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1、专题五专题五 书面表达书面表达第二节庖公解牛层层突破第二节庖公解牛层层突破2下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能增分方案增分方案1写好开头句写好开头句开门见山明意图开门见山明意图A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。文章的开头应当做到新颖、良好的开端是成功的一半。文章的开头应当做到新颖、吸引人、感染人。英语写作的特点是开门见山，用简洁的语言、恰当的句式引出文吸引人、感染人。英语写作的特点是开门见山，用简洁的语言、恰当的句式引出文章的主题，使读者清楚文章要表达的主题。章的主题，使读者清楚文章要表达的主题。3下页下页末页末页上页上页

2、首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能一、赏析近三年全国卷写作范文的开头模式一、赏析近三年全国卷写作范文的开头模式1. (2019高考全国卷高考全国卷)Are you excited about our coming volleyball game against Yucai Middle School next Friday?2(2019高考全国卷高考全国卷)Im delighted to inform you that this years music festival will be held shortly.3(2018高考全国卷高考全国卷) Im delighted to know you

3、 are invited to a dinner party by your Chinese friend. 4. (2018高考全国卷高考全国卷)An English short film called Growing Together will be shown in the school hall at 7：30 pm.4下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能5(2018高考全国卷高考全国卷)Im glad to hear from you. In your letter you asked me about the sports in our school.6(201

4、7高考全国卷高考全国卷)I am very delighted to know you are interested in Tang Poems.Now Im writing to tell you the plan for the next class.7(2017高考全国卷高考全国卷)Im Li Hua. Im writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition.8(2017高考全国卷高考全国卷)How is everything going？I have good news to tell you that o

5、ur schools Table Tennis Team is admitting new members.5下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能6下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能增分方案增分方案2组好中间段组好中间段层峦叠嶂显功底层峦叠嶂显功底技巧一精准选词，妙笔生花技巧一精准选词，妙笔生花(一一)选用高级词汇选用高级词汇“四原则四原则”1具体性原则具体性原则在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体的事物或人时，类似例如：当描

6、述一个具体的事物或人时，类似a nice/good man的表达让人感觉很空的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如洞，我们可以用有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如kindhearted (好心的好心的)；generous (慷慨的；大方的慷慨的；大方的)；easygoing (随和的随和的)等。再如：等。再如：It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a good atmosphere.It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a ha

7、rmonious atmosphere.7下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能2新颖性原则新颖性原则写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。感觉。In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult.In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging.3短语优先原则短语优先原则多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。多

8、使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。Developing a good habit is also important.Developing a good habit is also of importance.8下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能4避免重复原则避免重复原则尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like read

9、ing while my brother enjoys watching football matches.9下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能(二二)高级词汇积累高级词汇积累50例例1(突然突然)想到想到thinkoccur to2意识到意识到realizebe aware of/that3应该应该shouldbe supposed to4机会机会chanceopportunity5选择选择choicealternative6考虑考虑o account/consideration7最终最终finallyeventually8勤奋的勤奋的h

10、ardworkingdiligent9分发分发hand outdistribute10下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能10后果后果resultconsequence11决定决定decidemake up ones mind12理解理解understandmake sense of/figure out13可用的可用的usableavailable14使用使用useemploy/make use of15帮助某人帮助某人help sb.do sb.a favor16种类繁多的种类繁多的all kinds ofa wide range of17和和andas well as

11、18反对反对be againstobject to11下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能19厌烦厌烦be bored withbe fed up with20忙于忙于be busy in/withbe occupied in/with21发生发生happencome about22提高提高improvepromote23重要的重要的importantvital24立即立即immediatelyin a flash25参加参加joinparticipate26巨大的巨大的largeenormous27有意义的有意义的meaningfulrewarding12下页下页末页末页

12、上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能28许多许多manya large quantity of29明显的明显的obviousapparent30合适的合适的properappropriate31丰富的丰富的richabundant32事实事实truththe case33走了走了/读了读了walk/readcover34有助于有助于be helpfulcontribute to35想到想到think ofcome up with36留出留出saveset aside13下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能37经常经常usuallymore often than not3

13、8很，十分很，十分verymore than39大多数大多数mostthe majority of40参加参加take part inparticipate in/get involved in41重要重要be importantcount/matter42与与不同不同be different fromdiffer/vary from43渴望做渴望做be eager to dobe dying to do/long to do/have a desire to do44因为因为because ofon account of45因因而闻名而闻名be famous forhave a reputa

14、tion for14下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能46记住记住rememberkeep.in mind47越来越多越来越多more and morean increasing number of48感到舒心感到舒心feel comfortablefeel at ease49成功做某事成功做某事succeed in doing sth.make it50临近临近neararound/round the corner15下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能技巧二句式丰富，表述地道技巧二句式丰富，表述地道1肯定不如双否好肯定不如双否好(1)In the

15、neighborhood Im famous.In the neighborhood there is nobody who does not know me.(2)We believe that he will succeed in carrying out the experiment.We dont doubt that he will succeed in carrying out the experiment.(3)The postman comes on time every day.The postman never fails to come on time.16下页下页末页末

16、页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能2陈述不如倒装妙陈述不如倒装妙(1)In the center of our school lies our library.(地点状语置于句首地点状语置于句首)(2)Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.(“only介词短语介词短语”置于句首置于句首)(3)Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the cars number.(形容词形容词as主语主语.)3主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧We can borrow five books at m

17、ost at a time, and we can keep them for ten days.At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.17下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能4非谓非谓(语语)结构不可少结构不可少(1)Being a student, Id like to know the price for students.(2)To make the class go smoothly, you are supposed to know about

18、 the history of the Tang Dynasty in advance.(3)Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help.(4)The exhibition will be held in the City Museum, located in the north of our city.(5)Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.18下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合

19、提能5各类从句要善用各类从句要善用(1)If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send you more information.(条件状语条件状语从句从句)(2)Though/Although/While regular exercise is very important, its never a good idea to exercise too close to bedtime.(让步状语从句让步状语从句)(3)From this experience I have learned that questioning can s

20、erve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.(宾语从句；定语从句宾语从句；定语从句)(4)Last but not least, everyone will be happy if praised, which is the common positive emotion that everybody likes to share.(定语从句定语从句)19下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能(5)“You cant judge a book by its cover，” as the old saying goes.(定

21、语从句定语从句)(6)My question how I shall get in touch with him has not been answered.(同位语从句同位语从句)(7)What I want to stress is that I have already been a volunteer for the 13th National Games which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.(名词性从句名词性从句)(8)Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do

22、 what we want to do.(状语从句；名状语从句；名词性从句词性从句)20下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能6常用句型很重要常用句型很重要(1)强调句型强调句型Its not what difficulties we meet once in a while that shapes our lives, but what attitudes we take to face them.I do believe you could solve it on time.(2)省略句式省略句式As (it is) scheduled, we participated

23、in several instructive activities.While (we were) visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists works.21下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能(3)虚拟语气虚拟语气I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.If only I could go back and reset my goals.To master

24、Mandarin, I strongly suggest you (should) practice with Chinese people.It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.22下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能(4)并列句式并列句式It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or no

25、t.By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.So, from now on, lets not waste our time on unimportant things but have a hearttoheart chat with our parents once in a while.23下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能(5)it句型句型Everyone in our society should help

26、those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(形式主语形式主语)I consider it quite interesting to learn the poems written in the Tang Dynasty with you.(形式宾语形式宾语)I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.(固定句式固定句式)When it comes to the effect, it will hel

27、p you to enhance the sense of keeping fit but it may cause you to be overly anxious.(固定句式固定句式)24下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能技巧三衔接过渡，巧妙运用技巧三衔接过渡，巧妙运用1表示时间顺序的过渡性词语表示时间顺序的过渡性词语at the beginning/end of, in the end, afterwards, since then, meanwhile, immediately, after that, from then on, all of a sudden,

28、 at present, after a while, at the same time, in the past, to begin with 2表示递进关系的过渡性词语表示递进关系的过渡性词语whats more, moreover, furthermore, besides, in addition, to make things worse, the most important of all, worst of all, especially, in particular 3表示并列和转折关系的过渡性词语表示并列和转折关系的过渡性词语however, while, otherwise

29、, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, after all, nevertheless, as well as, neither.nor., not only.but also., either.or., not.but.25下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能4表示条件和让步关系的过渡性词语表示条件和让步关系的过渡性词语as/so long as, unless, in case (of), on condition that, even if/though, as 5表示因果关系的过渡性词语表示因果关系的过渡性词语because

30、 (of), now that, thanks to, due to, as a result/consequence (of), therefore/thus, since6表示列举事实或观点的过渡性词语表示列举事实或观点的过渡性词语such as, for example/instance, take.for example, that is to say, as follows, in other words, on (the) one hand.on the other hand., for one thing.for another., personally., in ones op

31、inion/view, as far as sb. is concerned, as for sb.7表示总结的过渡性词语表示总结的过渡性词语in short, in brief, in a word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general/generally speaking, in conclusion26下页下页末页末页上页上页首页首页课后综合提能课后综合提能增分方案增分方案3写好结尾句写好结尾句首尾呼应映主题首尾呼应映主题在书信的结尾处我们常使用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表在书信的结尾处我们常使用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表达愿望或期待等。达愿望或期待等。1I think I am qualified to be a volun