2016年秋季作文公开课

1、Qin LanrongHow to show different opinions 你所在的城市最近计划修建地铁，这件事引发了你所在的城市最近计划修建地铁，这件事引发了人们的广泛讨论。请根据所给信息写一篇英文人们的广泛讨论。请根据所给信息写一篇英文报道，陈述人们的不同看法，并发表自己的观点。报道，陈述人们的不同看法，并发表自己的观点。赞成观点赞成观点反对观点反对观点你的观点你的观点1. 解决交通拥堵解决交通拥堵问题，方便市问题，方便市民生活。民生活。2. 提供一种新的提供一种新的交通方法，促交通方法，促进环境保护。进环境保护。1.建设时间长，影建设时间长，影 响交通。响交通。2. 投入资金过大

2、，投入资金过大，成本回收过慢。成本回收过慢。 in my view/ opinion/judgementas far as Im concerned/ I can judgepersonally speaking from my perspectiveon the one hand.on the other handfor one thing. for another (thing)not only. but alsoI hold the view/ have the belief that. in the first placeto begin/start withbesides/ more

3、over/furthermorefirst of all / above all第二条理由第二条理由第一条理由第一条理由in addition/ whats more最后理由最后理由last but not leastmore importantly be for be in favor of support agree with approve of (doing) sth. think / believe / consider it necessary / beneficial / helpful to do sth.be against disagree with object to b

4、e opposed to (doing) sth. disapprove of (doing) sth. the structurethe language the handwritingWhat are the three most important aspects of a well-written composition?Pair workpair work要点一：解决交通拥堵问题，方便市民生活要点一：解决交通拥堵问题，方便市民生活The subway can solve the crowdedness problem and make peoples life is convient

5、.（5 students )the problem of crowdednessconvenient1.定语从句定语从句The subway can solve the problem of crowdedness, which makes peoples life convenient.2.-ing formThe subway can solve the problem of crowdedness, making peoples life convenient.3.not only but also Pair work pair work要点二：提供一种新的交通方式，要点二：提供一种新的

6、交通方式， 促进环境保护促进环境保护The subway also provides a new traffic way. It will get the environment protective better.(13 )means of transportThe subway,a new means of transport, will contribute to protecting the environment better.保护环境：保护环境：protect the environment/ be environmentally friendlyprevent the envir

7、onment from being polluted 促进促进contribute to经典句型经典句型There is no doubt that./There is no denying that./It is obvious(evident) that.副词副词/介词短语介词短语without doubt/ undoubtedlyobviously/evidently改为简单句改为简单句Pair work pair work要点三：建设时间长，影响交通要点三：建设时间长，影响交通.building a subway may spend long time on it. It will i

8、nforence the traffic. (7 students )take a1.-ing form/定语从句定语从句2.表结果的介词短语或副词表结果的介词短语或副词The building of a subway may take a long time, which will influence the traffic.influence3.表原因的表原因的介词短语介词短语 because ofdue to/ on account ofas a result/ consequence/ therefore/ soThe traffic will be influenced the lo

9、ng process of the construction.Pair workindividual work要点四：投入资金过大，成本回收过慢要点四：投入资金过大，成本回收过慢.to build the subway will cost much money. It is slowly to get the money have cost.（5 students ) backnot only.but (also)not only but as well连接两个句子连接两个句子Not only will building the subway cost much money, but (als

10、o) it is slow to get the money back. slow building我完全同意第一种观点。一方面地铁会让我们过上更为便捷的我完全同意第一种观点。一方面地铁会让我们过上更为便捷的生活，另一方面它对环境有益。这些正是大众们期望达到的。生活，另一方面它对环境有益。这些正是大众们期望达到的。group work要点五：你的观点要点五：你的观点 I totally/completely agree with/am in favor of the first opinion. For one thing, the subway will lead us to live a

11、more convenient life; for another it will be beneficial to the environment. They are exactly what the public hope to achieve. Recently, there has been a heated argument on whether a subway should be built or not in the city. Opinions vary from person to person. Some people consider it necessary to b

12、uild a subway. To begin with, the subway can solve the problem of crowdedness, thus making peoples life convenient. Besides, the subway, a new means of transport, will without doubt contribute to protecting the environment.A sample However, the others hold the opposite opinion. As far as they are concerned, the traffic will be influenced on account of the fact that building a subway will take a long time. More importantly, not only will the building cost much money, but it is slow to get the money back. I totally agree with th