托福作文范例词汇应选择使用不空洞的词

1、托福作文范例词汇应选择使用不空洞的词托福作文词汇应选择使用不空洞的词1. 一些空洞的单词或词组根本不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息,完全可以被删掉.比如下面的句子:Whenallthingsareconsidered,youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthanthoseoftheirparents,inmyopinion.这句话当中的whenallthingsareconsidered和inmyopinion都显得多余.完全可以去掉.改为:Youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthantheirpa

2、rents.2. 有些空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:Duetothefactthatourgrandparentswereunderanobligationtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoungpeoplehaveatthispointintime.duetothefactthat就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:Becauseourgrandparentswereobligatedtohelptheirparents,theydidnothavetheoptionsthatyoun

3、gpeoplehavenow.托福写作中应尽量减少重复啰嗦1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇.或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复.这时候可以做一些简化的工作.例如下面这个例子:Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslargeinsize.large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large,所以insize可以去掉,改为:Thefarmmygrandfathergrewuponwaslarge.更简洁的表达方式为:Mygrandfathergrewuponalargefarm.2. 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换,例如:Mygrandfatherh

4、assaidoverandoveragainthathehadtoworkonhisparentsfarm.这里的overandoveragain就可以改为repeatedly,显得更为简洁:Mygrandfatherhassaidrepeatedlythathehadtoworkonhisparentsfarm.托福考试作文独立写作范文:孩子过分依赖电子产品IndependentTaskNowadays,childrenrelytoomuchonthetechnology,likecomputers,smartphone,videogamesforfunandentertainment;pl

5、ayingsimplertoysorplayingoutsidewithfriendswouldbebetterforthechildrensdevelopment.写作参考一:Forparents,howtowellplantheirchildrensdevelopmenthasbeenahugeproblem.Whilesomechildrenaregivenmoretimeontechnologicalgadgets,othersaremoreinclinedtochoosesomeactivities,suchasgoingcampingortraveling.Forme,thefor

6、meroptionwouldbeabetterone.Admittedly,playingsimplertoysorplayingoutsidemightbegoodchoiceforchildren.Simplertoys,namelyLego,areagoodwaytodevelopchildrensthinkingonsolvingtheproblemthroughblockbyblock.Byassemblingthepiecesfordifferentblocks,childrencouldassembleanevenbigpiece,suchastheclassicLondonTo

7、werBridge.Also,playingwithfriendsishelpful.Whentheyareplayingwithothers,theywouldcooperatewiththemtoplayingsportsorevensolveproblems.However,onbalance,bothofthesewaysarelimitedinhelpingchildren.Toysandoutdooractivitiesarerestrainedtotheiractualforms:parentsneedlotsofmoneytobuydifferenttoystohelpchil

8、drendevelop,andtheypayagreatamountofmoneyonhelpingtheirchildrenfordifferentactivities.Forthoseparentswhosufferfromfinancialburden,thesearenoteffectivewaysforchildrensdevelopment.Comparatively,technologywouldbeamoreeffectivewayforchildren.Firstly,Internetviacomputersandsmartphoneareessentialfortheird

9、evelopment.Inotherwords,Internetprovidesstudentswithvastamountsofinformation.AccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyGallup,afterpollingthousandsofstudentsfromlocalhighschools,mostrespondentsclaimthatInternetistheNo.1helperfromthemtofinishhomework.Whentheyhaveproblems,theywouldsearchreferenceonInternet.W

10、ebsitessuchasGoogleScholarwouldbeawonderfultoolforthemtofindsomepapersoracademicreferencefortheirhomework.Meanwhile,Internetisawonderfulplaceforthemtoentertainaswell.TheycouldwatchmoviesonY.Theycouldevenfind.Allfunnye_periencesareavailableonInternetwithoutcausingchildrentoomuchmoney.Inaddition,video

11、gamesarealsonecessaryforchildrensgrowth.Whenchildrenareplayingvideogames,theymightlearnsomestrategicthinking.Fore_ample,whenIamplayingFIFA_,IhavetomanagemyteammembersaccordingtotheirphysicalstrengthsothatIcouldbeatotherteams.Forthosewhorunquickly,itwouldbeagoodideaforthemtoplayforward;forthosewhoare

12、tallandstrong,theywouldbebetterplayingmiddlefield.Becauseofthisteammanagementstrategy,Ihaveachievedmanytitlesinthegame.Learningfromthis,Iwouldallocatemytimeinfinishinghomeworkaccordingtomyenergylevel.WhenIamenergetic,Imightchoosethemostdifficulthomework;ifIamtired,Imightchoosesomeeasy-to-dotasks,whi

13、chwouldnotcostmemuchtime.Toconclude,whileplayingtoysorspendingtimeonoutdooractivitiesisagoodwayfortheirdevelopment,technologywouldbebetterway.写作参考二:2月28日:Nowadays,childrenrelytoomuchonthetechnology,likecomputers,smartphone,videogamesforfunandentertainment;playingsimplertoysorplayingoutsidewithfriend

14、swouldbebetterforthechildrensdevelopment.Technologicaladvancementhascontributedtotheinventionofawiderangeofelectronicproductsandthereareanincreasingnumberofchildrenwhoarereportedtorelyheavilyonthetechnology.Thus,thecontroversyisraisedamongthepublicwhetherplayingsimplertoysorplayingoutsidewithfriends

15、arebetterforthechildrensdevelopment.Frommyperspective,Iinsistonthatdependingonhightechnologyisaratherrightdecision.Foronething,childrencanlearnmoreabouttheworldanddevelopabetterwayofresolvingproblems.Forinstance,theupcomingFourthIndustrialRevolutionheraldsathoroughchangeofthecompositionofworkingforc

16、einthesocietyandlearningthelatestnewsthroughcomputersorsmartphoneswillleadchildrentobeawareofwhatareneededurgentlyandwhathavebeenoutdated,inthisway,theycandecidewhatkindsofcapabilitiesandqualitiestheyshoulddevelopforbeingaccustomedtothefast-changingworld.Besides,childrennowadayshavetoaccomplishdiver

17、securriculumsmanydifficultassignmentslikewritingapaperrelatedtohowindependentwarwassparkledorwhatconsequenceshadbeenarousedaftertheassassinationofLincoln.Computerscanhelpresolvetheproblemmoreeffectivelybyprovidingstudentswithabundantreferencesandhistoricumentation.Additionally,therehavebeenmoreeduca

18、tionalprogramsspreadingthroughtheInternetlikeTEDthatisdesignedtodisseminatethemostoutstandingprofessorslecturesthroughouttheworldtosharethegreatestideaswithpeopleineverycorneroftheworld.Obviously,relyingonthehigh-techdevicescanbeofgreatbenefitsforchildrenbothtoresolvetheproblemstheymightmeetduringth

19、eirstudyandlearnmorethingsbeyondtheirte_tbooks.Foranotherthing,videogameshavebeendesignedtobemorealluringandintellectuallydemanding.Tobemorespecific,therehaveoccurredmanymorevideogamesthatareinventedtoe_ploitchildrensimaginationandalsoreleasetheirpressure.TakeMinecraft,apopulargamesweepingmanyprimar

20、yandhighschoolstudents,asane_ample.Inthegame,playerscanusediverseconstructionmaterialsandtoolstoconstructwhattheylikesuchasacastleoraskyscraperevenacity.Besides,bydecoratingtheentitiestheycreatedinmanydifferentstyles,massiveintellectualactivitiesareneededlikehowtodesigntheroofthehouseandwhereshouldputthepetsinthecityandetc.Duringtheprocess,studentscanbefullyoccupiedinthegame,servingasanantidotetoboredomthatwillbedetrimentaltostudentsmentalhealthifitcanbeerasedpromptly.Consequentl