中考英语专题讲练：叙事记叙文(解析版)

1、.叙事记叙文知识精讲一、写作概述叙事记叙文以记叙事件，描写见闻为主要写作方式，中间穿插作者的感受和评价。英文的叙事记叙文一般都采用开门见山的写作手法，直接交代时间、地点、任务、事件等，然后详细表达事情开展的原因、经过和结果。由于要描绘一件事情的开展，所以表示时间和过程的关联词就特别常用。一个事件会有许多细节需要写，还要选择与作者写作意图相关的主要材料。写记叙文有以下几点本卷须知：1. 主题要明确。主题是记叙文核心，文中所有内容都应该围绕主题展开，可以适当发挥，但不要偏离主题，否那么就会有跑题嫌疑。2. 记叙文五要素。一篇完好的叙事记叙文通常包含五大要素，就是我们说的五个常见疑问词，分别是whe

2、n，where，what，who，how。3. 表达手法多样化。假设条件允许，我们尽可能多地运用顺叙，倒叙，插叙等表达手法，让文章整体显得不那么单调乏味。4. 细节处理。写作过程中注意人称、数以及时态的一致性和连接性。二、必备句型1. On Sunday, I had a picnic with my parents.星期天我和父母一起去野餐了。2. We planned to go to the beach to spend our weekend.我们本打算去海边过周末。3. This morning, we got up earlier to catch the early bus.为了

3、赶上早班车，我们今天早上起床比较早。4. We set off to climb the hill at six in the morning.我们早上六点动身去爬山。5. After having a rest, we continued to water the trees.休息了一会儿后，我们继续浇树。6. Although we were all tired, we enjoyed ourselves today.尽管今天我们都很累，但我们玩得很快乐。7. What a terrible/ happy evening!多么糟糕的/快乐的一个晚上啊！三点剖析一、重难点：高分打破方法三按照

4、提纲，添枝加叶提纲列出后，写作思路就很明确了，接下来就要按照提纲开场写了。写作过程中注意题目要求中的内容要全部涵盖，不要丢点；于此同时，需要我们发挥的地方我们合理拓展，但不要信马由缰，脱离文章主旨。这一步是写作的关键，一定要慎重行之。为了保证写作质量，一定注意以下几点：1. 保证正确。写作第一步就是保证自己的表达是正确的。所以尽可能多地用自己熟悉的句型，假如长句不确定，干脆拆成两个句子表达，只写有把握的句子。2. 长短结合。写作中注意长句短句相结合，有的同学刻意追求较难的词汇和长句，这是一个误区。复合句是要有，但不要刻意追求，文章的准确性、表达合理性才是最重要的。3. 句型变换。当遇到不会写的

5、部分时，考场上不要慌张，把不会的词和句子转换成自己会的简单单词和句型。只要保证这些词和句子的正确性，得分不会低很多。4. 正确表述。除了以上几点，正确的表述在写作中也尤为重要。防止对考试要求的逐句翻译。题目是对文章的提示，所提的要点自然要全部包含，但这并不意味着逐句翻译题目要求。我们需要根据提示，自己组织语言写出这些要点既、即可；同时，要防止一些中式思维的影响。5. 衔接构造。写作过程中要重视句子之间的衔接，根据前后句关系，参加恰当的连词，会使整篇文章更加紧凑、流畅。于此同时，也会更加凸显文章构造，让阅卷老师更快地找到写作重点，这一点也是我们在写作训练中要重点抓的一项。二、万能模板：1. 参加

6、活动_ 时间, we panned to _ 活动名称.At _ 时间, _ 详细活动. Then _ 接下来的活动. Finally, _ 其他活动.We _ 感受和收获2. 参观旅行_ 时间, we went to _地点 to have a trip.First we went to _. Then _. At last_ 一次介绍参观旅游的经历.Its a _ day简要评述. I hope _ 发表看法.题模精选题模一：造句练习例1.1.1 根据括号内的中文提示，转换句型。1. Once it is seen, it will never be forgotten. 省略_2. Ab

7、eautiful girl stood in front of me. 用倒桩构造_3. Ayoung woman got on the bus, and a baby was in her arms. 合并成一句话_题模二：书面表达例1.2.1 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连接、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给的英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的姓名和校名。假设你叫王刚，最近收到你的英国朋友John发来的邮件，他想理解你的暑期生活。请你根据他的问题回复邮件。提示词语：summer vacation, because, helpful,

8、be good for, plan, improve随堂练习随练1.1 根据括号内的中文提示，转换句型。1. If you hurry, you will not miss the bus. 改为并列句_2. The students reached the top of the mountain exhausted. 状语前置_3. They will never give up the struggle for success. 改为倒装句_4. We should make great efforts to reduce air pollution. 改为被动语态_5. He raise

9、d his voice so that the audience could hear him clearly. 使用不定式_随练1.2 父母为我们付出了很多，你又做过哪些事情来表达自己的感恩之情呢?某英文报纸就“感恩主题进展征文，请你投稿。描绘你为父母做过的一件事，并谈谈你的感受。提示词语：grow up, show ones gratitude 表示感谢, something special_随练1.3 请根据提示内容，以“Avisit to _ home为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，表达你“走亲戚或访友的一次经历。提示：When? Whose home? How? What? Your

10、feelings要求：1. 请将短文题目补充完好； 2. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，意思连接，书写工整； 4. 文中不得出现任何真实信息姓名、校名和地名等； 5. 词数：不少于70词。Avisit to _ home_自我总结课后作业作业1 根据括号内的中文提示，转换句型。1. If it is necessary, you can turn to your teacher for help. 省略_2. The young woman used to be a housewife. She works in the office now. 改为复合句_3. This is

11、the only way that we can live a better life. 改为倒装句_4. They will never give up the struggle for success. 用倒装构造_5. This is the book that I bought yesterday. 改为分词作定语_6. The quality of the car is good. The price of the car is also reasonable. 用短语连成一句话_作业2 书面表达1. 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom想理解有关中国春节的情况。请你根据以下要点提示，给

12、他写一封80词左右的邮件，把中国春节介绍给他。短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要点提示：春节一般在一月或二月，是中国最重要的节日。大年三十晚上，家庭成员聚在一起吃年夜饭。饭后，人们会在电视上看春节联欢晚会，还会放鞭炮等。孩子们还能从长辈那里得到红包。参考词汇：on the eve of在的前夕；Spring Festival Gala 春晚Dear Tom,Now Id like to tell you something about the Spring Festival._We always have a good time. Welcome to our country.Yours

13、,Lihua作业3 人们总是在成长中进步和完善自己。几年前迈克不懂礼貌，喜欢和别人打架，父母为之非常担忧。后来发生的一件事改变了他。请根据下面的提示内容，以“Mikes changes为题写一篇短文。提示词：father, hurt, stop, study hard, polite and friendly, get a good grade要求：1. 所有提示词必须用上，但可适当发挥。短文完好通顺； 2. 80词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。Mikes changesMike has changed a lot in the past few years._答案解析叙事记叙文题模精选

14、题模一：造句练习例1.1.1【答案】 1. Once seen, it will never be forgotten.2. In front of me stood a beautiful girl.3. Ayoung woman got on the bus, a baby in her arms.【解析】 1. 考察句子的省略。假设主从句主语一致，为了表达更简洁，从句的主语可以被省略。2. 考察倒装句。将表方位的词或短语提早，句子要全部倒装，即将动词提到主语之前。3. 考察句子合并。两句话中的两个动作有一定关联，可以把次要句子中的动词作处理当做状语，假设两句话主语统一，省略次要句子主语；

15、假设主语不统一，那么都需要保存主语。题模二：书面表达例1.2.1【答案】 One possible version:Hi, John!Im glad to hear from you. I am going to learn English during this summer vacation. I find English useful and I am not very good at it. I am especially poor in listening and speaking. I hear there is an English class taught by the US

16、teachers. I am planning to go to that English class so that I can improve my listening and speaking. Yours, Wang Gang【解析】 句型提炼。1. Im glad to hear from you.2. I am going tobecause 3. I am planning to gowhere the air is fresh and The reasons why I are as followingfirstlythenfinally随堂练习随练1.1【答案】 1. Hur

17、ry up! Or you will miss the bus.2. Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.3. Never will they give up the struggle for success.4. Great efforts should be made by us to reduce air pollution.5. He raised his voice to make the audience hear him clearly.【解析】 1. 考察句子间连词。根据句意：假如你快点，就不会错过公交

18、车。就相当于：快点，否那么你会错过公交车。否那么用“or。2. 考察句子成分。本剧中“exhausted表示动作完成时的状态，作状语。状语不是句中必要成分，所以位置比较灵敏，本句直接将状语提早即可，更加强调学生们爬到山顶时精疲力竭的状态。3. 考察部分倒桩。句中有否认词，否认词提早，句子要用半倒装，将助动词提到主语前。4. 考察被动语态。将宾语提早，动词用“be done的被动形式。5. 考察不定式的应用。不定式就可以表目的，但to后要跟动词原形，所以使用了“make sb. do sth. 让某人做某事句型。随练1.2【答案】 Theres no doubt that parents hav

19、e given me a lot since I was born. With their care, I grow up happily. So I think it is necessary to do something special for them to show my gratitude.Both of my parents love music. So it would be a great idea to buy a wonderful CDfor them. Last Sunday, I went to a bookstore and chose one among the

20、 top 10. While we were having dinner together, I played the CDIt was beautiful. With great joy, they gave me a warm hug and a big smile. I felt very sweet.I was really proud that I did something for my parents. Their smiles were the best encouragement for me. I made up my mind to do things like this

21、 more often.【解析】 一、审题本篇文章要求描写一件做过的事，属于叙事类文章，通篇以过去时为主；叙事类文章通常会发表对于这件事的感受，所以这个时候需要转换为一般如今时。还要注意这是一篇给报社的投稿，所以要写的正式一点。二、写作思维1. 首段写出父母为我付出很多，表达自己对父母的感谢之情。There is no doubt its necessary for me to do2. 根据亲身经历，描写一件为父母做过的事。it would a great idea to I went to I played 3. 总结感受。I was really proud thatI made up

22、my mind to随练1.3【答案】 Avisit to my friends homeLast Sunday afternoon, I went to my friends home. It was not far. So I went there by bike. In her home, we watched an English movie and listened to music. We also made some toys with old clothes. It was not easy, but we tried. We cut the clothes into piec

23、es. Then we put the pieces and other things together. At last, these pieces were made into different toys. How lovely they were! We had much fun when we did it. We were very proud. What a pleasant visit!【解析】 一、审题本文虽然是一件叙事类记叙文，但开放性很强，事件需要自己去构思，包括详细发生的时间，地点，交通工具，拜访时做的事情，自己的感受等。这样的作文考生比较好上手，但一定注意细节处理，确

24、保每句话都能正确传达自己的意思。于此同时，描绘以前的一次经历，所以通篇一般过去时。二、写作思维1. 开篇点题：I went to visit +时间，地点，方式等2. 介绍经历：In her home, we Then At last3. 经历感受：I feel How lovely they were.三、文章亮点1. 重点短语1. cut into 把切成2. be made into 把制成2. 高级句型1. At last, these pieces were made into different toys.最后这些布块制成了不同的玩具。2. How lovely they were

25、! 它们多得意呀！课后作业作业1【答案】 1. If necessary, you can turn to your teacher for help.2. The young woman who works in the office now used to be a housewife.3. Only in this way can we live a better life.【解析】 1. 考察句子省略。从句中的主语，谓语并没有明确指代，按口语习惯可以省略。2. 考察简单句改定语从句。前后两句都在说一个人或物，本句中两句话都在说“the young woman可以用关系代词who合成一个

26、复合句。3. 考察句子部分倒桩。Only+状语提早，句子用半倒装，将助动词提到主语前。作业2【答案】 Dear Tom,Now Id like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. It is the most important festival in China. It is always in January or February. On the eve of the Spring Festival, family members get together and then have a big dinner. After d

27、inner, people like to watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Many people are interested in it. We like to set off firecrackers at night. They are really wonderful. During the Spring Festival, we get presents of money in red packets from our grandparents, parents, aunts and uncles.We always have a goo

28、d time. Welcome to our country.Yours,Lihua【解析】 一、审题本文是向外国笔友介绍中国节日，涉及中国传统文化，是考试热点。春节又是我们最为熟知的一个节日，所以写起来应该不难。提示信息都要包含：首先写春节是重要节日，一般在每年一二月份；然后写人们在春节期间的活动，如家庭聚餐get together, have a big dinner；看春晚watch Spring Festival Gala；放鞭炮set off firecrackers；得到红包get red packets等。介绍风俗，全篇用一般如今时。二、写作思维1. 开头点题：It is the

29、 most important festival in China.2. 段中叙事：On the eve of the Spring Festival get together have a big dinner 3. 结尾客套：We always have a good time. Welcome to our country.三、写作亮点1. 重点短语1. get together 聚在一起；2. be interested in对感兴趣2. 高级句型1. It is the most important festival in China.在中国这是最重要的节日。2. During the Spring Festival, we get presents of money in red packets from our grandparents, parents, aunts and uncles.春节期间，我们可以从爷爷奶奶，父母，姑姑和叔叔那里得到红包。作业3【答案】 Mikes changesMike has changed a lot in the past few years. Afew years ago, he was lazy and rude. And he liked to