高考作文写作指导

1、2004年NMET 书面表达题写作指导题目 假设你是李华，你的一位美国朋友Paul想在暑假来中国学习汉语。你帮他询问了暑假汉语班的情况。请根据下列要点写封回信。* 时间：7月初开始，4小时/天（周一至周五）* 程度：三个级别（初级到高级）* 授课教师经验丰富，小班上课注意：1. 词数：100左右 2. 可根据要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯写作思路分析这是一封回信。信的开头和结尾已给出。可按照书信的格式以及提供的要点顺序来写。要求语言准确精练，条理清楚。注意运用书信的相关客套语。并且适当运用过渡词语，尽可能写出一两个较复杂的长句来，提升短文的档次。具体写作方法如下：一、认真审题，明确人称和时态审

2、题是英语写作的关键，只有仔细审题，才能保证书面表达不走样。书面表达的审题要从两个方面抓起：一是“内容”；二是“形式”。所谓“内容”就是写什么；所谓“形式”就是文体，适用的时态和人称。通过阅读题目，我们可以确定：体裁属于应用文；主要时态为一般现在时，所用人称为第一人称。二、构思框架，列出要点构思框架即根据题目文字材料或图画图表等提示内容，提取重要信息，按照一定的时间顺序空间顺序或者逻辑顺序排队，罗列要点。它是解答书面表达题的一个重要步骤。书面表达题的框架在构思过程中要全面、具体、明确、恰当。审题后，按照题意提取出重要信息，切勿遗漏。此题根据文字材料的提示，可将要点归纳如下：1开头和结尾句(the

3、 beginning and the end of the letter)2开学日期及上课时间(in early July and four hours a day, from Monday to Friday)3分三个级别(three levels, from beginning to advanced)4教师经验丰富(experienced teachers)5小班上课(small classes)三 选用句式，联词成句要点确定之后，学生可根据审题时所确定的人称和时态，选用准确的词汇、短语和句型，简单地写出每个要点相对应的主题句：1I am glad that you are going

4、to take a Chinese course this summer. I am happy to learn that you are going to China to learn Chinese this summer.2The course will start in early July. It will take you four hours a day to learn Chinese, five days a week from Monday to Friday.3There are three levels of the Chinese language course,

5、from beginning to advanced. Our university runs summer Chinese course at three levels, from beginning to advanced. 4All the teachers are very experienced in teaching foreign students. All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience.5Lessons will be given in small classes.写作过程中要灵活运用所学词汇、短语和句型

6、来组织语言。尽量使用最熟悉的、最有把握的句型。遇到生疏的词句应灵活变通，用知道的、近义的代替拿不准的未知的。同时, 为了使书面表达生动并富有变化, 尽可能使用长短交错的句式. 也应该根据文章内容和具体写作的需要, 恰倒好处地使用一定的复合句和并列句，以此来提升短文的档次四、运用衔接，连句成篇一篇好的文章，不仅需要正确丰富的内容巧妙的构思和规范地道的表达，还需要有把这些内容有机联系起来的语篇衔接手段，即我们常说的关联词、连接性副词、以及一些介词和短语等。联词成句后，按照行文的先后，运用恰当的关联词语（如 and, but, also, or, so, then, before, after等）把

7、根据要点扩充的句子有机地联系起来，使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然，结构紧密，整个文章连贯流畅:Dear Paul, I am so glad that you are planning to take a summer course in China. Our university runs summer Chinese courses at three levels, from beginning to advanced. All the courses start in early July. Lessons will not only be given in small classes

8、 of no more than ten students, but also are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students, so I think you will get a lot of practice and knowledge in such a class. Classes meet four hours a day, five days a week Monday through Friday. If you decide to come or need any further information, do let me know. Yours, Li Hua五、检查全文，修改错误检查和修改是书面表达中最