(新)高考英语作文指导

1、我们一路奋战，不是为了改变世界，而是为了不让世界改变我们1高考英语作文指导(一)怎样才能得高分从高考阅卷来看，低分作文往往是：书写潦草凌乱，胡乱涂画，简单低级错误较多(词不达意，语法错误， 行文没有层次性或层次感差，逻辑性混乱等等) ，再就是词数不足，缺少亮点。高分作文：首先是书写干净利 落，视觉美感强；文章结构匀称，不头重脚轻。其次是用词好，过渡自然流畅，句式丰富，亮点多。 平时老师在讲评作文时，经常告诉学生说，作文要得高分，就得有高级句型和高级词汇；但很多同学在写作 文时，总认为高级句型和高级词汇很神秘，高不可及。高级句型也是 “难于上青天 ”。其实，未必如此！通过 研读一些优秀的学生习作

2、和历年高考高分作文，我们发现，很多所谓的高级句型和高级词汇正是我们老师反 复讲解和训练的。下面列举一些常见且高级的词汇和句型，供参考。一高级词汇1 occur 替换 think of/have an ideaSudde nly I had an idea that some one had broke n into my house.An idea occurred to me thatsome one had broke n into my house. It occurred to me that some one had broke n into my house. 2 devote 替

3、换 spendHe spe nds all his spare time in readi ng.He devotes all his spare time to readi ng.He spe nds half of his money on books.He devotes half of his money to books(bu ying books).3 seek 替换 want / look forThey sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees.4 average 替换 ordinaryIm an average

4、 ( ordinary ) student.5 but 替换 veryThe film we saw last ni ght was very in teresti ng.The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting.The film we saw last night was anything but boring.6 seat 替换 sitOn his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried.7 supp

5、ose 替换 shouldHe is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly.8 appreciate 替换 thankThank you very much for you help.We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated.9 the case 替换 trueI don tthink it is the case ( true ).10 on 替换 as soon asAs soon as he arrived, he bega n his re

6、search.On his arrival, he began his research.11 due to 替换 because ofHe arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm.12 cover 替换 walk/readAfter covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired.13 contribute to 替换 be helpful/usefulPle nty of memory work is un doubtedly helpful to En glish study.Plenty o

7、f memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study.14round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby1The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans?2Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby).15 come to light 替换 discoverThe family were so pleased whe n they disco

8、vered the lost jewels.放弃很简单，但你坚持到底的样子一定很酷！放弃很简单，但你坚持到底的样子一定很酷！2我们一路奋战， 不是为了改变世界， 而是为了不让世界改变我们The familywere so pleased when the lost jewels came to light.16 have a ball 替换 have a good time/ enjoy oneselfAfter visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time

9、 ).17 come up with 替换 think ofJack is very clever. He often comes up with ( thinks of ) new ideas.18 set aside 替换 saveSome students think that they should set aside some of their pocket money for books.19be of + n. 替换 adj. be of great importance/necessary/valueThe products are of high quality (very

10、good ) and are sold everywhere in China.20 refer to 替换 talk about/of, mentionThe professor you referred to (talked about ) is very famous.21 can not but / can not help but 替换 have to doI could not but (had to) go home.22 more often than not 替换 usuallyMore often than not (Usually), the meaning of man

11、y words can be easily guessed.23 lest 替换 so that /in order thatI wrote dow n his telepho ne nu mber so that I would not forget it.I wrote down his telephone number lest I (should) forget it.24be long for sth. / be long to do sth. 替换 want to do sth./wish forI want to see you very much. I am long to s

12、ee you.25 be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换 be interested inHe is caught up in ( very interested in ) collecting stamps.26 more than 替换 very1Im very glad to lear n that you are coming in September.Im more than glad to learn that you are coming in September.2If there is a

13、nything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.27 pe rfect (ly) 替换 good/ very wellHe speaks perfect ( good ) English./ He speaks English perfectly ( very well ).28 do sb a/the favor 替换 helpWould you please do me the favor ( help me ) to turn down the radio?29 the other day 替换 a few days

14、 agoThe other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.30 in the course of 替换 duringIn the course of (During) the mountain-climbing, please help each other and pay special attention to your safety.31 the majority of 替换 mostThe majority of (Most of ) the interviewees prefer watching TV at h

15、ome to going to the cinema.32 consist of 替换 be made up ofOur class consists of ( is made up of ) 50 students.33be worn out 替换 be tired / broken1After five hours non-stop work, we were all worn out (tired).2My shoes are worn out (broken). Please buy me a new pair.34 become of 替换 happenWhat do think h

16、as become of ( happened to ) him ?35attend 替换 look after :He has to attend his little brother/his sick mother.36 on condition that 替换 as long as37 nevertheless 替换 however38express one s satisfaction with 替换 be satisfied with放弃很简单，但你坚持到底的样子一定很酷！339 spare no efforts to do 替换 try one s best to do40 man

17、y a 替换 many41be rushed off one s feet 替换 be busy in doing我们一路奋战，不是为了改变世界，而是为了不让世界改变我们放弃很简单，但你坚持到底的样子一定很酷!442 . a handful of 替换 a little / some43 . mean while 替换 at the same time44 . get to one feet 替换 stand up45 . beneath 替换 under46 . occasi on ally 替换 sometimes /once in while47 . for instanee 替换 fo

18、r example48 . seldom 替换 not often49. wealthy 替换 rich50 . amazing 替换 surprising51 . as a matter of fact 替换 in fact二.高级句型结构It 句型1It will be + some time + before It won be long before humans visit the Mars.2It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very importa nt for us to lear n computer well, because

19、it has cha nged our life so much.He said since it was a new model in Chin a, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.3It is +被强调部分 + that1) It is what Yang Liwei has done that en courages us a lot.2) Those who like readi ng exte nsively say it is through readi ng that we get our kn

20、o wledge.more than any other 表示最高级Among the opti onal courses, spoke n En glish and computer study are more popular tha n any one else.名词从句(特别是同位语从句)1It would mea n a great deal to me to liste n to the tape and lear n what is covered in the talk._2My hometow n is no Ion ger what it used to be.3What

21、I want to make clear is that 4The suggestion that we should take actions to fight against pollution was appreciated by(非限制性)定语从句1The flat is in a buildi ng on Fan gcao Street. It is not far from Jia nxin Chin ese School.The flat is in a buildi ng on Fan gcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chi

22、nese School._2It was quite an experie nee for both of us. I will n ever forget (it) for the rest of my life.It was quite an experienee for us both, which I never forget for the rest of my life.分词结构1I don tknow about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and atten

23、ding classes as well.2We mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people._3Hearing this, a few people bega n to run after him.4Born in America n, Thomas Edis on was a great scie ntist and inven tor.with 结构 A terrible accide nt happe ned yesterday, with nine people k

24、illed and almost eighty injured._2He was carry ing a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder, with a large suitcase in his left hand._3With a lot of work to do/With a lot of problem to settle,etc.4We found the house easily with the little boy leading the way5She left the room with all the lights on.

25、倒装句1The library is to the east of the teach ing buildi ng.我们一路奋战，不是为了改变世界，而是为了不让世界改变我们放弃很简单，但你坚持到底的样子一定很酷!5East of the teach ing buildi ng is the library.2Although we are tired, we are happy.Tired as we are, we are happy.3Only in this way can he grow to be a useful man.4May all your dreams come true

26、! May our frien dship last till the end of the uni verse.!巧妙的改写(1) Only 改成 no one butOnly Tom passed the exam last week.No one but Tom passed the exam.(2) as soon as 改成 No sooner than /Hardly when /Immediately /The moment No sooner had wearrived at the cinema than the film started.(3) have sb/sth do

27、/doneThe girl was kno cked off her bicycle and had her leg broke n (her leg was broke n.).其它注重句子的开头1用 with 复合结构开头With the sun sett ing in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, weve learned how to analyze and settle problems.With the functions of in sert ing, deleti ng, moving and copy in g, it en a