202X202X学年高中英语Unit16StoriesPeriodSeven课件北师大版选修6

1、StoriesUnit 16PART 1技法点拨PART 2写作训练Period SevenWritingEvents in my lifePART 1技法点拨文体分析 把握写作动脉本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。此类记叙文以表达一件事为本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。此类记叙文以表达一件事为主，说明事情发生的时间、地点、前因后果及人物。着重说明事情的起因、主，说明事情发生的时间、地点、前因后果及人物。着重说明事情的起因、经过和结果。经过和结果。本卷须知：本卷须知：1.根本构造：通常由开头、主体和结尾三局部组成。根本构造：通常由开头、主体和结尾三局部组成。2.时态：通常用一般过去时

2、。时态：通常用一般过去时。3.人称：一般用第一人称或者第三人称来表达事件。人称：一般用第一人称或者第三人称来表达事件。写作指导1.It is such an interesting experience that I will not forget it forever.2.All of us have learned a lot from this activity.3.It was a beautiful day and the sun was shining.4.I felt happy to have spent such a nice day with them.5.On the w

3、ay to school，I met a stranger.6.The children were so happy that they all jumped with joy.7.In my opinion，its such a meaningful day that we should remember it. 8.The students all benefited a lot from this long journey.常用表达PART 2写作训练弄清文络 写作妙笔生花假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom 来信询问你来信询问你“五一假期是怎样度过五一假期是怎样度

4、过的。请根据以下信息给他回信，谈谈你的。请根据以下信息给他回信，谈谈你 “五一假期中的活动。五一假期中的活动。写作要点：写作要点：1.休息休息(由于平时学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息由于平时学习紧张，缺少锻炼和休息)；2.看望农村的祖父母看望农村的祖父母(帮助他们做点家务，并跟他们讲述发生在自己身边帮助他们做点家务，并跟他们讲述发生在自己身边的新鲜事的新鲜事)；3.和朋友进展了短途旅游和朋友进展了短途旅游(欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气欣赏大自然，呼吸新鲜空气)。注意：注意：1.词数词数100 左右；左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：五一假期参考词汇：五一假期

5、May Day holiday审题审题写作要求是介绍五一假期里所做的事情。写作时应注意下面几点：写作要求是介绍五一假期里所做的事情。写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇叙事类记叙文，写作中应注意叙事类记叙文的常规确定文体：这是一篇叙事类记叙文，写作中应注意叙事类记叙文的常规格式。格式。2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主。3.主体人称：由于是介绍自己经历的事情，所以人称应该以第一人称为主。主体人称：由于是介绍自己经历的事情，所以人称应该以第一人称为主。审题谋篇 谋篇谋篇第一段：问候和交代写信目的。第一段：问候和交代写信目的。第二段：表达五一假期的活动。

6、第二段：表达五一假期的活动。第三段：询问对方的假期活动。第三段：询问对方的假期活动。必备词汇必备词汇1.好好休息好好休息_2.因为，由于因为，由于_3.缺少睡眠缺少睡眠_4.做家务做家务_5.而且而且_6.欣赏欣赏的美的美_查看答案have a good restas a result oflack of sleepdo some houseworkwhats more遣词造句appreciate the beauty of.关键句式关键句式1.我因为近期学业负担太重、缺少睡眠和体育锻炼而经常感到疲惫。我因为近期学业负担太重、缺少睡眠和体育锻炼而经常感到疲惫。I feel tired as a

7、 result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise.2.我好好休息了一下。我好好休息了一下。I had a good rest.3.我的爷爷奶奶生活在农村。我的爷爷奶奶生活在农村。My grandparents are living in the countryside.4.我和爷爷奶奶一起住了两天。我和爷爷奶奶一起住了两天。I stayed with my grandparents for two days.5.我和朋友去旅行了。我和朋友去旅行了。I had a trip with m

8、y friends. 6.我们去那里是为了欣赏大自然之美和呼吸新鲜空气。我们去那里是为了欣赏大自然之美和呼吸新鲜空气。We went there to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air.句式升级句式升级1.请把句请把句1和句和句2按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。(1)I had a good rest as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise.(because)(2)

9、as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise，I had a good rest.(现在分词短语作状语现在分词短语作状语)查看答案because I often felt tiredFeeling tired2.请把句请把句3和句和句4按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。(1)It took me two days to stay with my grandparents _.(who引导定语从句引导定语从句)(2)It took me two da

10、ys to stay with my grandparents _.(现在分词短语作定语现在分词短语作定语)查看答案who are living in thecountrysideliving in the countryside3.请把句请把句5和句和句6按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。按下面括号内的提示合成一句话。(1)Whats more，I had a trip with my friends _.(so that)(2)Whats more，I had a trip with my friends _.(动词不定式短语作目的状语动词不定式短语作目的状语)查看答案so that we c

11、ould appreciatethe beauty of nature and breathe fresh airto appreciate the beauty ofnature and breathe fresh air用适当的过渡词语连接以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇用适当的过渡词语连接以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇100词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。查看答案组句成篇参考范文参考范文Dear Tom，Im very glad to receive your letter.And its a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the May Day holiday.First，feeling tired as a result of my heavy