书面表达专练

1、书面表达专练书面表达专练描写某个地方描写某个地方（Describing a place） 常用表达法常用表达法(Useful expressionsUseful expressions)1. 1.所处位置所处位置（LocationLocation）A.OurA.Our school school lieslies near/behind/in front near/behind/in front of/by the side ofof/by the side of/between/among/between/amongB.TheB.The temple temple standsstands

2、at the foot of/on at the foot of/on the top ofthe top ofC.StandingC.Standing on the top ofon the top of the mountain, the mountain, the temple has experienced many changes the temple has experienced many changes in this area.in this area.There standsThere stands an old temple near the an old temple

3、near the river. river. 2. 2.周边环境周边环境（SurroundingsSurroundings）The beautiful town The beautiful town is is located/situatedlocated/situated on the west of on the west of the lake/to the west of the the lake/to the west of the mountain/in the west ofmountain/in the west of the the vince.We

4、st ofWest of the city stands a tall the city stands a tall building.building.Surrounded bySurrounded by mountains on three mountains on three sides, the small village sides, the small village facesfaces a a clear river on the east.clear river on the east. 3. 3.人口人口（PopulationPopulation）Japan has Jap

5、an has a small population of a small population of China is a developingChina is a developingcountry ,country ,with a population ofwith a population of 130 130 lion.The population here is increasing The population here is increasing year by year.year by year.Eighty Eighty percent ofpercen

6、t of the population the population here here areare farmers. farmers. 4. 4.面积面积（AreaArea）Tiananmen Square, the largest Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, square in the world, covers an covers an area of area of Tiananmen Square, Tiananmen Square, covering an area covering an area ofo

7、f,is the largest square in the ,is the largest square in the world.world.This square is 2000 This square is 2000 meters longmeters long and 1500 and 1500 meters wide.meters wide.Our school , which Our school , which takes uptakes up 63 63 thousand thousand square kilometerssquare kilometers, is , is

8、 very very large in sizelarge in size. . 5. 5.历史历史（HistoryHistory）China has China has a history ofa history of over over 5000 years.5000 years.Egypt is an Arabian country Egypt is an Arabian country with a long historywith a long history. .Built in the16th century, Built in the16th century, the cast

9、le has the castle has witnessed too witnessed too much coming and going in much coming and going in history.history. 名胜名胜（Places of interestPlaces of interest）In Sydney, there are In Sydney, there are many places many places of interestof interest , , such assuch as the Opera the Opera House.House.T

10、he Opera House in Sydney is The Opera House in Sydney is one one of theof the most most well-knownwell-known places of places of interestinterest in the world. in the world.Sydney is the biggest city in Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places Australia, which has many places o

11、f interest, of interest, among whichamong which is the is the Opera House.Opera House. 7. 7.特色特色(Something Special)(Something Special)Development,Development,best seasonbest seasonweatherweather The United States of America The United States of America is a developed country. It lies in the central

12、part of North America. To the north is Canada and to the south is Mexico. The Atlantic Ocean is to the east the Pacific Ocean is to the west. Being the 4th largest country in the world, it has an area of 9.36 million square kilometers. The country has a lot of lakes, mountains and the world famous r

13、iver -the Mississipi. The USA is made up of 50 states, with Washington D.C. as its capital. The country has a population of about 236 million and English is the official language.写作练习写作练习根据以下内容写一篇根据以下内容写一篇100100词左右的说明文，标词左右的说明文，标题为题为“Australia”Australia”。1)1)、澳大利亚位于太平洋的西侧，是大洋洲（、澳大利亚位于太平洋的西侧，是大洋洲（Oce

14、aniaOceania）最大的国家，面积）最大的国家，面积760760万平方公里。万平方公里。2)2)、人口稀少，只有、人口稀少，只有1 1，000000多万，多数集中在多万，多数集中在东部沿海地区。东部沿海地区。3)3)、首都堪培拉（、首都堪培拉（CanberraCanberra）风景秀丽。）风景秀丽。4)4)、悉尼（、悉尼（SydneySydney）是澳大利亚最大城市。有）是澳大利亚最大城市。有许多名胜，其中悉尼歌剧院（许多名胜，其中悉尼歌剧院（Opera HouseOpera House）闻名于世。闻名于世。20002000年奥运会就是在悉尼举行的。年奥运会就是在悉尼举行的。 描写育才中

15、学的地理方位描写育才中学的地理方位请同学们指出以下句子中的错误请同学们指出以下句子中的错误:1. When you through the gate, you will see grass and flowers everywhere.When you walk / come through the gate, you will see grass and flowers everywhere.遗漏动词2. The Chengxi River outside the school gate.The Chengxi River lies / is / runs / flows outside t

16、he school gate.Outside the school / In front of the school lies / is / runs / flows the Chengxi River.遗漏动词3. Yucai Middle School , which near the Chengxi River, is very large. Yucai Middle School , which is / lies near the Chengxi River, is very large.4. Yucai Middle School looks very beautiful. It

17、next to the Chengxi River. Yucai Middle School looks very beautiful. It lies next to the Chengxi River. 缺少谓语动词5. On it right stand a building. On its right stands a building.6. There are a library building and a teaching building between the two flowerbeds. There is a library building and a teaching

18、 building between the two flowerbeds. 主谓不一致主谓不一致注意谓语动词单复数注意谓语动词单复数7. Come through the school gate, there are some flowers in front of you. Coming through the school gate, you will see some flowers in front of you. Come through the school gate, and you will see some flowers in front of you.8. We stud

19、y in the school is really a good thing. It is good for us to study in the school. 句子结构错误句子结构错误9. Let me talk you about Yucai Middle School. Let me tell you about Yucai Middle School.10. Walk along, and you will look at a gym. Walk along, and you will see a gym. 选词错误选词错误 11. On your left side was the

20、 teaching building. On your left side is the teaching building. 时态错误12. In one side, has our reading room. On the other side, has our studying room. In the south of the school, there has dinner room. In the east of these there has a playground. 中式表达法中式表达法13. They very like the school.正确表达正确表达 12. On

21、 one side stands our reading room. On the other side stands our studying room. In the south of the school, there is a dining room. In the east of these there is a playground where we usually play basketball and football. Let me tell you something about Yucai Middle School. Yucai Middle School , whic

22、h lies near the Chengxi River, is very large and beautiful. When you come through the gate of Yucai Middle school, you will see grass and flowers everywhere. There is a library building and a teaching building between the two flowerbeds. In the south of the school stands a dining room. In the east o

23、f these stands a playground where we usually play basketball and football. Shaoxing is located in the eastern part of Zhejiang province, where is the beautiful, rich and popular Yangtz Delta, next to Hangzhou bay to the north, linked with Simingshan Mount to the south, joined with Shangyu city to th

24、e west and connected with Ningbo city to the east. With the population of 830,000, Yuyao covers an area of 1,527 square kilometres, which is the heart of Ningbo-Shaoxing Plain. Yuyao always enjoys the reputation of “the famous state in the southeast”(东南名邑), “the well-known literature state”(文化名城) an

25、d so on. is located into the northto the westWithcoversNingbo-Shaoxingenjoysnext towith美文欣赏（美文欣赏（Enjoy Reading）Santa Fe, the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A., is in the central part of the state, on the Santa Fe River, which flows into the Rio Grande 35 kilometers west of the city. More than two thousa

26、nd meters above sea level, it lies in the Sangre de Cristo Mountains with the Ortiz Mountains to the southeast. 幻灯片幻灯片 3本篇文段选自本篇文段选自1993年高年高考阅读理解部分。全文考阅读理解部分。全文仅用仅用205个单词就向读个单词就向读者清晰地描画了者清晰地描画了Santa Fe这个地方的地理位置、这个地方的地理位置、人口状况、资源特色，人口状况、资源特色，特别是用较大篇幅叙述特别是用较大篇幅叙述了此处的历史变迁等地了此处的历史变迁等地方特征。全文有详有略，方特征。全文有详

27、有略，重点突出。重点突出。Santa Fe was founded in 1609 by the Spanish on an old Indian village. In 1680 the Indians seized the place but only held it for twelve years before the Spanish retook it. the city remained under Spanish rule until Mexico won its independence in 1821. From then on it was a Mexican city u

28、ntil 1846 when it was taken over by U.S.A. troops. 幻灯片幻灯片 4文中追溯历史文中追溯历史的片（划线部的片（划线部分）尤其值得分）尤其值得借鉴；学习时借鉴；学习时请注意其中表请注意其中表示时间的连词、示时间的连词、介词，几个动介词，几个动词的用法以及词的用法以及主动、被动时主动、被动时态交互应用的态交互应用的特色。特色。With a population of 48,953,Santa Fe is now the second largest city in the state. Because of its sunny weather, r

29、ich history and surrounding mountains, it is a good place for holiday makers. Besides hunting and skating in the mountains people enjoy shopping in the Indian and Spanish shops, which brings a large income to the city every year. 幻灯片幻灯片 5另外，同位语另外，同位语the capital of New Mexico, U.S.A.,介词结构介词结构With a p

30、opulation of, Because of, besides等的使用等的使用亦使文段显得紧亦使文段显得紧凑、连贯。凑、连贯。 In summer there is an international opera season when operas are shown in a partly- roofed, open air theatre daily for people from all over the world. (Adapted from MET1993) 幻灯片 2推荐背诵文段推荐背诵文段 习作点评习作点评Australia, to the west of the Paci

31、fic Ocean, is Australia, to the west of the Pacific Ocean, is the largest country in Oceania, which is about the largest country in Oceania, which is about 7,600,000 square kilometers.7,600,000 square kilometers.Although Australia is Although Australia is so large aso large a country, country, it ha

32、s it has a sparse population, which is only more than 10 a sparse population, which is only more than 10 million. And most of the people live together in million. And most of the people live together in the East Part by the sea.the East Part by the sea.Australia is an attractive place. Canberra is t

33、he Australia is an attractive place. Canberra is the capital, and it has very charming scenery. But it capital, and it has very charming scenery. But it is not the largest city in Australia. In fact, Sydney is not the largest city in Australia. In fact, Sydney is the largest one. There are a lot of

34、places of is the largest one. There are a lot of places of intrestintrest. Especially the Opera House is . Especially the Opera House is soso famous famous thatthat almost everybody almost everybody living in the worldliving in the world knows knows it. And the 24th Olympic Games was held in it. And

35、 the 24th Olympic Games was held in Sydney in 2000.So you can see that how Sydney in 2000.So you can see that how important the Sydney is.important the Sydney is.In a word, if you want to travel abroadIn a word, if you want to travel abroad，Australia is a right place. Australia is a right place. But

36、 it is not the largest city in Australia. InBut it is not the largest city in Australia. In fact, Sydney is the largest one. There are a lot of fact, Sydney is the largest one. There are a lot of places of intrestplaces of intrest. Especially the Opera House is . Especially the Opera House is soso f

37、amous famous thatthat almost everybody almost everybody living in theliving in the worldworld knows it. And the 24th Olympic Games knows it. And the 24th Olympic Games was held in Sydney in 2000.So you can seewas held in Sydney in 2000.So you can see that that how important the Sydney is.how important the Sydney is. In a word, if you want to travel abroad In a word, if you want to travel abroad，Australia