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1、SAT 写作讲义SAT ESSAY WRITINGDaniel LeeNew Oriental SchoolInternational Tests Training Program DepartmentAim:Effective writing for SAT essay style with anticipation of a high scoreObjectives:The major objectives of the training program are to help students:·Paving the aesthetic way towards English

2、language·Possessing basic skills for writing expressive sentences·Using sparkling sentences in a mastery way··Realizing the way to open a topicEnhancing students ability to use specific reasons and examples to support the idea of the essay;·Developing students critical think

3、ing·Mastering the writing process in a fluent wayRequired Materials:The Official SAT Study GuideProgram structure and content:Studying Plan:课时内容任务效果第一节课写作必备语言技巧一合理的组织句子写出句子第二节课写作必备语言技巧二漂亮的组织句子写好句子第三节课范文分析，思路整理了解怎么写，怎样组织文章了解写作结构第四节课经典句型一实战练习，分析点评怎样分析题目文章构建第五节课经典句型二实战练习，分析点评熟悉写作过程，使用优美词句熟悉文章构建第六节

4、课经典句型三实战练习，分析点评自在写作，好句不断，学会升华心熟手快第七节课实战练习，分析点评信心写作，乐在其中恰似庖丁解牛第八节课实战练习，分析点评得心应手，嘱托有备无患，胸有成竹Writing IntroductionThe Essay Writing Task2.5%format of the SAT essay writing2.5%Assessment analysisThe pavement lead to a high score5%Writing TaskSentence organization12.5%Highlights in writing12.5%Assertion A

5、nalysis10%Topic analysis5%Writing Sample Analysis10%Writing process20%Practice25%目录SAT 写作必备语言技巧- 4- 10常用经典句型写作语言的整体- 16SAT 写作思路整理- 18- 29一些常见问题的思路提点- 31库心理描写补充- 57-60经论小站SAT 写作必备语言技巧一，时态的正确搭配使用Before Ito school, I had my breakfast.After Ito school, I had my breakfast.A, have goneC, wentB, had goneD,

6、 would go时间轴Ving 的功能百炼成钢：At this time tomorrowover the Atlantic.FlyBy the end of last year, another new gymnasiumin.CompleteThe reporter said that the UFOeast to west when he saw it.Travel- I dropped in at your house at about ten last night, but you werent in.- Iregular exercises at the club.DoThe h

7、ouse belongs to my aunt but shehere any more.liveJohn, a friend of mine, who got married only last week, spent $3,000 more than hefor the wedding.ExpectI- along the street looking for a place to park when the accident- gooccurIin London for many years，but Ive never regretted my final decision to mov

8、e back to China. liveI have to go to work by taxi because my carat the garage.RepairEliza remembers everything exactly as if ityesterday.HappenAfter I - at a village inn, I looked for my bag.ArriveI had left it on a chair beside the door and now it - there!Be As I - it, the inn-keeper came in.look f

9、or'Did you have a good meal?' he asked.'Yes, thank you,' I answered, 'but I can't pay the bill. I - my bag.'Not getThe inn-keeper sd and immediately went out.In a few minutes he returned with my bag and gave it back to me.'I'm very sorry,' he said ' My dog

10、 - it into the garden. He often - this.' Take do二，缩略修辞第一纪He looked at his watch.He saw that it was one o'clock.He looked at his watch and he saw that it was one o'clock.When he looked at his watch, he saw that it was one o'clock.Looking at his watch，he saw that it was one o'clock

11、.练习 He stands in the garden. He watches children play.Lily has told us the truth. Lily feels relaxed.Tom had had lunch. Tom went to bed to have a nap.He stayed in the house all day. He must have been bored.I will go to London. I will begin a new life.小结：第二纪The vicar was armed with a torch.The vicar

12、went up into the clock tower to see what was going on.The vicar was armed with a torch and he went up into the clock tower to see what was going on.After the vicar was armed with a torch, he went up into the clock tower to see what was going on.Being armed with a torch, the vicar went up into the cl

13、ock tower to see what was going on.Armed with a torch, the vicar went up into the clock tower to see what was going on.练习：I rushed out the house. I felt horrified.The gaoler looked on eagerly.The gaoler was anxious to see if his fellow-actor had at last learnt his lines.You will arrive at your desti

14、nation.You will be fresh and uncrumpled.I am asked to take the task.I begin to collect relevant information for that.I am a student.I study in NOS.小结：第三纪I felt cold and lonely. I went downstairs.I sat in front of the television.I pretended to read.One night, however, feeling cold and lonely, I went

15、downstairs and sat in front of the television pretending toread.I opened the cupboard door I stood in front of itI was petrified.心路历程：Daniel 的寄语：三，复杂定语从句第一纪Tom is a professor.Tom teaches in the Cambridge.Tom is a professor who teaches in the Cambridge.I will go to Paris.My mother lives in Paris.I wi

16、ll go to Paris in which my mother lives.I have a dog.The dogs name is YY.I have a dog whose name is YY.第一次用法小结：几个小规定：试一试：Bats locate flying insects.They feed on insects.We have only to turn to that extraordinary discovery of echo-location in bats to see a case.The voice plays a strictly utilitarian

17、role in the case.This echo-location in bats is often compared with radar.The principle of radar is similar.第二纪I will go to Paris. My mother lives in Paris. I will go to Paris in which my mother lives. I will go to Paris where my mother lives.I am expecting next Friday.The sports meeting will be held

18、 on next Friday. I am expecting next Friday on which the sports meeting will be held.I am expecting next Friday when the sports meeting will be held.第二次用法小结：几个提示：从句开花：They support the cables from which the bridge has been suspended.The most valuable find of all was the ship's log book, parts of

19、which it was still possible to read.But they suddenly became the parents of quintuplets, four girls and a boy, an event which radically changed their lives.四，虚拟及倒装用法：If I were a bird, I would fly in the blue sky.如果我是一只小鸟，我愿意在蓝天飞翔。（现在，意愿）If you had money, you should help him.如果你有钱，你会帮助他的。（现在，责任）If sh

20、e had known that earlier, she would not have married Tom.如果她在知道那件事，他就嫁给他了。（已经嫁了，意愿）If Lily had been a little more considerate, her husband might not have divorced her.如果 Lily 多体贴一点，他老公就和她离婚了。（已经离了，推测）虚拟倒装：If I were a bird, I would fly in the blue sky.If you had money, you should help him.If she had

21、known that earlier, she would not have married Tom.If Lily had been a little more considerate, her husband might not have divorced her.小结：虚拟开花：If 从句主句对现在事实的虚拟were/didwould do/be对过去事实的虚拟had done/beenwould have done/been常用经典句型Highlights开花句型Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a des

22、ert island.Whether we find a joke funny or not largely depends on where we have been brought up.The sense of humor is mysteriously bound up with national characteristics.Thirteen is not as good as one but it's better than nothing.there's nothing 1 can do about it.These days, people who do ma

23、nual work often receive far more money than clerks who work in offices.Such is human nature, that a great many people are often willing to sacrifice higher pay for the privilege ofbecoming white collar workers.This can give rise to curious situations, as it did in the case of Alfred Bloggs who worke

24、d as a dustman for theEllesmere Corporation.City born and city bred, I have always regarded the country as something you look at through a train window,or something you occasionally visit during the week-end.Despite the new tunnel, there are still a few people who rashly attempt to cross the Pass on

25、 foot.One of the things that fascinates us most about cats is the popular belief that they have none lives.The more you study English, the more you love it.Even by modern standards, the 46,000 ton Titanic was a colossal ship.Below, the captain realized to his horror that the Titanic was sinking rapi

26、dly.You either starve to death or live like Robinson Crusoe, waiting for a boat which never comes.There was a time when the owners of shop and businesses in Chicago had to pay large sums of money togangsters in return for' protection'People would rather pay large sums of money than have thei

27、r life work destroyed by gangsters.He soon made a name for himself and came to be known to the Italians as Giovanni Acuto.Father, of course, provides a regular supply of pocket-money, but uncles and aunts are always a source ofextra income.Though Verrazano is by no means considered to be a great exp

28、lorer, his name will probably remain immortal,for on November 21st, 1964, the greatest bridge in the world was named after him.In spite of this, some people-including myself-were surprised by a recent exhibition of modern sculpture.These Peculiar forms not only seemed designed to shock people emotio

29、nally, but to give them electric shocksas well !He was adored by rich and poor alike.Though he was technically a prize-he brought science to the game.er, Mendoza did much to change crude prize-ing into a sport, forIn many ways, this is unfortunate for the poor actors who are required to go on repeat

30、ing the same linesnight after night.The sad truth is that most of us have been brought up to eat certain foods and we stick to them all our lives.No creature has received more praise and abuse than the common garden snail.It is all very well for such things to occur in fiction.Instead of becoming a

31、doctor, however, he became a successful writer of detective stories.The sudden movement of the door made it sway slightly and it gave me the impression that it was about toleap out at me.No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements.I had no sooner got off the ship than I was assailed by a man

32、 who wanted to sell me a diamond ring.The man drank a little more than was good for him.Reward or punishment are out quite independent ofhuman interference.It has been said that everyone lives by selling something.In the light of this statement, teachers live by selling knowledge, philosophers by se

33、lling wisdom and priestsby selling spiritual comfort.Though it may be possible to measure the value of material goods in terms of money, it is extremely difficultto estimate the true value of the services which people perform for us.There are times when we would willingly give everything we possess

34、to save our lives, yet we might grudgepaying a surgeon a high fee for offering us precisely this service.He has deliberately chosen to lead the life he leads, fully aware of the consequencesAntique shops exert a peculiar fascination on a great many people.No one discovers a rarity by chance.A truly

35、dedicated searcher for art treasures must have patience, and above all, the ability to recognize theworth of some- thing when he sees it.The truth is that when mistakes occur, they are more likely to be ours than theirs.I noted with satisfaction that there was an express train to Westhaven.I could n

36、ot help noticing that a great many local people got on as well.At the time, this did not strike me as odd.It suddenly dawned on me that this express was not roaring down the line at ninetyan hour.There was a note of triumph in my voice when I told him that it was there in black and white.It has neve

37、r been explained why university students seem to enjoy practical jokes more than anyone else.Even he still lives under the illusion that country life is somehow superior to town life.Nothing can be compared with the first cock crow, theglinting on the trees and pastures.ing of birds at dawn, the sig

38、ht of the rising sunOn the other hand, your stomach would turn at the idea of frying potatoes in animal fat- the normallyaccepted practice in many northern countries.There are countless people who, ever since their early years, have learned to associate snails with food.My friend fails to mention th

39、e long and friendless winter eveningsHe says nothing about the poor selection of goods in the shops, or about those unfortunate people who haveto travel from the country to the city every day to get to work.Why people are prepared to tolerate a four hour journey each day for the dubious privilege of

40、living in the country is beyond me.If you can do without the few pastoral pleasures of the country, you will find the city can provide you withthe best that life can offer.Few things could be more impressive than the peace that descends on deserted city streets at week-endswhen the thousands that tr

41、avel to work everyday are tucked away in their homes in the country.It has always been ato me why city dwellers, who appreciate all these things, obstinately pretendthat they would prefer to live in the country.Perhaps it is the desire for solitude or the chance of making an unexpected discovery tha

42、t lures men down tothe depths of the earth.It is impossible to give a satisfactory explanation for a pot-holer's motives.For him, caves have the same peculiar fascination which high mountains have for the climber.Since its discovery, it has become a sort of potholers' Everest.Aeroplanes have

43、 the reputation of being dangerous and even hardened travelers are intimidated by them.They also have the grave disadvantage of being the most expensive form of transport.But nothing can match them for speed and comfort.Travelling at a height of 30,000 feet, far above the clouds, and at over 500expe

44、rience.an hour is an exhilaratingIt is a question of pride as much as anything else.In this much-travelled world, there are still thousands of places which are inaccessible to tourists.These attracted many visitors for they were not only of great architectural interest, but contained a largenumber o

45、f beautifully pfrescoes as well.There was no doubt that we were unwelcome visitors.During that time she so gained my aunt's confidence, that she was put in charge of the domestic staff.The New Year is a time for resolutions.If we remain inveterate smokers, it is only because we have so often exp

46、erienced the frustration that resultsfrom failure.How Harry came into the possession of this outlandish stuff makes an interesting story which he is fond ofrelating.Harry does not need to be prompted to explain how he bought his precious bottle of mud.The Swedes were the first to recognize that publ

47、ic officials like civil servants, collectors can make mistakes oract over-zealously in the belief that they are serving the public.No matter how much we like honey, or how much we have read about the uncanny sense of direction whichbees possess, we have a horror of being stung.Most of our fears are

48、unreasonable, but they are impossible to erase.Who has not stood in awe at the sight of a spider pouncing on a fly, or a column of ants triumphantly bearinghome an enormous dead beetle ?People tend to amass possessions, sometimes without being aware of doing so.Collecting, by occupying spare time so

49、 constructively, makes acontented, with no time for boredom.The over-punctual can be as much a trial to others as the unpunctual.常用替换Result ingive rise toBelievebe convinced of/ that Berise to / drop toFeel sound seemProve to be/ turn out to be ThinkI am aware thatI am conscious that写作语言的整体句子要求gener

50、osity of the language切忌空谈 ,多描写形容词的作用：总结，提示，但是只能在充分的描写后作总结或在展开描述前做提示。副词或者状语的作用只是给句子勾勒出一个大致的环境，或者是强调一下形容词，没有任何表现实在内容的作用。看一看，She is a smart：.She is a fantastically smart.She is a smartShe is a smartwith all working schedules well-planed.with all working schedules well-planned to avoid any waste of the

51、precious time.She is a beautiful girl.In my opinion, she is a beautiful girl. Generally speaking, she is a beautiful girl.She is a beautiful girl with moist eyes, cheery-like lips and rosy cheeks.She is a beautiful girl with moist eyes always talking, cherry-like lips clinging and rosy cheeks so inv

52、iting.Richness in sentence一个写句子的表标杆The reader felt horrified when he knew that thee had killed her 5 husbands.The reader's hair stands on end when he reads in the final pages of the novel that thee,a dear old lady who had always been so kind to everybody, had, in her youth, poisoned every one of

53、 her fivehusbands.问题所在：解决方式：总结：信心百倍写句子：I felt sad when I knew the Wenchuan earthquake killed many people in Sichuan province.I felt happy when I saw that the Yale university decided to recruit me as a student.SAT 写作思路整理卷面文字This essay gives you an opportuto show how effectively you can develop and ex

54、press ideas. You should,therefore, take care to develop your point of view, present your ideas logically and clearly, and use languageprecisely.Your essay must be written on the lines provided on your answer sheeryou will receive no other paper on which to write. You will have enough space if you wr

55、ite on every line, avoid wide margins, and keep your handwriting to a reasonable size. Remember that people who are not familiar with your handwriting willread what you write, try to write or print so that what you are writing is legible to those readers.Important reminders:A pencil is required for

56、the essay. An essay written in ink will receive a score of zero.Do not write your essay in your test book. You will receive credit only for what you write on your answer sheet.An off-topic essay will receive a score of zero.If your essay does not reflect your original and individual work, your test scores may be canceled.You have twenty-five minutes to write an essay on the topic assigned below.Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.Manys believe that to mov