高中生交流方式图表作文

1、Guided Writing （25分） 图表作文Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instruction given below.例一某网站对高中生的交流方式进行了一次调查，结果如图表所示。请简要描述图表，结合你的实际，谈谈你的看法。作文指导 图表作文第一段(简述)As the chart indicates, the proportion of the high school students who contact each other by sending a short

2、 message and by E-mail is absolutely high, while other communicating means, such as by writing a letter are relatively minor.第二段（看法）Personally speaking, this social phenomenon persuades us to take the following two aspects into consideration. Firstly, wherever and whenever we are, sending messages o

3、r email is convenient, for a mobile phone is portable. On the other hand, these communicating means are efficient, for it almost takes no time to send or receive a message. If I have to contact somebody, for example, I often choose to use my cell phone or computer. Writing a letter is a traditional

4、way to get in touch with each other, which seems to be out of fashion.第三段（小结）No doubt, this survey reflects the feature of modern times that people including high school students prefer to enjoy such convenience and efficiency brought about by high technology. (163words)例二 “有困难向谁述说”图表作文The pie chart

5、 above illustrates the result of the survey “To whom do you go when in trouble” conducted in high schools recently. It can be clearly seen that classmates and friends tops the list, adding up to 58%. Teachers and parents ranks second, making up 33%, while those who solve the problem on their own acc

6、ounts for only 9%.The reasons for the phenomenon may be as follows: The share of the similar experience mainly contributes to the tendency for us to complain to our classmates and friends instead of the older generation. Because of the identical feelings, we may find the solutions suggested by our f

7、riends to be more useful and advisable. On the contrary, owing to the unavoidable generation gap, we are sure to value the trouble or problems differently from teachers and parents, and the disagreement may even cause unnecessary argument, thus turning away many youngsters. Secondly, the lack of sel

8、f-confidence and independence may account for the 9% part. We have little courage to burden the consequence of our own life choice, thus habitually turning to others for help. The result of this situation is the less we try, the less mature we are. To sum up, the process of growing may usually be pa

9、inful, and young students may have to face various kinds of troubles. As long as they take optimistic views and proper methods, those troubles will no longer obstacles. Just open your heart and pick up your courage.首段 Use figures or statistics 引用具体或粗略的数据，然后作出概括性分析，点名主题或引出需要论述的问题。1) 饼图 a pie chart 柱状

10、图 a bar chart 表格图 a table Chart diagram graph 2) 描述： show describe illustrate Clear apparent Reveal represent3) figure statistic number percentage proportion4) 常用的开篇句型（即概述图表内容时常用的表达法）The table / chart /graph shows / describes / illustrates that.As (is) shown in the table. As can be seen from the sta

11、tistics / figures,. Figures/ statistics show that.According to the table/pie chart/ graph/bar graph, we can see/conclude that 根据该表/图，我们可知 The table/graph reveals (shows/indicates/illustrates/ represents/points out) that 该表/图表明 As we can see from the table As can be seen from the bar graph As is show

12、n (illustrated/indicated) in the pie chart 如表/图所示，5) 表示数据变化的单词或词组Rapid/ rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，Dramatic/ dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的Significant/ significantly 重大的Sharp /sharply 明显的，急剧的Steady / steadily 稳固的Gradual/ gradually 渐进的，逐渐的Slow /slowly 缓慢的Slight / slightly 略微的Stable / stably 稳定的6） 在描述中常用到的词汇Significant c

13、hanges 图中一些较大变化Noticeable trend 明显趋势Distribute UnequallyIn the case ofIn terms of/ regarding7) 描述增减变化常用的句型Compared with is still increased by The number of grew/rose from to An increase is shown in ; then came a sharp increase of In the number remains the same/drops to There was a very slight (small

14、/slow/gradual) rise/increase in .There was a very steady (marked/sharp/rapid/sudden/dramatic) drop (decrease/decline/fall/reduction) in ./ compared with that of last year).8) 图表作文常用句型精选1. The table shows the changes in the number of.over the period from.to.该表格描述了在。年至。年间。数量的变化。2. the bar chart illust

15、rates that.该柱状图展示了。3. the graph provides some interesting data regarding. 该图为我们提供了有关。有趣数据。4. the pie graph depicts that. 该圆形图揭示了。5. this is a cure graph which describes the trend of. 这个曲线图描述了。的趋势。6. the tree diagram reveals how.该树形图向我们揭示了如何。7. the data/ statistics / figures lead us to the conclusion

16、 that. 这些数据资料令我们得出结论。8. as is shown / demonstrated/ exhibited in the diagram / graph / chart/ table. 如图所示。9. as is shown in the table.如表格所示。10. as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in. 从图中可以看出，。发生了巨大变化。 11. from the table / chart/ diagram/ figure, we can see clearly that .

17、 / it is clear/ apparent from the chart that. 从图表我们可以很清楚看到。12. this table shows the changing proportion of a a&b from .to. 该表格描述了。年到。年间a与b 的比例关系。13. the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in.该图以圆形形式描述了。的总的趋势14. over the period from.to. the .remained level. 在。至。期间，。基本不变15. i

18、n the year between .and.在。年到。期间 In the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998.16. from then on / from this time onwards. 从那时起17. the number of.remained steady / stable from.to. 。至。的数量基本不变。18. the number sharply went up to. 数字急剧上升至。19.the percentage of.stayed the same between .and. 。至。期间。的比率维持不变。20.

19、 the figures peaked at .in 。的树木在。达到定点。 为。21. the percentage reamined steady at. 比率维持在22. the percentage of.is slightly larger / smaller than that of. 。比例比。，的比例略高23. there is not a great deal of difference between.and. 。与。的区别不大24. .decreased year by year while.increased steadily 逐年减少，而。逐步上升25. the si

20、tuation reached a peak of . 。的情况、局势达到顶点，为。26. the figures reached the bottom / a low point 数字、情况达到低谷27. a is .times as much / many as b a是b。倍28.increase by ./ to. 增长了 、增长到29. there is an upward trend in the number of . 数字呈上升趋势30. a considerable increase / decrease from.to. 31. the rate of decrease s

21、low down32. from this year on, there was a gradual decline reduction in the ., reaching a figure of.33. there are a lot of similarities/differences betweenandthe difference between a and b lies in34. a has something in common with b35. （year）witnessed/saw a sharp rise in As is demonstrated in the ta

22、ble, more and more college graduates are out of a job in our country, which is a serious problem to our economic development and social security.It is estimated that in 2004, there are 5000,000 unemployed graduates, more than 30% higher than in 2002. There is a pie chart of the average weekly expend

23、iture of a family in Great Britain. As can been seen from the chart, the main expenditure of an average British family is spent on food, which accounts for 25 % of its total expenditure. The next two significant items are transport and housing, which are 15% and 12% respectively. If we take into acc

24、ount clothing and footwear, which makes up 10%, the four essentials of life, that is, food, transport, housing,clothing and footwear, amount to 62% of the total expenditure. Car Accidents Declining in Walton CityRemember that your composition must be written according to the following outline;1. Ris

25、e and fall of the rate of car accidents as indicated by the graph;2. Possible reason(s) for the decline of car accidents in the city;3. Your predictions of what will happen this year.From the graph, we can see that the number of car accidents in Walton city fluctuated during the year of 1990. The fi

26、rst two months of 1990 showed an increasing trend. The rate rose to 32 in March but fell to 26 in June. From June on, the rate was rising again and reached the peak point 39 in August. After August the rate began to decline remarkably, and eventually dropped to the lowest point 16 at the end of the

27、year. Therefore, its obvious that car accident in Walton city declined in 1990主题句/概述表格反映的内容 (5)反映交通事故的变化情况(6)小结：总结表格数据反映的总趋势There are several reasons for the decline. First, a new traffic law was made and came into force. It provided that in summer every car must be air-conditioned. As a result, the

28、 highest rate in August, when humidity and high temperature make drivers impatient and easily lead to car accidents, dropped steadily. Second, new roads were built and some narrow streets were widened, which quickened the flow of traffic. Finally, the city administration made great efforts to height

29、en peoples awareness of observing traffic rules.主题句原因/措施一 解释措施一/次要辅助采取措施一后的结果原因/措施二原因/措施三With all these new measures, Im sure the rate of car accidents in Walton city will go on falling this year.总结：展望未来的情况Changes in Peoples DietStudy the following table carefully and your composition must be based

30、on the information given in the table. Write three paragraphs to :1. state the changes in peoples diet from 1986 to 1990 according to the graph;2. give possible reasons for this phenomenon ( or for this change);3. draw your own conclusions.As is shown in the table, there have been great changes in p

31、eople's diet between 1986 and 1990. From the table, we can find that grain, formerly the main food of most Chinese people, is now playing a less important role in people's diet. And the same goes for fruit and vegetables. On the other hand, the consumption of high-nutrition food such milk an

32、d meat has increased rapidly. What has caused these changes? There are mainly three reasons (主题句). (6) First, people are much wealthier than before. (7) With higher income, they can afford to buy nutritious foods. (8) Second, people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. (9

33、) Lack of certain amount of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health. (10) Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk, which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. (11) Although milk and meat are important to one's health, eating too much rich food may result in obesity and may other diseases. (12)