【英语学习】TOEFL Writing

1、TOEFL Writing整理课件FC: recommendationo 1.把“不择手段背单词”导入金山词霸o Insouciant o Pout o Putrefaction o 2. 下载Merriam-Webster 整理课件SB. Changjun. Senior Grade 2o First and foremost, to live in a big city can bring about a great deal of convenience. The reason is obvious. In the first place, the big city has develo

2、ped public transportation system. The best example to exemplified and illustrated this idea is that we do not have to worry about how to go to the destination if we do not have a car, (for, since, because) we can just take the subway, bus or taxi. All of them are convenient and save the time. 整理课件o

3、What is more, there are many shopping malls, super markets and restaurants in the big city. Lending credence to my position is the fact that when I do not want to prepare tedious and complicated meal, I can go outside and choose a fancy restaurant. The big city provides us with lots of (a variety of

4、) choices such as Mexican food, western food, barbecue, and fast food. Instead of worrying about how to change the favor and type of food at home, we can go outside and eat the food from all over the world if we live in a big city.整理课件o Another equally significant reason for my position lies in the

5、fact that the big city brings a variety of fun for our life. There is no denying the fact that many people are looking for a best way to spend their leisure time. To listen a live concert, to drink some beer in the bar, to have fun in the KTV are the choices people always makes. Countless surveys in

6、dicate that people in increasing numbers are willing to relief the pressure from work and study and therefore a big city is the best place to fulfill their requirements. Consequently, it is no exaggeration to say that living in a big city exerts an undeniable favorable impact on our life.整理课件o Apart

7、 from the two reasons mentioned above, there is another vital factor deserving some words here. We can first reach the top technological products in a big city. IN ADDITION, we have the best opportunity to meet our favorite movie star, both of which are readily accessible in a modern metropolis.整理课件

8、o Admittedly, this is not the whole story. The quiet and clean environment of the small town is readily discernible, such as beautiful field, lovely animals and amazing views of sunset. However, the benefits of living in a big city , as I mentioned above, outweigh that of the small town, and therefo

9、re I reinforce my standpoint that big city brings more benefits for us to live in.整理课件o 或：To sum up, living in a big city not only endows us with considerable convenience but also provides us with fun and high-technology. Therefore, I reinforce my standpoint that big city brings more benefits for us

10、 to live in. (把前面观点总结下)整理课件o 层次+细节=成功o 清晰的框架o 到位的细节o 简单的开头o 成熟的结尾整理课件综合部分得分示意ReadingListeningRelationScore(Raw)Only Copy000改写0/little01改写1Omitted 2改写2联系有误3改写3但细节遗漏不全面4改写3 完美细节全面5整理课件oA-R1oB-R2oC-R3oA-R1oB-R2oC-R3整理课件写作的三大境界o 1.what to writeo 2.elaborate what to writeo 3.refine and polish it TOEFL?GR

11、E?整理课件Building Blockso P109o Complementary vocabulary:o run counter too Conflict with o Challenge o Object to o Contrast with o Deviate from 整理课件o 听力材料听力材料：1.the listening part/material/passage/-o 2. the lecture(r)o 3. the professoro 4. the speakero 阅读材料：阅读材料：o the reading part/material/passage/-整理课

12、件Template o Introduction:听总+读总（含两者关系）+（再次点明关系）o P1:听1+听听1细节细节+读1o P2:听2+听听2细节细节+读2o P3:听3+听听3细节细节+读3o Conclusion (Omitted)整理课件Example:o Firstly, the speaker raises the issue that 听1总 . According to him, 听1的所有细节. On the contrary, the passage, rather deviating from the speaker, demonstrates that 读1总+读

13、1细节（略）o Therefore, this point is contradicted by what the lecture contends. （不必要） 整理课件The Reading Parto 一.改写的训练o 1. 同义词 wayo 2. 同根词 appreciate o 3. 短语 many o 4. 主动被动的替换o 5. 全新的表达法o Amazing changes in C.S took place over the past 50 years. 整理课件o The past 50 years (have) witnessed amazing changes in C

14、.S.o The past half century was accompanied by amazing changes in C.S. 整理课件o Example: A large company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near the community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Expla

15、in your position. 整理课件二.The Obstacles of Reading o 1. 单词真空o 2. 从小到大整理课件三.WAY OUTo Purpose: obtain information effectively and efficiently o 1. Feel comfortable about the new words you encounter: ignore o 2. 从大到小: o a). Discover keywordso b) summarize the key words 整理课件Topic: Teamworko Reading: ado 1

16、. more knowledgeo 2. more quicklyo More 人/more Ro 3. creative o Risky decisiono Spreads responsibility to all o Listening: disad整理课件PRACTICE o o The Meerkats 整理课件The listening Parto Two Premises:o 1. Cantonese: 1000 hourso 2. English?整理课件The Way Outo 1. devote timeo o 2. effective listening 整理课件o Listen to long passages and write down key words. Then combine key words to sentences. And then orally summar