。加油！Part I  WritingFor this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an essay entitled The Way to Success by commenting on Abraham Lincoln's famous re

9、mark, "Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe." You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 11分“Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” This remark of Abraham Lin

10、colns may sound ridiculous at first, but it is actually right.In my opinion, the way to success is to make preparations before the final action, because good preparation can improve ones efficiency. Sharpening the axe may take four hours, but it will only take us a short time to chop down a tree wit

11、h a sharpened axe. Otherwise, it may require more than six hours time to finish the job as the axe is really ineffective.Good preparation means both tools and plan. Before we start to do something, we must have made a good plan in detail. A plan can help us to manage the time and resourses. When bot

12、h tools and plan are ready, we will start to do our job with confidence.In conclusion, the way to success is to prepare well. We can only pass the exam we have well prepared, we can only chop down a tree with a axe well prepared. Good preparation is the way to success.    8分Abraham Li

13、ncoln used to made a remark on how to achieve success. He said, “give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” This has revealed the importance of making preparation to the way to success.The knowledge and ability one need in order to do a great job is j

14、ust an axe to chop down tree. Students either need varies kinds of skills or need to be very skillful in one area in order to achieve their career success. However, some of us are just too eager to prove themselves. They are willing to find a job right after graduation, even start to take part in al

15、l kinds of unions and communities even when they are under-graduates.Its the big time to learn knowledges and skills for us students. Only you have made yourself well prepared can you do a greater job on your way to success. Dont think that making preparation will waste your time and influence the e

16、ffect of your work. Sharper axe can chop much faster, so is good preparation in future career life.   5分Every one has a dream to be a hero. But there are a few individuals can be success. Thats why? Maybe they could not find the best way to success.As Abraham Lincoln said, “Give me six hou

17、rs to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” We should find the best way to chose it. As to Lincoln, the best way is to prepare fully. And it is vital significance for fighting to success to ourselves.Firstly, the good preparing is the good beginning for completing th

18、e task. As we known, every building was built on the based subjects. The good beginning will help us to achieve the aims earlier and easier.Secondly, we can find both the advantages and disadvantages when we do preparing something. And then, we can do something to avoid the expression of disadvantag

19、es.As far as I am concerned, we should do fully preparing before starting a task. The preparing should be including the thoughts, the ananrys and others. Besides, we should find other ways fitting for ourselves and fight to success along the best way.  2分Everyone want to success and everyb

20、ody desir success, but in our world, although there are many people successed, also many people losed, so I think the successful people are find the way to success, and losed people cant find the way to success. Why some people are successed. Because they are find the right way, then they hard work.The way to success. S