202X_202X学年高中英语Module5TripAlongtheThreeGorgesSectionⅣWriting课件外研版必修4

1、-1-Section Writing写作指导针对训练写作思路概要写作概要写作概要写作是近几年高考的新题型。此题型要求考生根据一篇350词以内的短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要,以此来考查学生准确获取关键词,对文章大意进行归纳概括,并用简洁的语言转述文章重要信息的能力。考生要在正确理解短文的基础上,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点,是对阅读理解能力和书面表达能力的综合考查。短文选材以说明文和议论文为主,文章结构比较明晰,通常包含4个左右的要点。考生要客观准确归纳要点,不照搬原文句子,要点之间要恰当衔接,全文内容要连贯,过渡要自然。 范文赏读写作指导针对训练写作思路阅读下面短文,根据

2、其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Eating healthily and exercising to get your body fit can feel like a lot of work.In fact, sometimes it can feel like so much work that you might not even want to try! Have no fear, thoughthere are some fun ways to get your body healthy.You might think that going to a gym and working

3、 out on exercise equipment is the only or the best way to get fit, but thats just not so.There are loads of things you can do outside of the gym to keep yourself healthy! Think a hike might be a bit challenging for you?Take a walk on the beach or in a park.Youll get extra points if you take your who

4、le walk on the sand; it provides some resistance and will give you a better workout.范文赏读写作指导针对训练写作思路Dancing is one of the very best forms of exercise.It works a lot of different muscles, and there are endless varieties of dances to keep you entertained.Some people avoid dancing because they may not

5、have a partner to go to a dance class with.There are many types of dances you can do solo! Maybe you should go out on a limb and try hip-hop dancing or tap dancing you can do both of those on your own.Dont feel like taking a dance class?You dont need to! Put on some music and have a dance party by y

6、ourself in your room, with your friends in the halls at school, or even with your family in the living room!范文赏读写作指导针对训练写作思路There are lots of great reasons to get exercise and keep your body and brain healthy.Keep in mind that increasing your regular movement doesnt mean that you have to go to extre

7、mes by running to the gym seven days a weekthere are fun and easy ways to introduce more exercise into your life.范文赏读写作指导针对训练写作思路一、细读短文,明确篇章结构,确定要点数量。首先,仔细阅读短文。阅读的目的是确定文章的体裁和主题,明确篇章结构。根据意义划分段落,然后对段落划分层次,确定要点的数量。本文是一篇说明文,共有四个自然段。主要说明了保持健康,加强体育锻炼的方法。二、处理文章,抓住主题句,删除细节信息。 明确全文结构之后,就要对文章内容进行处理。处理的目的是删除次要

8、内容,保留主要内容。文中描述性的语言、细节和列举的示例都属于要删除的内容。剩余的主要部分要仔细研读,与主题相关的关键词句要重点标注出来,这些词句就是最后归纳转述的要点。 文章第一段概括说,保持健康有很多好方法。主旨句是最后一句:.there are some fun ways to get your body healthy。范文赏读写作指导针对训练写作思路第二段第四句是本段的主题句:Take a walk on the beach or in a park.在沙滩上或者公园里散步。第三段第一句是本段的主旨句:Dancing is one of the very best forms of e

9、xercise.跳舞是锻炼身体的最佳方法之一。 第四段第二句是本段的主旨句:Keep in mind that increasing your regular movement doesnt mean that you have to go to extremes by running to the gym seven days a week.记住,增加你的规律运动并不意味着你一周七天跑步去健身房。范文赏读写作指导针对训练写作思路三、逐段进行归纳,提取关键信息,准确转述要点 。删除了短文中的细节、例证等细枝末节后,每段的主要内容已经明确,然后要用自己的语言准确地表述各段的要点。为避免和原文的句子重复,可使用同义转述的形式,也可以用句子重构的方式来完成要点归纳。归纳时要分清主次,各要点的词数应根据文中对应的内容来定。归纳后每段的要点为:第一段:There are some fun ways to keep fit.第二段:Its a good way for you to take a walk on the beach or in the park.第三段:Dancing is a great way to exercise your muscles.第四段:If you want to keep fit, you dont h