书面表达常见错误课件

1、关于书面表达常见错误现在学习的是第1页，共44页书面表达常见错误2 不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正确所写句子虽然语法正确,却却不符合英语表达习惯不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少汉语式英造成不少汉语式英语病句语病句.要减少汉式病句必须做到要减少汉式病句必须做到: (1)养成养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达化差异所带来的不同表达. (2)平时多归纳平时多归纳总结总结,纠正汉式英语纠正汉式英语. (3)多收听对外广播、多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报收

2、看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其它材料纸及其它材料.现在学习的是第2页，共44页书面表达常见错误3误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正:或误:Good good study, day day up. 正:It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary.If you study hard ,you will make progress every day.The dictionary cost him five yuan.现在学习的是第3页，共44页书面表达常见错误4误:Here is suitable

3、to grow cash crops. 正:误:There is a notice in the park saying “ To take notice of safe; the sidewalk is very crafty.” 正:It is suitable to grow cash crops here.There is a notice in the park saying “Watch your step. Slippery sidewalk.”现在学习的是第4页，共44页书面表达常见错误5误: His fever is high. 正: 误: The student is st

4、anding there is my brother. 正: 或He has a high fever.The student standing there is my brother. The student who is standing there is my brother.现在学习的是第5页，共44页书面表达常见错误6误: The price of the computer is expensive. 正: 误: The population of China is many. 正:The price of the computer is high.The population of

5、 China is large.现在学习的是第6页，共44页2011-10-18书面表达常见错误7误: Recently our village have taken place great changes . 正: 误: There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. 正:Recently great changes have taken place in our village.Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing.现在学习的是第7页，共44页书面表达常见

6、错误8误: That factory broke out a fire last Sunday. 正: 误: This building likes a school. 正:A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday.This building looks like/is a school.现在学习的是第8页，共44页书面表达常见错误9误: He will able to write articles in English next year. 正: 误: I will by bus to Beijing. 正:He will be able to

7、 write articles in English next year.Ill go to Beijing by bus tomorrow.现在学习的是第9页，共44页书面表达常见错误10误: Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 正: 误: His friends are few. 正: Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.He has few friends.现在学习的是第1

8、0页，共44页书面表达常见错误11误: Wei Fangs father scolded her coming late to school. 正:Wei Fangs father scolded her for her coming late to school.现在学习的是第11页，共44页书面表达常见错误12误: To attend this meeting is important. 正: 误: His teaching methods are many. 正:It is important to attend this meeting.He has many teaching met

9、hods.现在学习的是第12页，共44页书面表达常见错误13错误类型二错误类型二:句子结构不完整或句子结构不完整或结构错误结构错误现在学习的是第13页，共44页书面表达常见错误14 一个句子至少包括主语和谓语一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分两部分(祈使句除外祈使句除外)。如果把句。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子，子的某一个部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。两个各含就会导致非完整句子。两个各含有主语和谓语的分句不能写在一有主语和谓语的分句不能写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开。起，也不能只用逗号隔开。现在学习的是第14页，共44页书面表达常见错误15误: There were foreigne

10、rs came to our school.正: 误: Without a friend will feel lonely.正:There were foreigners who came to our school.Without a friend one will feel lonely.现在学习的是第15页，共44页书面表达常见错误16误: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor.正: 正:The girls cleaned the desks and chairs; the boys moppe

11、d the floor.The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor.现在学习的是第16页，共44页书面表达常见错误17误: The book was interesting. I read it rapidly.正: 正:The book was interesting; I read it rapidly.The book was interesting, and I read it rapidly.现在学习的是第17页，共44页书面表达常见错误18误: The woman talked to y

12、ou just now is our English teacher.正: 误: I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.正:The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.I cant imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets.现在学习的是第18页，共44页书面表达常见错误19误: China is no longer what used to be .正: 误

13、: Although rained, we went on working.正:China is no longer what it used to be .Although it rained, we went onworking.现在学习的是第19页，共44页书面表达常见错误20误: They finished the homework, they went out.正: 误: I am tired, I must go to bed.正:Since/As they finished the homework, they went out.I am tired, so I must go

14、to bed.现在学习的是第20页，共44页书面表达常见错误21误:The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow.正:The sun gives off heat and light, which makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow.现在学习的是第21页，共44页书面表达常见错误22误:You practise more reading, you will improve your r

15、eading ability.正:现在学习的是第22页，共44页书面表达常见错误23误:I arrived at the station, the train had left.正:When I arrived at the station, the train had left.现在学习的是第23页，共44页书面表达常见错误24误: China is still a developing country, most people cant afford a car.正:现在学习的是第24页，共44页书面表达常见错误25错误类型三：错误类型三：重复累赘重复累赘现在学习的是第25页，共44页书面

16、表达常见错误26 有些英语单词本身自带某有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某个单词，而学生能再出现某个单词，而学生基本功夫不够扎实，常常出基本功夫不够扎实，常常出现累赘现象。现累赘现象。现在学习的是第26页，共44页书面表达常见错误27误: The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.正: 误: We hope to improve our work better.正:The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.We hope to improv

17、e our work.现在学习的是第27页，共44页书面表达常见错误28误: We are very like his lesson.正: 误: Yours class was interesting.正:We like his lesson very much.Your class was interesting.现在学习的是第28页，共44页书面表达常见错误29误: In spite of the fact he is lazy, I like him.正: 误: Personally I think he is a good student.正:In spite of his lazin

18、ess, I like him.I think he is a good student.现在学习的是第29页，共44页书面表达常见错误30误: I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the reason it is far away from my home.正:I seldom go to the Shanghai Librarybecause it is far away from my home.现在学习的是第30页，共44页书面表达常见错误31误: Mary married with John.正: 误: I returned back

19、 the book to you yesterday.正:Mary married John.I returned the book to you yesterday.现在学习的是第31页，共44页书面表达常见错误32误: The teacher repeated the sentence again.正: 误: My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.正:The teacher repeated the sentence.My favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.现在学习的是第32页，共44页书面表达常见错误33误: The

20、 train is entering into the tunnel.正:The train is entering the tunnel.现在学习的是第33页，共44页书面表达常见错误34错误类型四：错误类型四：句子缺乏逻辑性或句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性连贯性现在学习的是第34页，共44页书面表达常见错误35 一个句子必须表达一个完整、一个句子必须表达一个完整、前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的意思放子一个句字里或一个句子表达不意思放子一个句字里或一个句子表达不完整，就会出现逻辑问题。完整，就会出现逻辑问题。 句子无句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自论长短

21、，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内语意关系明确。而学生在习然，使句内语意关系明确。而学生在习作过程中常出现悬垂修饰语、指代不明、作过程中常出现悬垂修饰语、指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完缺少过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完整的分割句等错误。整的分割句等错误。现在学习的是第35页，共44页书面表达常见错误36误: Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard.正: 误: Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl. She will be successful in anything she tries.正: Being an

22、 honest man, Tom never tells a lie.AS she has a strong will and confidence in herself, Liu Hua may be successful in anything she tries.现在学习的是第36页，共44页书面表达常见错误37误: Rose is in love with John, John is in love with Mary.正:Rose is in love with John, but John is in love with Mary.现在学习的是第37页，共44页书面表达常见错误38错误类型五：错误类型五：语法、词法错误语法、词法错误现在学习的是第38页，共44页书面表达常见错误39 许多考生写作中易犯关系许多考生写作中易犯关系不一致、词性混用、选词或不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当，时态语态错误、搭配不当，时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。的错误。现在学习的是第39页，共44页书面表达常见错误40误: In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.正: 误: He closed the door and hurri