C四级写作的注意事项、评分标准及范文-CET写作

1、C四级写作的注意事项、评分标准及范文-CET写作四级写作的注意事项、评分标准及范文 全国英语四级考试中写作的时间是30分钟，满分是15分。词数为120150左右。下面是一些考生首先应注意的事项： 1达不到规定词数的要酌情扣15分。（注意：题目中所给的起始句、主题句、结束句，不计入所写字数。） 2规定为三段式的作文，只写一段为04分，只写2段为09分。 3文不对题的、或只有孤立的几个词的、无法表达思想的为0分。 4从97年夏天开始，又有新规定，即：凡作文不到6分者，所差分数，从总卷面分中扣除；凡得0分者，全卷最多能得59分。 四级考试中写作的阅卷标准共分5等：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。标

2、准如下： 12分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，但多数为严重错误。 25分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的语言错误。 38分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 411分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 514分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。 为了让考生心理有数，我这里提供一些就WomenintheModernWorld为题的范文。它的段落提纲如下： 1.Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpart

3、insocietytoday._ 2.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell._ 3.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized. _ 例1 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Longage,womenonlydidsomethinginthekitchenorathome.Nowmanyofthemh

4、aveseriousjobstoserveforpeople.Whatmencandosocanwomen. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Todayinthefamily,thewifeoftenlotsherhusbandtodosomethingathomebatago,onlywomendidsomething.Menarefonedofdoingsomethingathome. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwom

5、enhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Sometimes,thematter,thehusbandhittinghaswelf,oftenhappened.Inthefactorythewonmentoasmuchasthemen,buttheyarepaidlessthanthemen.Somepeoplehavenotcompletelyrealizedtheliberationofwomen. 分数：2分。 例2 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenha

6、veawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningovernmentalso.Theyleadotherpeoplecountry,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanyscientistslso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife. 全国英语四级考试中写作的时间是30分钟，满分是15分。词数为120150左右。下面是一些考生首先应注意的事项： 1达不到规定词数的要酌情扣15分。（注意：题目中所给的起始句、主题句、结束句，不计入

7、所写字数。） 2规定为三段式的作文，只写一段为04分，只写2段为09分。 3文不对题的、或只有孤立的几个词的、无法表达思想的为0分。 4从97年夏天开始，又有新规定，即：凡作文不到6分者，所差分数，从总卷面分中扣除；凡得0分者，全卷最多能得59分。 四级考试中写作的阅卷标准共分5等：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。标准如下： 12分-条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，但多数为严重错误。 25分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的语言错误。 38分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 411分-切题。表达思想清

8、楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 514分-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。 为了让考生心理有数，我这里提供一些就WomenintheModernWorld为题的范文。它的段落提纲如下： 1.Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday._ 2.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell._ 3.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofw

9、omenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized. _ 例1 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Longage,womenonlydidsomethinginthekitc123下一页 123下一页 四级写作的注意事项、评分标准及范文henorathome.Nowmanyofthemhaveseriousjobstoserveforpeople.Whatmencandosocanwomen. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefam

10、ilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Todayinthefamily,thewifeoftenlotsherhusbandtodosomethingathomebatago,onlywomendidsomething.Menarefonedofdoingsomethingathome. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Sometimes,thematter,thehusbandhittinghaswelf,oftenhappened.Inthefactorythewonm

11、entoasmuchasthemen,buttheyarepaidlessthanthemen.Somepeoplehavenotcompletelyrealizedtheliberationofwomen. 分数：2分。 例2 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningovernmentalso.Theyleadothe

12、rpeoplecountry,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanyscientistslso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Inancient,womenspositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theya

13、reequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingwithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealize,womenlikertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Eve

14、ryoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.Imsure,theliberationofwomenwouldbeincreased. 分数：5分。 例3 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.ManyWomentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbedonebythemenbefore.Foranexample.Somewomenarenotsecrtaryintheoffice,instea

15、d,theybecomemanagerofacompany. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Intheworldtoday,moreandmorewomenhavetheirownjob.Theygettheirownsalary,andbecomemoreindependentfromtheirhusband.Withtheeconomicsituationimproved,theirfamilypositionisimproving. Inspiteofthese

16、changes,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Manyhusbandsonlywanthiswifetostayathome,anddohouseworksordosomeshopping.Theyonlywanttheirwifetobeahousewife,butnotamanagerofacompany. 分数：8分。 例4 Womenareplayinganincreasingly&上一页123下一页 上一页123下一页 四级写作的注意事项、评分标准及范文nbsp;importantpartinsocietytoday

17、.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhaveenteredmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificfield.Asweknow,manywomensportsteamshavewontheworldschampionssuchasChinesewomensVolleyballTeam. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeeni

18、mprovedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husbandsandwivesareequalnow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandsharehappiness. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Alsoinsomeplaces.Womenareconsideredbeingthingbelongtomen.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjob

19、s.Theydontgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisaproblemmustbesolvednotonlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves. 评分：11分。 例5 Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.InManycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.Wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredonepe

20、rfectlybywomen.Womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,womenspositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachther.Also,youcanhardlyfindoutthatintodaysfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinners,whe