大学英语四级写作技巧

1、CET-42022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved2第一部分 写作分值及评分标准介绍; 第二部分 写作步骤; 厘清思路,把握文章结构 注意表达,用亮点词句得高分第三部分 写作模板第四部分 热点话题及平时练习2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved3第一部分第一部分 写作写作写作介绍:1. 分值 15%2. 考试时长 30分钟 3. 考试时间 9:10-9:40(如果有可能,尽量在9:35分监考老师提醒时完成草稿,并填到答题卡一上,给听力预留5分钟时间)4. 大纲要求:选用考生所熟悉的题材,要求考生根据所提供

2、的信息及提示(如:提纲,情景,图片或图表等)写出一篇短文,四级120-180词; 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved4第一部分第一部分 写作写作5. 评分标准2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved5第一部分第一部分 写作写作漂漂亮亮 (14分)， 清清爽爽（11分），马马虎虎（8分），糊里糊涂（5分）， 一塌糊涂（2分）2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved6第一部分第一部分 写作写作写作练习:一. 厘清思路二. 注意表达 (1)换词 (2)套句 (3)

3、背篇三. 主要考查三种题型2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved7第一部分第一部分 写作写作第一步: 厘清思路,把握文章结构! 3* 92022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved8第一部分第一部分 写作写作第一步: 厘清思路,把握文章结构!eg. Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see tha

4、t thousands of people- man and woman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called the kindom of bicycles. 总-分-总格式2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved9第一部分第一部分 写作写作第二步: 注意表达,用亮点词句得高分!换词 popular(adj.)- popularity(n.) years(n.)-decade(n.) the young(n.)-youngst

5、ers(n.) people(n.)-citizen(n.) idea/opinion(n.)-concept(n.) in the modern times-in the contemporary society in the present-day society in this day and age 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved10第一部分第一部分 写作写作换形容词形容词good = conducive =beneficial=advantageousbad = detrimental= baneful =undesirable

6、surprising = amazing = extraordinary = miraculousbeautiful = attractive = gorgeous = eye-catching poor = needy = impoverished = poverty-stricken rich = wealthy = affluent = well-to-do = well-off top = excellent = eminent = outstanding 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved11第一部分第一部分 写作写作 换动词动词 i

7、mprove = enhance= promote = strengthen = optimize cause = trigger = endanger solve =resolve =address = tackle =cope with = deal with destroy = tear down = knock down = eradicate develop = cultivate = foster = nurture=nourish encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur think = assert= hold = claim = argu

8、e complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve keep = preserve = retain = hold=maintain=sustain destroy = impair = undermine = jeopardize=ruin reduce=ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved12第一部分第一部分 写作写作换名词名词(1)influence= impact danger = perils =hazard pollution =

9、 contaminationhuman beings= mankind = human raceold people= the old = the elderly = the aged = senior citizenshappiness = cheerfulness = well-being eachers = instructors = educators = lecturers education = schooling = =upbringing2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved13第一部分第一部分 写作写作换名词名词(2)young

10、people = youngsters = youths = adolescentsadvantage = merits = superiority = virtueresponsibility = obligation = duty = liabilityability = capacity = power = skill job = career = employment = profession enjoyment = pastimes = recreation= entertainment children = offspring = descendant= kid2022-4-8co

11、pyright 2006 All Rights Reserved14第一部分第一部分 写作写作换短语短语be filled with = be awash with = be inundate with = be saturated withstruggle for = aspire after = strive for = spare no efforts for embark on = take up = set about = go in for=engage in in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day

12、 and age a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved15第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句eg. Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people- man and w

13、oman, old and young-ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called the kindom of bicycles.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved16第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句Bicycles are very popular in China. 此句为主旨句,起总起全文的作用可套用此句型,把主语按照要求进行改变即可,如 Online shopping is very popular in China. Watching movie

14、is very popular in Wuhan Hubei Province, China.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved17第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句Bicycles are very popular in China. In China, bicycles have gained great/wired popularity among Chinese people.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved18第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句2011-06: 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚20

15、10-06: 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2009-12: 建设绿色校园很重要2009-06: 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是为什么? 2008-12: 一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved19第一部分第一部分 写作写作 套句 2011-06: 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 In the recent decade, online shopping has gained wide popularity among youngsters.2022-4-8copyright 200

16、6 All Rights Reserved20第一部分第一部分 写作写作 套句 2010-06: 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However,.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved21第一部分第一部分 写作写作 套句 2009-12: 建设绿色校园很重要 In the contemporary society, the concept of green campuses has gained wide

17、 popularity among universities or colleges.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved22第一部分第一部分 写作写作 套句 2009-06: 越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是为什么? In the present-day society, free admission to museums is engjoying great popularity among Chinese citizens.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved23第一部分第一部分 写作写作

18、 套句 2008-12: 一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 During the past decades, disposable plastic baged gained wide popularity among people in the whole world.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved24第一部分第一部分 写作写作 套句 2008-06: 娱乐活动多种多样 In this day and age, a variety of recreational activities have gained wide popularity amon

19、g individuals.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved25第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句 试着翻译一句歌词: 你在我眼里是最美! eg. In my eyes, you are the most beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you. 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved26第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句 句型提炼: No is/are more than .原句: Bicycles are very popula

20、r in China. In China, no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles. 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved27第一部分第一部分 写作写作套句再试着翻译一句歌词:我能想到最浪漫的事,就是和你一起慢慢变老!I can think the most romantic thing is growing old with you! In my eyes, no romance is more romantic than aging with you

21、minute by minute, year by year and millennium by millennium.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved28第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇四级作文主要考查的几种形式为: 议论文议论文(对比选择对比选择, 现象解释现象解释,问题解决及原因问题解决及原因解释解释)-陈述现象陈述现象,解释现象解释现象,总结现象总结现象; 图表题图表题-陈述图表所示现状陈述图表所示现状,解释原因解释原因,总结总结; 信件题信件题-注意信件格式注意信件格式; 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Righ

22、ts Reserved29第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(一) When it comes to the issue of , different people have different opinions. (进一步介绍这种现象或观点).Some people think that . They hold this opinion because (they think) . Others, however, take a negative / positive attitude to . (Others, nevertheless, are more pessimistic /

23、 optimistic about it). From their point of view, . Besides, . 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved30第一部分第一部分 写作写作 In my opinion/Personally /From my point view /If asked my attitude, I am more in favor of . I stand in / hold this attitude /opinion / view because . Its true that , but it doesnt

24、mean that . Therefore / In a word/ In short, . Instead, we should .2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved31第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(二) In recent years, （描写现状或趋势）. This has caused a lot of problems. First, （结果1）. For example, （细节，说明结果1）. Second, （结果2）. （细节，说明结果2）. Finally, （结果3）. （细节，说明结果3）. Since is

25、 such a serious problem, we should take effective measures to . First, we should （措施1）. Besides, （措施2）. And finally, （措施3）.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved32第一部分第一部分 写作写作Try to write a passage according to the template 2 given above. Dear Andy- How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We b

26、oth miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time you computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat. Love, Mom and Dad.2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved33第一部分第一部分 写作写作 In recent years/In this day and age/ In the contemporary society

27、, computer using/Internet/surfing online has gained a wide popularity among youngsters. Most people consider it as convenient. Though this has caused/triggered a lot of problems/issues. 第一段第一段 总起总起,讲述现象讲述现象 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved34第一部分第一部分 写作写作 First/Firstly/First of all, electro

28、nic communication is less direct than face-to-face communication. For example, if you type on your computer to discuss an issue with your friend, it would cost you more time than just saying it to him or her face to face. Words can never convey the full message, and instant messages usually cause mi

29、sunderstanding. Second/Secondly/Further more, we are not robots, sometimes we just need to talk to a real human being rather than only a picture on the computer. Only when we talk face to face with gestures, can we express our fellings completely. In fact, face-to-face communication but not electron

30、ic communication makes us feel connected. 第二段第二段 表达对此现象的理表达对此现象的理解解, 并给出原因并给出原因2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved35第一部分第一部分 写作写作 Since indulging in /addicting to computer is such a serious problem, we should take effective measures to prevent the youngsters from addicting. We shouldnt spend

31、too much time online rather than relating to people in the real world. 第三段第三段 总结总结,表明自己的态度表明自己的态度, 希望或方向希望或方向2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved36第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(三) Nowadays, great importance has been attached to （目前的现象及存在的问题）. Many ways can contribute to (要解决的问题), but the following ones

32、 may be effective. First of all, （方法1）. Besides, （方法2）.Finally, （方法3）. In conclusion/ To sum up, the ways I have mentioned above should never be separated from each other. （希望）. 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved37第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(四) Recently there has been a tremendous growth in （指出第一次数

33、据变化）. What amazes us most is （第二次数据变化）. It is true that （点明变化趋势）. There are many reasons explaining . The main reason is . Whats more, . Thirdly , . As a result, . Considering all this, I believe （指出大学生在使用计算机中有困难和问题）. For one thing, (困难一）. For another, （困难二）. In conclusion, （提 出建议）. 2022-4-8copyrigh

34、t 2006 All Rights Reserved38第一部分第一部分 写作写作背篇议论文模版(五) Date Dear ., I am very glad to hear that you want to seek some suggestions about_ in order to . From my point of view, . Also, to you, I highly recommend that . On one hand, . On the other hand, . Besides, it is unnecessary for you to . Consequentl

35、y, I believe that . I hope that my opinions are of help to yo, and please feel free to contact with me for more questions. Sincerely Yours, . 2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved39第一部分第一部分 写作写作四种最常见话题分类一. 教育 1. 大学开设的专业应该由谁决定 2. 大学生应该如何面对刚入学的困难 3. 实践课是否应该取代文化课 4.学生是否应该为社区作义工 5.学生是住校好还是与父母同住好 6.

36、 大学是理科重要还是文科重要 7.如何看待年轻人喜欢购物的现象2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved40第一部分第一部分 写作写作四种最常见话题分类二.社会生活 1. 博物馆的功能 2.尊重老年人 3.人们如何做善事 4.是否只有政府能够解 决住房问题 5. 政府是否应该支持运动员 6.年轻人的失业问题 7.是否应该鼓励老年人退休 8.公司是否应该提供医 疗服务 9.青少年犯罪问题 10.老年人数量增加的 问题 11.缴税 12.时尚2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved41第一部分第一部分 写作写作四

37、种最常见题型分类三. 科技影响 1.图书是否被电脑所取代2. 外来媒体的影响3. 手机对人们生活的影响4. 电脑可以翻译外文,因此不需要学习外语5. 监视器的广泛使用6. 电视机使家人关系疏远7.使用机器人的利弊8.航空运输是否应该被限制9.登月是否对日常生活有影响2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved42第一部分第一部分 写作写作 四种最常见题型分类 四. 文化传统 1. 国际旅游的利弊 2.房屋的建筑风格 3. 文化的融合是否促进城市发展 4. 学习语言是否应该了解其文化 5. 是否应该鼓励穿传统服装 6. 移民后人们是否应该接受新文化,还是组

38、成自己的小圈子2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved43第一部分第一部分 写作写作 三种其它类型话题 一.生物与环境 1. 提高燃料价格与环境问题的关系 2.动物实验是否该禁止 3.我们应该如何对待动物 4. 我们如何看待垃圾社会 问题2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved44第一部分第一部分 写作写作三种其它类型话题二.男女平同等1. 男女领导的管理风格2. 女子是否应该被指定作高层3. 学校是否应该招收同等数量的男女生2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserve

39、d45第一部分第一部分 写作写作三种其它类型话题三. 政府及抽象话题1. 历史能否帮助我们2. 幸福是由什么决定的3. 富国是否应该给穷国帮助4. 政府是否应该花钱购买武器2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved46第一部分第一部分 写作写作平时练习 （brain storm）1. 以话题为中心词进行拓展 hardworking tired money experience exercise good habit ability wide view optimistic stress pressure load waste study time sp

40、eaking ability practicing ability happy make friedns improvement confident solve problem gain knowledge communicationpart-time job2022-4-8copyright 2006 All Rights Reserved47第一部分第一部分 写作写作平时练习 （brain storm）2. 以单词为中心，展开写句子 Hardworking is very hard for me. I often get tired. But I can earn money from that. Except for this,