上海市九年级初三中考英语-作文修改及亮点句型训练2

1、.1. Many interesting picture to go with the texts2. The passages are up to date, related to our everyday life, they can lead us to take an active part in class3. Practices our listening, speaking, reading and writing skills in an all-round way全方位建议和要求Suggestions1. There be more interesting topics2.

2、More passage about English and American cultures3. Some English songs on the tape going with the textbook例文：Dear editor, Hello. Im writing to make some comments and propose my suggestions on the textbook, New Century English, which is widely used by middle school students in Shanghai. First of all,

3、the illustrations and the content of this book are cool and attractive. Not only can they arouse students interest, but they also manage to inform us of the hottest topics lately. Besides, since the all-round ability is what students need most, the book provides us with the training of listening, sp

4、eaking, reading and writing skill. However, there are spots even on the sun. On behalf of my peer students, I strongly suggest adding more interesting topics concerning foreign culture to the book. Meanwhile, some English songs on the tape going with the textbook would be nice as well. In a word, as

5、 one of the users, its my only wish that the book can make some improvements to meet students needs. It will be nice of you to take my advice into consideration.Yours sincerely,Dora字数163修改意见：1 本文内容充实，语言精炼且构造明晰。2 几乎没有语法错误和不符合标准的表达。3 字数太多，可以适当精简范文修改如下：Dear editor, Hello. Im writing to make some commen

6、ts and propose my suggestions on the textbook, New Century English, which is widely used by middle school students in Shanghai. First of all, the illustrations and the content of this book are cool and attractive. Not only can they arouse students interests, but they also manage to inform us of the

7、hottest topics lately. Besides, since the all-round ability is what students need most, the book provides us with the training of listening, speaking, reading and writing skills. However, there are spots even on the sun. On behalf of my peer students, I strongly suggest adding more interesting topic

8、s concerning foreign culture to the book. Meanwhile, some English songs on the tape going with the textbook would be nice as well. In a word, as one of the users, its my only wish that the book can make some improvements to meet students needs. It will be nice of you to take my advice into considera

9、tion.Yours sincerely,Dora短语训练： 1. manage to to 成功做某事 be successful in doing sthsucceed in doing sth注意：在中考句转题型种经常考2. inform sb to do sth 告知某人去做某事inform sb of sth 告知某人某事inform sb that 告知某人某事3. provide sb with sth 提供某人某物provide sth for sb 给某人提供某物注意：中考单项选择和连词成句可能会考到4. meet ones needssatisfy ones require

10、ments 满足某人的需要注意：中考句转题型可能会考句型训练：1. not only 引导的倒装句“部分倒装他不仅说得更正确,而且讲得更不费力了.Not only did he speak more correctly, but he spoke more easily.2. 谚语学习A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush. 双鸟在林不如一鸟在手。A burnt child dreads the fire. 一朝被蛇咬，十年怕井绳。A clean hand wants no washing. 身正不怕影子斜。3. It is/wasthat/who强调句的用法It was he who broke the windows yesterday.正是他昨天打坏的窗户。It is in the store that they buy the interesting books.他们正是在那个商店买的书。4. It is+adj+of sb to do sth 和 It is+adj+for sb to do sthIt is inconsiderate of you to write so many