考研英语二冲刺大作文提分课件湖北大学生协会分享分析

1、10%40%10%15%25%完型完型阅读阅读新题型新题型英语汉英语汉写作写作英语二试卷结构分值课程内容概要课程内容概要一、考查内容二、历年真题回顾三、大作文类型四、篇章结构五、具体写法六、真题分类讲解一、大作文考查内容一、大作文考查内容 考生根据提示性信息写出一篇至少150词的短文（标点符号不计算在内）。 提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情境、图、表等。共15分。3二、历年真题回顾二、历年真题回顾2010年：2000-2008年发展中国家和发达国家手机用户数量2011年：2008-2009年国内轿车市场部分品牌市场份额2012年：某公司员工工作满意度调查2013年：某高校学生兼职情况2

2、014年：20年间中国城镇人口与乡村人口变化2015年：我国某市居民春节假期花销比例2016年：某高校学生旅游目的调查2010年2011年2012年2013年2014年2015年2016年12三、英语二大作文三、英语二大作文图表类型图表类型年龄组 满意度满意不清楚不满意 40岁16.7%50.0%333%41 50岁0.0%36.0%64.0% 50岁40.0%50.0%10.0%13三、英语二大作文三、英语二大作文话题类型话题类型话题类型话题类型现象评述型问题解决型必背词汇必背词汇 图表：chart/graph/diagram 柱状图（4年）：bar chart/graph; column

3、chart/graph 饼状图（2年）：pie chart/graph 表格（1年）：table/sheet/form/tabulation 曲线图（未考）：line chart/graph; curve chart/graph柱状图柱状图&曲线图曲线图表表变化变化词汇词汇上升上升/增加增加： rise / increase /go up / rocket / soar/ grow / climb /ascend / jump /leap下降下降/减少：减少： decrease/ grow down/ drop/ fall/ decline/reduce/descend/slump/

4、sink/ slide波动：波动： fluctuate/ rebound/ undulate/ wave/ go ups and downs保持保持稳定：稳定： keep/remain/stay/sustain + stable/steady/constant表示表示变化程度变化程度词汇词汇形容词副词dramaticdramaticallysharp sharplysteep steeplymarked markedlyremarkableremarkablyconsiderable considerablysignificant significantlyenormous enormousl

5、ysubstantial substantiallymoderate moderatelyslight slightly饼状图饼状图&表格表格表表占比例占比例词汇词汇占有占有 take up/make up/account for/occupy构成 make up/consist of/constitute/compose比例比例 proportion/ratio/percentage四、大作文篇章结构考研英语作文的考察出发点考研英语作文的考察出发点19英语二大作文结构英语二大作文结构英二大作文英二大作文描述段论证段结论段英语一大作文结构英语一大作文结构五、具体写法大作文解题过程审题审

6、题素材Think构思构思逻辑Organize书写书写检查Express23第一段：描述段（第一段：描述段（3-4句）句）1句：主题句句：主题句（改写图表上或图表下文字说明）（改写图表上或图表下文字说明）主题句常用句型总结主题句常用句型总结： 1）该图表表明了 The chart shows(conveys/illustrates)+改写图表下文字。 2）如图表所示， As is shown in the chart above, . 3）根据该图表，我们可知 According to the chart above, we can know(get the information about)

7、 4）从该图表中我们可以推导出 From the chart above, we can conclude 5）该图表展示了（描述了）趋势 The chart above shows the trend(tendency) of(about) 6）该图表描述了有关的信息 The chart describes the information about 第一段：描述段（第一段：描述段（3-4句）句）2-4句描述具体变化：句描述具体变化：柱状图&曲线图： 对象+变化（注意时态）+ 时间范围。（几个对象变化趋势相同时趋势相同时要比较）饼状图&表格： 对象+所占百分比。第二段：论证段

8、（第二段：论证段（4-5句）句） 1句：主题句句：主题句/论点句（论点句（可写可不写可写可不写） 2句：分析因果前的过渡句句：分析因果前的过渡句 3句：原因一句：原因一 4句：原因二句：原因二 5句：原因三句：原因三第二段：论证段（第二段：论证段（4-5句）句）1句：主题句句：主题句 1）图表打算传达的是这样一个事实）图表打算传达的是这样一个事实: The chart intends to convey a fact that. 2）根据上述图表，显而易见的是）根据上述图表，显而易见的是: According to the chart above, it is obvious that 3）

9、毫无疑问毫无疑问 There is no doubt that 4）不可否认）不可否认 There is no denying that第二段：论证段（第二段：论证段（4-5句）句）2句：分析因果前的过渡句句：分析因果前的过渡句(简单句简单句) 1）几个因素可以解释这个现象。）几个因素可以解释这个现象。 Several factors may(can) account for this phenomenon as follows. 2）也许原因可以列出如下几点。）也许原因可以列出如下几点。 Maybe (perhaps) reasons can be listed as follows. 3）

10、据我而言，如下因素可以对这个现象负责。）据我而言，如下因素可以对这个现象负责。 For my part/For my respect/From my perspective/ As far as I am concerned, following factors can be responsible for this phenomenon. 4）这个现象是由于如下许多因素。）这个现象是由于如下许多因素。 This phenomenon results from the following factors. 5）什么能够解释这种现象呢？）什么能够解释这种现象呢？ 答案包括如下三点因素。答案包括如

11、下三点因素。 What can account for this phenomenon? The answer involves three factors as follows. 6) It is not a difficult job to find the reasons behind this phenomenon.第二段：论证段（第二段：论证段（4-5句）句）注意：每一点原因之前注意：每一点原因之前必须必须添加添加逻辑衔接词：逻辑衔接词： 3句：原因一句：原因一 First and foremost/To begin with/To start with/In the first p

12、lace/The first reason(factor) is that 4句：原因二句：原因二 In addition/Besides/furthermore/Moreover/Whats more/In the second place/The second reason is that 5句：原因三句：原因三 Last/Finally/Last but not least/In the third place/The last reason is that分析原因常用句式分析原因常用句式1.定语从句原因，as a result(consequence) of which, 结果。2.强

13、调句It is becausethat3. There be 句型+同位语从句+定语从句There is another factor that., which should be given(taken ) into account(consideration).4.结果状语从句Sothat原因， so that5.表示结果的并列句原因，so(consequently/accordingly).分析原因思考的角度分析原因思考的角度第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）话题类型话题类型现象评述型问题解决型第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）现象评述型：现象评述型： 1句：结论

14、句 2句：趋势预测 3句：注意事项/呼吁第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）现象评述型：现象评述型：1句：结论句句：结论句 1）基于（通过）上述分析（讨论），我们可以很有把握地得出这样一个结论:(上述现象是有道理的。) Based on(Through) what has been analyzed (discussed) above, a conclusion can be drawn(arrived at/come to/reached) safely that.(the phenomenon above is well-grounded/reasonable.) 2）把上面讨论

15、的纳入到考虑之中，我们可以很有把握地得出这样一个结论:(上述现象是有道理的。) Taking what has been analyzed(discussed) into account (consideration), we can draw(arrive at/come to/reach) a conclusion safely that .(the phenomenon above is well-grounded/reasonable.)第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）现象评述型：现象评述型：2句：趋势预测 1）我坚信这种趋势（现象）在不远的未来将会继续持续一段时间。 I

16、 deeply(strongly) believe that this trend(tendency) will continue for a while in the near future. 2）依我看来，这种趋势（现象）在未来的几年将会继续。 This trend, for my part, will continue for a while in the years ahead.第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）现象评述型：现象评述型：3句：注意事项/呼吁 1）尽管这种现象可能会给我们带来各种各样的优势，但是我们不应该忽视其给我们带来的消极的影响。 Although thi

17、s phenomenon may bring various benefits for us, we should not ignore (neglect/overlook) negative effects it may produce. 2）总之，我们应该以合理的方式来对待以避免对我们的可能的伤害。 All in all/In a word/In conclusion, we should (are supposed to) treat(see) in a reasonable way to avoid possible hurts it may produce.第三段：结论段（第三段：结

18、论段（3-5句）句）问题解决型：问题解决型： 1句：结论句 2句：措施前的过度句 3句：措施一 4句：措施二 5句：结尾句第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）问题解决型：问题解决型：1句：结论句句：结论句 1）基于（通过）上述分析（讨论），我们可以很有把握地得出这样一个结论:。 2）把上面讨论的纳入到考虑之中，我们可以很有把握地得出这样一个结论:。第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）问题解决型：问题解决型：2句：措施前的过度句句：措施前的过度句 1）如果什么也不做来阻止这种社会趋势，其影响不久将显现出来，这必将不可避免地阻碍和谐社会的发展，因此，我们应该采取有效的措施来解决

19、这一问题。 If nothing is done to stop(prevent/check) this social tendency, its effects will soon be shown, which will inevitably hinder(block/hold back) the development of harmonious society, so(consequently/accordingly) we should take(adopt) effective (efficient) measures to solve this issue. 2）我们早就该是时候

20、采取措施解决这一问题了。 It is high time that we took(adopted) effective measures to solve this issue.第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）问题解决型：问题解决型：3句：措施一句：措施一 一方面，强烈建议应该（客观） On the one hand/For one thing, it is highly suggested that sb should 4句：措施二句：措施二 另一方面，最好应该/必须（主观） On the other hand/For another, it is advisable (ur

21、gent) for sb to do建议的句式建议的句式第三段：结论段（第三段：结论段（3-5句）句）问题解决型：问题解决型：5句：结尾句句：结尾句 只有这样（只有通过这些有效地措施），我们才能生活在更加和谐的社会、拥抱更加光明的未来。 Only in this way(through these measures), can we live in a more harmonious society and embrace a more brilliant future.六、真题分类讲解（一）柱状图2010年Directions: Write an essay based on the fol

22、lowing bar chart, in which you should1) describe the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.第一段：描述段 1句：这幅柱状图描述了从2000年到2008年发展中国家和发达国家手机用户数量的变化。 The bar chart depicts clearly the changes of cell phone subscriptions in developing countries and developed c

23、ountries from 2000 to 2008.第一段：描述段 2句：从2000年到2002年（前三年），发达国家的数量多于发展中国家的数量，并且两者都保持持续稳定的增长。 In the first three years, the number of mobile phone subscriptions in the developed countries was more than that in the underprivileged countries, and the amount in both countries kept stable.第一段：描述段 3句：然而从2003

24、年到2008年（自从2003年起），发展中国家的数量急剧增长，在2008年达到了发达国家数量的四倍。 While (whereas) from 2003 on, the number in the developing countries soared sharply, reaching 4 times of that in the developed countries in2008.第二段：论证段 1句：这个柱状图打算传达这样一个事实，即在发展中国家越来越多的人成为手机用户（发展中国家手机用户的数量越来越多）。 The bar chart above intends to convey a

25、 fact that a growing(an increasing) number of individuals have been becoming mobile phone subscribers in the developing countries.第二段：论证段 2句：如下原因可以解释这一现象。 Following reasons can account for this phenomenon.第二段：论证段 3句：首先，发展中国家拥有大量的人口，这对手机拥有潜在的需求。 First and foremost, developing countries have an amount

26、 of population, who have potential demands(needs). 4句：其次，近些年见证了发展中国家经济的迅速发展，人民生活水平有了显著提高，因此，他们可以买得起手机。 In addition, recent years have witnessed rapid development of Chinas economy, and peoples living standards have improved(enhanced/raised) remarkably, as a consequence of which, it is likely for the

27、m to afford cell phones. 5句：最后，还有一个因素，即随着科技的进步，手机变得越来越便宜，这也应该纳入到考虑之中。 Last but not least, there is another factor that with the advance(improvement) of technology, mobile phones have become increasingly inexpensive, which should be given into account.第三段：结论段 1句：基于（通过）上述分析（讨论），我们可以得出这样一个结论：无论在发展中国家还是

28、发达国家，手机越来越普及，已经成为不可或缺的交流工具（上述现象是有道理的）。 Based on what has been discussed above, a conclusion can be drawn safely that mobile phones have become increasingly popular and have been indispensable communicating tools whether in developing countries or developed countries. 第三段：结论段 2句：我坚信在不远的未来在发展中国家手机用户的数

29、量将会进一步增加。 I deeply believe that (am well convinced that) the number of mobile phones in developing countries will go a further step in the near future. I deeply believe that (am well convinced that) this tendency will continue for a while in the near future.第三段：结论段 3句：尽管手机给我们带来许多好处，但是我们不应该忽视其对我们的生活带

30、来的负面影响。 Although mobile phones may bring a great deal of benefits for us, we shouldnt neglect negative effects it may produce.柱状图练习柱状图练习一：2011年真题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart, In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments.You should write about

31、 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.第一段：描述段 1句：这个柱状图清晰地描述了2008年到2009年三个不同国家的汽车品牌市场份额的变化。 This column chart shows clearly the changes of market shares of three different car brands in domestic car market from 2008 to 2009.第一段：描述段 2句：国产汽车品牌的市场份额急剧地增加了，从2008年的25%到2009年的32%。 The market share of national bran

32、d climbed dramatically, from 25% in 2008 to 32% in 2009.第一段：描述段 3句：相反，日本汽车品牌的份额下降了10%，从35%到25%。 By contrast, the market share of Japans brand descended by 10%, from 35% to 25%.第一段：描述段 4句：在相同时间内，美国汽车品牌保持稳定，大约占15%。 Meanwhile, the share of Americas brand remained stable, accounting for approximately 15

33、%.第二段：论证段 1句：通过上述的分析，显而易见的是中国汽车市场的格局正在发生变化。第二段：论证段 2句：有如下原因可以解释这一现象。第二段：论证段 3句：首先，近些年迅速，我们已经见证了中国汽车企业在自主研发上投入了大量的资金和精力，因此，取得了很大的进步。 4句：其次，日本汽车，过去因为其杰出的品质和极好的稳定性而受到信赖，但现在正遭受信任的危机。 5句：最后，正是美国汽车的有效营销策略和悠久的历史使得其在中国的汽车市场占有稳定的份额。第三段：结论段 1句：考虑到上述所讨论的，我们很有把握地得出变化的这样的结论：中国的汽车市场格局变化符合中国经济的发展形式（上述现象是有道理的）。第三段：

34、结论段 2句：我坚信，在未来几年，国产汽车的市场份额会进一步扩大。第三段：结论段 3句：为了维持良好的发展势头，国产车应该继续保持创新。柱状图练习二：2013年真题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart in your writing, you should(1) interpret the chart, and(2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words. (15 points)柱状图练习三：2014年真题Directions: Write an ess

35、ay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)The bar chart above depicts changes of urban population and rural population of China during the past 20 years. The number of ur

36、ban population rocketed dramatically and sharply, reaching roughly(approximately/around) 650 million in 2010. By contrast, since (from 1990 on) the amount of rural population decreased slightly, reducing by 150 million by 2010.柱状图练习四：模拟题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In you

37、r essay, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)Sources of CO2 Emission The bar chart depicts the sources of CO2 emission in the air. The main contributor is vehicles, accounting for 50%. The CO2 emission from facto

38、ries takes up approximately 35%. While the minor contributor is smoking, occupying 5% or so. The chart above intends to convey a fact that with the rapid development of economy and the improvement of peoples living standards, air(environmental) pollution (contamination). From my perspective, followi

39、ng reasons may be responsible for this phenomenon above. First and foremost, it is because the government lacks of relevant rules and regulations that the public ignore environmental protection(conservation). Whats more, quite a few corporations and individuals pursue benefits at the cost of environ

40、ment, as a consequence of which, greenhouse gas has become more and more. Last but not least, there is another factor that the public are in lack of sense(awareness/ consciousness) towards environmental conservation, which should be taken into account. Based on what has been discussed above, a concl

41、usion can be drawn safely that we should protect the environment where we live. Consequently, we are supposed to adopt effective measures to solve this issue. On the one hand, it is highly suggested that the government should set up (establish) relevant(corresponding/correlative) rules and regulatio

42、ns and those who disobey them deserve severe punishment (penalty). On the other, it is advisable for the public to improve their sense towards environmental conservation. Only in this way, can we live in more harmonious environment.柱状图练习五：模拟题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. I

43、n your essay, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)柱状图练习六：模拟题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write abou

44、t 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)柱状图练习七：模拟题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points) Aged tendency of population Aging of population柱状

45、图练习八：模拟题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)柱状图练习九：模拟题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should1) i

46、nterpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)（二）饼状图2015年Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, your should1)interpret the chart, and 2)give your comment.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER S

47、HEET.第一段:描述段 1句：上述这个饼状图阐述了某城市居民在春节期间花销的比例。 Expense/expenditure/spending The pie chart above illustrates expense proportion of citizens of a certain(some a) city during the Spring Festival. The main contributor is the New Years gifts, accounting for 40%. While traffic and having a party occupy 20% re

48、spectively.第一段:描述段 3句：同时，交通和聚会吃饭分别占到了20%。第二段:论证段 1句：上述图表打算表达的事实是：人们在节假日期间对人际关系投入越来越多。/越来越注重人机交往。 The chart above intends to convey a fact that the public increasingly focus on interpersonal communication during festivals.第二段:论证段 2句：就我而言，如下原因可以对上述现象负责。 For my part, following reasons can be responsibl

49、e for this phenomenon.第二段:论证段 3句：首先，近些年已经见证了中国经济的迅速发展，因此，人们变得越来富有，他们有足够的钱用来人际交往。 First and most, recent years have witnessed rapid development of Chinas economy, as a consequence of which, individuals have become increasingly reach, and they have adequate (sufficient) money to spent on interpersonal

50、 communication. 4句：其次，随着社会的进步，人们思想如此提高，以至于人们越来越意识到维持人际关系的重要性。 In addition, with the improvement of the society, the publics minds improve so greatly that they increasingly realize the significance of keeping interpersonal relationship. 5句：最后，正是中国的传统习俗使人们在春节期间更加密切的交流。 Last but not least, it is Chines

51、e traditional custom that makes people communicate more closely during the Spring Festival.第三段：结论段 1句：考虑到上诉讨论的，我们可以很有把握地得出一个结论：人们春节期间的花销的已经构成了中国经济发展中的有力推动因素（上述现象是有道理的）。 .a fact that the expenditure during the Spring Festival has consisted of powerful promoting factor to Chinas economic development.

52、第三段：结论段 2句：我坚信，在未来几年，这一现象将会持续。第三段：结论段 3句：人际交往的花销固然是正常的，但不要铺张浪费，勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。 Although the expense to interpersonal communication is natural, we shouldnt waste, thrift (frugality) is Chinese peoples virtue. /在假期与亲戚和朋友交际聚会固然重要，但要注意休息，保持健康，多花点时间陪陪家人。饼状图练习饼状图练习一：2016年真题Directions:Write an essay based

53、on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)饼状图练习二：模拟题Directions: Write an essay based on the following chart. In your essay, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your

54、comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)饼状图练习三：模拟题Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)Income Sources of College Students（三）表格2012年真题Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart