实用型课件--非谓语动词在写作中的运用

1、非非谓语动词谓语动词在在写写作中的作中的运运用用The usage of the Non-finite verbs in writing Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. It was only four years before the sport

2、 returned to the Olympic. However, not until 1968 were women first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. With the sport becoming more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.句子表达有何亮点？句子表达有何亮点？1. Making our city greener is everyo

3、nes duty. 2. The government is determined to continue the green program.3. I find my hometown changed so much. 4. Having fresh air, trees can reduce air pollution.5. Every effort to make the program makes a difference. 5.5.定语定语2. 2. 宾语宾语4. 4. 状语状语3.3.宾补宾补1. 1. 主语主语找出非谓语动词，并判断成分找出非谓语动词，并判断成分学会运用非学会运用

4、非谓语动词谓语动词 After a long run, John returned home, exhausted. Having had a long run, John returned home, exhausted.改写句子改写句子学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词 Tony folded his arms around her and bent his face close to hers.Tony folded his arms around her bending his face close to hers.改写句子改写句子学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词We ate i

5、nside the hut and sat round the fire.We ate inside the hut sitting round the fire.改写句子改写句子Here are what you chose just now 1. Tony folded his arms around her bending his face close to hers.2. We ate inside the hut sitting round the fire.3. Having had a long run, John returned home, exhausted. It is

6、high time we took part in some activities. We want to make ourselves more healthy. It is high time we took part in some activities to make ourselves more healthy.+目的状语目的状语 Wangqi climbed so hard that she lost her temper. She complained about the long walk. Wangqi got so angry that she lost her tempe

7、r, complaining about the long walk.伴随状语伴随状语 + The monitor has set a good example for us . Therefore, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her . Having set a good example for us, the monitor deserves the honor and we should learn from her .原因状语原因状语 +When he found the door locked, h

8、e went home.Finding the door locked, he went home.1. When they heard the news , they immediately set off for Shanghai. Hearing the news, they immediately set off for Shanghai. 2. After he finished his homework, he watched TV for a while. Having finished his homework, he watched TV for a while.3. Whe

9、n the library is completed, it will be open to the public next year.When completed, the library will be open to the public next year.4. Although I admit what she has said, I still think that she hasnt tried her best . 尽管承认她所说的话，但我仍然认为她没有尽最大的努力。Admitting what she has said, I still think that she hasn

10、t tried her best. 5.If you work hard, youll succeed.Working hard, youll succeed.6. She stood by the window and watched the sunsets.She stood by the window watching the sunsets.7. Our English teacher speaks louder in order that he can make himself heard.Our English teacher speaks louder to make himse

11、lf heard. 8. She walked out of the classroom and many students followed her. She walked out of the classroom， followed by many students. Try to make you sentenceAfter class try to search for such beautiful and vivid sentences in your textbooks, OK? Im afraid of being laughed at . I usually keep sile

12、nt when I meet foreigners.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词Being afraid of being laughed at, I usually keep silent whenmeeting foreigners. The girl was from London. She was attracted by the beauty of nature. She decided to spend two more days on the farm. Attracted by the beauty of nature,the girl from

13、 London decided to spend two more days on the farm. 用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词 I learnt another fact. The fact is astonishing.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词I learnt another astonishing fact. I learnt another fact which was astonishing. Jim has got a brother. His brother works in a bank in London

14、.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词Jim has got a brother working in a bank in London. Jim has got a brother who works in a bank in London. Jim has got a brother. His brother works in a bank in London.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词Jim has got a brother working in a bank in London. I learnt another fact w

15、hich was astonishing. Can you think of the name of a flower? The name of the flower begins with “T”.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词Can you think of the name a flower beginning with “T”? Can you think of the name of a flower which begins with “T”? I dont talk much to the man. The man is sitting next t

16、o me.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词I dont talk much to the man sitting next to me. I dont talk much to the man who is sitting next to me. The road is very narrow. The road joins the villages.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词The road joining the villages is very narrow. The road which joins the villages

17、 is very narrow. I live in a pleasant room. The room overlooks the garden.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词I live in a pleasant room overlooking the garden. I live in a pleasant room which overlooks the garden. A few days after the interview, I received a letter. The letter offered me the job.用一句话表达用一句

18、话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词A few days after the interview, I received a letter offering me the job. A few days after the interview, I received a letter which offered me the job. The boy was taken to hospital. the boy was injured in the accident.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词The boy injured in the accident

19、 was taken to hospital. The boy who was injured in the accident was taken to hospital. Some of the people cant come. The people have been invited to the party.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词Some of the people invited to the party cant come. some of the people who have been invited to the party cant c

20、ome. most of the goods are exported. The goods are made in this factory.用一句话表达用一句话表达学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词Most of the goods made in this factory are exported. Most of the goods which are made in this factory are exported. the police never found the money. The money was stolen in the robbery.用一句话表达用一句话表达

21、学会运用非学会运用非谓语动词谓语动词The police never found the money stolen in the robbery. The police never found the money which was stolen in the robbery.When I talk about the trip to Shanghai , Im impressed most with Mr. Rui. He is my oral English teacher. A little bit harder, have a try!A little bit harder, have

22、 a try!请试试改写下面的句子吧！请试试改写下面的句子吧！(改后改后)Talking about the trip to Shanghai , what impressed me most is Mr. Rui, my oral English teacher. I believe that if I am given more time and practice more, I bet I will make great progress in English. (改后改后)What I believe is that given more timeand practicing more

23、, I bet greatprogress will be made in English. A little bit harder, have a try!A little bit harder, have a try!高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气 。Step1：拆分成几个简单句：拆分成几个简单句(中文中文)高考临近。高考临近。保持良好的心态很重要。保持良好的心态很重要。它有助于减轻焦虑它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句分别翻译这几个简

24、单句National College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Step3：合并句子合并句子 With National College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely. N

25、ational College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence1:Step3：合并句子合并句子 With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which helps us to relax and overcome difficulti

26、es bravely.College Entrance Examination is coming. It is important to have a right attitude. It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.Sentence2:Tip: Try to use differentways to express.不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时不是人人都能学好英语，小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。学会运用复合句和非谓语动词学会运用复合句和非谓语动词第一步：拆分成几个简单

27、句第一步：拆分成几个简单句不是人人都能学好英语。不是人人都能学好英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。小学生同时学汉语和英语。这会影响汉语学习。这会影响汉语学习。第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句 Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study. Not everyone is good at learning English.

28、 Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning Engl

29、ish. Not everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese s

30、tudy方法方法2 2： because not everyone is good at learning English.建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。 （20112011高考模拟）高考模拟）要求：要求：1. 1. 用用2- 32- 3句句话话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2. 2- 32. 2- 3句句话要有话要有连贯性连贯性Having a try建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。Having a tryIt is nece

31、ssary to have enough sleep .Having enough sleep is necessary.It will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Keeping healthy is the base for our further study and work.To Keep healthy is the base for our further study and work. Passage： Having enough sleep is necessary, because it

32、will be an effective way to improve our learning in the class. Moreover, to keep healthy is the base for our further study and work.Tip: Never ignore the conjunction.学会使用复合句和非谓语动词学会使用复合句和非谓语动词你来试试你来试试现象 学生作文中出现很多错别字原因1.1.上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。2.2.每天有很多作业做，没有记住生字。参考词汇：参考词汇：错别字错别字: : wrongly-written character

33、s网络语言：网络语言：web language要求：要求：1. 1. 用用两句话两句话表达表格内容表达表格内容 2. 2. 两句话要有两句话要有连贯性连贯性第一句（两个信息点）： 1. 学生作文中出现很多错别字 2.（他们）上网聊天时经常使用网络语言。 There are many wrongly-written characters in students compositions. The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use w

34、eb languages when chatting on line.合并句子：合并句子： They often use web languages when chatting on line. 1. They have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters第二句:1. 每天有很多作业做 2. 没有记住生字。 They have much homework to do every day.2. With so much homework to do, they fail to

35、 memorize the new characters.3. Because they have so much homework to do, they fail to memorize the new characters.合并句子：合并句子： They fail to memorize the new characters. 连接两句话： The reason why there are many wrongly-written characters in students composition is that they often use web languages when ch

36、atting on line. Moreover, they have so much homework to do every day that they fail to memorize the new characters.While writing ,try to use different formsof verbs and clauses(从句从句) to makeyour writing essay simple, clear, vivid and full of varieties.写作中复合句常见的错误1.1.只有从句，没有主句只有从句，没有主句 The keeper who

37、 had lived in the light tower for a long time, so he could keep calm in the storm.2.2.以逗号代替句号以逗号代替句号, ,把两个简单句当成一个句子把两个简单句当成一个句子 The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face. The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass.3.3.刻意使用从句，表达不自然刻意使用从句，表达不自然 There are o

38、ver fifty students in this school who are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday. Over fifty students in this school are going to take part in the sports meet next Sunday.4.4.过多地使用并列句组合信息过多地使用并列句组合信息 We were driving out into the country, and we saw our English teacher riding in a bus, and

39、 the bus was crowded. It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining and a breeze is blowing. It is a beautiful day with the sun shining and a breeze blowing. As we were driving out into the country, we saw our English teacher riding in a crowded bus. 1. beggar, lie, sleep2. Mr. Li, hurry, pay no att

40、ention to3. stick out，trip over(绊倒绊倒) , angry A beggarA beggarWriting2. Mr Li hurried home, paying no attention to a beggar.1. The beggar lay on the ground, sleeping.3. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs ,tripping over Mr Li, which made him very angry. Make an ending1.一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李

41、先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2.乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。3.李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。4.李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。 突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。5.乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。 李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。A beggar Exchan

42、ge and discuss your partners composition, following the criteria. Criteria（标准） Content（内容） Language（语言） Coherence（连贯）Pair work A beggar One day, hurrying home, Mr. Li paid no attention to the beggar who lay on the ground, sleeping. Suddenly, the beggar stuck out his legs , tripping Mr. Li over, whic

43、h made him very angry. Realizing the beggar was a disabled person, Mr. Li began to search for some money in his pocket to give him. He took out a 100-yuan note, which was suddenly blown into the air by the wind. Seeing this, the beggar jumped quickly to run after the note, making Mr. Li so surprised

44、 that he stood there with his mouth open.：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的四个信息块，请用你今天的所过观察、整理排列成的四个信息块，请用你今天的所学将其表学将其表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。There is always someone behind us, caring about us .On everyday morning, walking out of the doorway to go to school, we may be told to pay

45、 attention to the traffic, not to fight or quarrel with others, and may even be told to chew slowly at table. Being a child ,we may feel tired of those words. when we come home after school, she has tried her best to provide what she has for us. Even if what we need is just a glass of water, she wil

46、l alsokeep it in mind. When noticing her grey hairs and the wrinkles around her eyes, I realize I have grown up while she is no longer young. Its time that I should do something for her, even only giving her back somemassage or making a cup of tea for her can make her feel that she seems to be the h

47、appiest woman in the world. Do you know who she is? She is our Mom.1.一个乞丐在路边讨钱(ask for money)。李先生匆忙赶路上班，没有注意到那个乞丐。2.乞丐很生气，伸出(stick out)拐杖，差点把李先生绊倒了(trip over)。3.李先生意识到他是个残疾人，便在口袋里找钱给他。4.李先生拿出了一张百元钞票(a 100-yuan note)。 突然一阵风把钞票吹到了空中。5.乞丐迅速跳起来去追那张钞票。 李先生站在那里，惊得合不拢嘴。：以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过以下是你根据图画内容和题目要求，经过观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子观察、整理排列成的五个信息块，请分别用一个句子表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。表达出来，并组成一篇连贯性的短文。A beggar Exchange and discuss your partners composition, then give each other a score according to the following criteria. Criteria（标准） Mark Content（内容） （是否用5句话表达