四级写作ppt课件

1、 1、四级评分原那么和规范、四级评分原那么和规范(Principles and Standards) 2、常见错误、常见错误(Mistakes) 3、应对战略、应对战略(Strategies) 4、常用句型、常用句型Useful Structures)评分原那么评分原那么 1、检查考生能否到达大学英语教学大纲规、检查考生能否到达大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求。定的四级教学要求。 2、采用总体评分、采用总体评分Global Scoring)方法方法 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分reward scores),而不是按言语点的错误而不是按言语点的错误数目扣分。数目扣分

2、。 3、 从内容和言语两方面对作文进展综合判从内容和言语两方面对作文进展综合判别。作文应表达标题所规定的内容。评分要别。作文应表达标题所规定的内容。评分要思索文章能否切题，能否清楚而适宜地表达思索文章能否切题，能否清楚而适宜地表达思想，言语错误能否呵斥了解妨碍。思想，言语错误能否呵斥了解妨碍。评分规范按百分制评判评分规范按百分制评判 1、总分值15分 2、阅卷规范分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分 3、档次评分规范 2分， 5分， 8分， 11分，14分2分一塌糊涂 条理不清，言语支离破碎或大部分句子均有条理不清，言语支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。错误，且多数为严重错误

3、。 Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. its in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in peoples life and increase more knowldeges. But some people thought free Adimssions to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited5分糊里糊涂 根本切题，表达思想不清楚，衔

4、接性差，有较多严根本切题，表达思想不清楚，衔接性差，有较多严重言语错误。重言语错误。 In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that. The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested i

5、n all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to the museum life8分马马虎虎 根本切题。根本切题。 有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强衔接；言语错误相当多，有一些是严重错误。衔接；言语错误相当多，有一些是严重错误。 There is an interesting and instractive pictu

6、re which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums. But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to

7、the museums. 11分清清楚楚 切题。表达思想清楚，文字衔接，但有少量言语错切题。表达思想清楚，文字衔接，但有少量言语错误。误。 Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence? Free admission to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else and get more knowledge. T

8、his contributes to improve the living level of the public. It can certainly let us know more about our country and the world, which has a good effect on our development. Every coin has two sides. It can also bring some problems. For example,14分漂美丽亮 切题。表达思想清楚，文字照射、衔接，根切题。表达思想清楚，文字照射、衔接，根本上无言语错误。本上无言语

9、错误。 ExampleFree Admission to Museums?越来越多的博物馆如今免费向公众开放越来越多的博物馆如今免费向公众开放,目的是目的是有人以为这样做会带来一些问题有人以为这样做会带来一些问题在我看来在我看来 Nowadays, more and more museums are open to the public for free. Free admissions to museums will motivate peoples interests in history, arts and science. In this way, museums can provid

10、e people with easier access to knowledge, which is of vital importance for the whole nation. However, some people hold that free admissions to museums can bring about many problems. Since anybody can enter a museum without paying, the museum can be overcrowded and it will be a difficult job for muse

11、ums to maintain their collections. Besides, museums will face financial problems since they cant make profits from the admission fee. Due to the decrease in profits, museums have less motivation to up-date their collections and out-of-date museums cant avoid the fate to close up in the long run. In

12、my opinion, free admissions to museums are good for the public, but on the other hand they may pose problems to the museum management. Governments should provide help to museums and guide them to serve the public better.常见错误 1、篇章：引子过长，构造混乱、篇章：引子过长，构造混乱 2、句子构造：缺乏根本的句子认识，只需、句子构造：缺乏根本的句子认识，只需词汇的堆砌词汇的堆砌

13、 3、词汇：拼写、动词时态、名词单复数、词汇：拼写、动词时态、名词单复数、描画词副词比较级别、固定搭配、词汇的描画词副词比较级别、固定搭配、词汇的选择等方面错误选择等方面错误应对战略 1、篇章：开门见山，直奔主题。运用适宜、篇章：开门见山，直奔主题。运用适宜的方法展开主题句适当背诵一些模版的方法展开主题句适当背诵一些模版 2、句子构造：适当运用从句、倒装句、非、句子构造：适当运用从句、倒装句、非谓语动词、插入语，从而使文章句子构造谓语动词、插入语，从而使文章句子构造略微复杂而富于变化。略微复杂而富于变化。 但是最为重要的是：但是最为重要的是： 写对每个句子！写对每个句子！ 英语四级作文八种常用

14、句型英语四级作文八种常用句型一一.缘由缘由 1. A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon (problem). 2. The answer to this problem involves many factors. 3. The factors that contribute to this situation include. 4. The change in .largely results from the fact that. 5. One of the most

15、common factors (causes ) is that . 6. Another contributing factor (cause ) is . 7. Perhaps the primary factor is that 8. But the fundamental cause is that 二二.比较比较 1.The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages. 2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B. 3.For all the disadvantages, it

16、has its compensating advantages. 4.Like anything else, it has its faults. 5.A and B have several points in common. 6. A and B differ in several ways. 7. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects. 8. People used to think ., but things are different now. 三三.批驳批驳 1)It is true that ., but one

17、 vital point is being left out. 2) Some people say ., but it does not hold water. 3) Many of us have been under the illusion that. 4) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is. 5) It makes no sense to argue for . 6) Too much stress placed on . may lead to . 7) Such a statement

18、 mainly rests on the assumption that . 8) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that .四四.后果后果 1. It may give rise to a lot of problems. 2. The immediate result it produces is . 3. It will exercise a profound influence upon. 4. Its consequence can be so great that. 五五.举例举例 1) A good case in

19、 point is . 2) As an illustration, we may take . 3) Such examples might be given easily. 4) .is often cited as an example. 六六.证明证明 1) No one can deny the fact that . 2) The idea is hardly supported by facts. 3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows . 4) Recent studies indicate that . 5) Th

20、ere is sufficient evidence to show that . 6) According to statistics provided by ., it can be seen that . 七七.开篇开篇 1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of . 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among . 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern ove