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1、精做09备战2021年高考英语之书面表达书信类经典剖析例题1:书信(2020全国高考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1 .剧情简介;2 .指导内容;3 .商定时间地点。注意:1 .词数100左右;2 .结束语已为你写好。【答案】 Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.We
2、'd like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a
3、challenge. Having written the English script, we don't want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give y
4、ou more details?Given your busy schedule, I'd be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,请求外教Miss Evans对于theSteamboat改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时。结构:总分总法第一
5、段说明写这封邮件的目的;第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题;第三段表达感 谢,并期待早日得到回复。第二步:列提纲(重点词组)write to; according to ; combine ; adaption ; challenge; attached to ; convenient第三步:连词成句根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词) 连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范 文
6、中使用 了较多主从复合句,如:If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另 外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。应对策略书信或电子邮件写作指南英语书信写作的关键在于对书信主体的处理:1 .称呼(salutation):收信人称呼从信左边开始写,一般以“Dear”或“My dear”开头,后面常用逗号。2 .正文(body):正文是书
7、信的主体,它质量的高低将直接决定作文得分的高低,因此在书信的训练和写 作中对其耍精雕细刻,力求做到层次清晰、要点齐全、过渡自然、行文流畅和文笔优美。若是回信则应根 据实际需要告诉对方自己何时收到信件,自己的感受或自己的近况,而后切入正文。正文结束时,常会另起一行,写上一些表示祝福或期待的话语,如:Best wishes! /Looking forward to your early reply./Good luck! 等。3 .结尾(complimentaryclose):是写信人表示自己对收信人的谦称,常用表达有Yours, Yourssincerely. Yours truly或 Your
8、s faithfully等。写作语料一、常用开头1. 邀请信:It is a pleasure for me to invite you on behalf of. .to./We would like to invite.to./We are more than glad to invite you to.2. 申请信:My name is.I would like to work as./apply fbr.3. 祝贺信: We are very happy to know that you have successfully.Allow mc/us to give our most si
9、ncere congratulations on./I was delighted to hear (to receive) the news that.4. 投诉或抱怨信:I'm writing to tell you something about. which I think is not satisfying.5. 慰问信: We are very sorry to learn of/leam that./I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that.6. 建议信:I'm glad to rec
10、eive your letter asking fbr advice on how to.Here are some tips fbr you.7. 询问信:I would like to ask some information on./Pm writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.8. 欢迎信:Glad to hear from you and you're welcome to.9. 回信: Thank you for your letter of./Thanks so much fbr your letter,
11、which arrived./! am writing to tell you about./Pm glad to receive your letter. It a pleasure fbr me to tell you my plan of.10. 其他:Now I am so excited that I can't wait to share with you./1 would also like to know if you can./rm very excited to learn that./It is indeed a wonderfill idea to.二、常用结尾
12、1 .鼓励型:How delighted I am now! Actually, whatever happens, we must stay clam first and then find a wise solution.Try and write me in Chinese next time.2 .祝愿型:I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.I will value them forever. Many happy returns of the day(年年有今日)
13、.3 .请求询问型:By the way, could IBy the way, could I.? Thank you very much in advance.4 .展望型:I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the steps we take to make our country an even cleaner place.I believe that this magazine will surely strengt
14、hen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it.5 .目的型:I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make more improvements.6 .期待型:I'm looking forward to your early reply.If you happen to know the news, please inform your classmates of it. I hope all of you ca
15、n learn a lot in this activity.真题精做精做1. (2020浙江高考真题)假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电了邮件,内容包括:1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。精做2. (2020北京高考真题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学 在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:1 .条件及要求;2 .表示感谢并提醒注意防护。注意:1.词数不少于50:3 .开头和
16、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua精做3. (2020天津高考真题)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活 动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍有关情况,内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像);(2)对活动的感受:(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行方连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎COVID-F9Dear Chris,I'm
17、so glad to hear from you.Yours,Li Jin精做4. (2019天津高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津,英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间,英 方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座。现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写 一封电子邮件:(1)你喜欢的讲座话题(从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一);(2)选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容:(3)希望从中有何收获。注意:(1)词数不少于100:(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。Dear Chris,I'm
18、Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin精做5. (2018天津高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他曾在机 器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技 能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3
19、)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the World Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris,I have good news to tell you.Fm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Jin精做6. (2020浙江高考真题)假定你是高一学生李华。请你给你的美国网友Tony写一封e- mail,把你的暑假安排告诉他,并询问他的暑假安排。内容包括:1 .完成作业,适量阅读;2 .走亲访友;3 .参加社区组织的志愿者活动。注意:1.词数80左右;信的开头已经写好。4 .
20、可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Tony,How is everything with you recently?Yours sincerely,Li Hua精做7.(2020上海高考真题)Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是李敏,在一本英文旅游杂志上,你发现了这样一条信息:某古城景区对当地人 收费5美元,对外国人收费15美元,针对这一情况,请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封 信,具体耍求如下:1
21、 .介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容;2 .针对此事自己的态度以及理由。精做8. (2019全国高考真题)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内 容包括:1 .写信目的:2 .个人优势;3 .能做的事情。注意:1 .词数100左右;2 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3 .结束语己为你写好。精做9. (2019天津高考真题)假设你是晨光中学的李津。为配合学校的“读书月”活动,你校英语社团的微信公众号开展以“Let'sRead”为题的征文活动。耍求同学们根据个人的阅读体会,从所读过的书籍中选定一种类型,推荐给其他同学。现请你投稿,文章内容应
22、包括:(1)推荐书籍的类型及特点;(2)推荐的理由。参考词汇:科幻小说science fiction侦探小说detective novel魔幻小说fantasy传记文学biography科普读物popular science注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)所选书籍类型不限于参考词汇给出的范围;(3)内容充实、行文连贯;(4)题目已给出,不计入总词数。March 22, 2019By Li Jin精做10. (2018浙江高考真题)假定你是李华,得知外教Mr.Hall今年寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:1 .时间2 .同过节的家人3 .活动注意:1.词数100左右
23、;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。精做11. (2019上海高考真题)Write an English composition in 120)-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是明后中学的李华,你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信,告诉你他要开发一个新的APP,用这个软件共 享衣服,想要征集大家的看法,你是否愿意共享你的衣服,给出理由(信的格式已给)。模拟精做精做1. (2021河北衡水市衡水中学高三二模)假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter在中国做交换生。春节将至,请你给他写一封信,邀请他来你家做客,内
24、容如 下:1 .询问放假时间;2 .邀请到家中过节;3 .介绍节日活动。注意:1 .词数100左右;2 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。精做2. (2021广西高三二模)假定你是某国际学校高中生李华,最近你发现你校图书馆阅览室中存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象, 请用英语给馆长Mr. Smith写一封信。要点如下:1 .说明写信的目的;2 .提出合理的建议.注意:1.词数100左右;3 .可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;4 .开头和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, a high school student.Thank you for your
25、 consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua精做3. (2021石嘴山市第三中学高三期末)假设你是某国际学校的学生李华,最近在学校里总看到有浪费饭菜的现象。请你给全校同学写一封英 文信,倡议大家节约粮食。要点包括:1 .必要性;2 .具体措施;3 .发出倡议。注意:1.词数100字左右;4 .可适当增加细节已使行文连贯;5 .开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入词数。Dear fellow students,Yours,Li Hua精做4. (2021四川绵阳市三台中学实验学校高三月考)假定你是李华,你校的校园网“英语大地(EnglishWorld)”专栏拟登载介绍国外
26、著名旅游景点的文章。请你给英国笔友Lucy写封约稿信。要点如下:1 .栏目介绍(国外著名景点简介);2 .稿件长度(不超过800词);3 .交稿日期(截止本月底)。注意:1.词数:100词左;4 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;5 .短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear LucyLi Hua精做5. (2021黑龙江哈尔滨市哈尔滨三中高三一模)假定你是李华。近期,你在上海参加了为期两周的以“培养国际视野的新一代”为主题的全国中学生夏 令营活动。在培训期间,外教Smith先生就学习技巧和文化拓展等方面给予你很多帮助。回家后,你想给他 写一封信,以表达感谢,内容包括:1 .表示感谢;2
27、 .回顾你得到的帮助以及收获;3 .祝福和期待。注意:1.词数100左右;4 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;5 .开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Smith,Yours sincerely.Li Hua精做6. (2021山东德州市高三一模)假如你是李华,你校英文报为高三学生新增了How to Deal withStress专栏。请你给编辑写一封电子邮件,包括以下内容:1 .高三学生可能面对的压力。2 .给出“减压”建议(不少于两条)。注意:1.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总字数:词数80左右。3 .适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear editor,Your newly-a
28、dded column How to Deal with Stress has just caught my attention.精做7. (2021内蒙古呼和浩特市高三一模)假定你是李华,你校将举办“我的祖国和我''英语演讲比赛。请给你校外籍教师Mr.Sm汕写一封电子邮件,告知他演讲比赛的有关内容,并邀请他当评委。要点包括:1 .比赛的时间和地点;2 .举办此活动的目的和意义;3 .诚挚邀请他担任评委。注意:1 .词数100左右;2 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Mr. Smith,With best wishes,Li Hua精做8. (2021湖南长沙市长沙
29、一中高三一模)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom对中国文化有浓厚的兴趣。恰好你校今年暑假将为外国学生举办一 场汉语夏令营活动(Chinese SummerCamp),请你给他发一封电子邮件,邀请他参加该活动。内容包括:1 .活动时间和地点;2 .活动内容:学习日常汉语、了解中国历史和传统文化、参观博物馆等;3 .报名方式和截止日期。注意:1 .写作词数应为80左右;2 .请在答题卡的相应位置作答。精做9. (2021四川攀枝花市高三一模)假定你是攀枝花中学学生李华。你从校园网上得知,你校本期新来的美国外教Ms.Fiona需耍一名学生助手在生活和工作上提供帮助。请你给她写一封电子邮件申请该职位。主
30、要内容如下:1 .写信目的;2 .个人优势:3 .能做的事情;4 .表达期待注意:1 .词数100词左右;2 .开头及结尾均已给出,不计入总词数;3 .可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:助手一 assistantDear Ms. Fiona,精做10. (2021云南高三一模)假定你是李华,学校组织学生参加中外文化交流小使者(little envoys of cultural exchange)选拔活动,请根据以下内容写一份英文电子邮件申请参选:1 .个人简介;2.申请理由;3.联系方式。注意:1 .词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Mad
31、am,Yours,Li Hua精做09备战2021年高考英语之书面表达书信类经典剖析例题1:书信(2020全国高考真题)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1 .剧情简介;2 .指导内容;3 .商定时间地点。注意:1 .词数100左右;2 .结束语已为你写好。【答案】 Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to
32、the textbook.We'd like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adapt
33、ion is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don't want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tu
34、esday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Td be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,请求外教Miss Evans对于theSteamboat改编短剧的支持。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时。结构:总分总法第一段说明写这封邮件
35、的目的;第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题;第三段表达感 谢,并期待早日得到回复。第二步:列提纲(重点词组)write to; according to ; combine ; adaption ; challenge; attached to ; convenient第三步:连词成句根据提示及关犍词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。第五步:润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整,耍点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范 文中使用 了较多主从
36、复合句,如:If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?这句话运用了if引导的条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另 外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。成对策略书信或电了邮件写作指南英语书信写作的关键在于对书信主体的处理:1 .称呼(salutation):收信人称呼从信左边开始写,一般以“Dear”或“My dear''开头,后面常用逗号。2 .正文(body):正文是书
37、信的主体,它质量的高低将直接决定作文得分的高低,因此在书信的训练和写 作中对其要精雕细刻,力求做到层次清晰、要点齐全、过渡自然、行文流畅和文笔优美。若是回信则应根 据实际需要告诉对方自己何时收到信件,自己的感受或自己的近况,而后切入正文。正文结束时,常会另起一行,写上一些表示祝福或期待的话 语,如:Best wishes! /Looking forward to your early reply./Good luck! 等«3 .结尾(complimentaryclose):是写信人表示自己对收信人的谦称,常用表达有Yours, Yourssincerely, Yours iruly
38、或 Yours failhfully等。写作语料一、常用开头1. 邀请信:It is a pleasure for me to invite you on behalf of. to./We would like to invite.to./We are more than glad to invite you to.2. 申请信: My name is.1 would like to work as./apply for.3. 祝贺信: We are very happy to know that you have successfully.Allow me/us to give our m
39、ost sincere congratulations on./I was delighted to hear (to receive) the news that.4. 投诉或抱怨信:I'm writing to tell you something about. which I think is not satisfying.5. 慰问信: We are very sorry to learn of/leam that./I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that.6. 建议信:I'm glad
40、to receive your letter asking for advice on how to.Here arc some tips for you.7. 询问信:I would like to ask some information on./Pm writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.8. 欢迎信:Glad to hear from you and you're welcome to.9. 回信: Thank you for your letter of./Thanks so much for your le
41、tter, which arrived./! am writing to tell you about./Fm glad to receive your letter. It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of.10. 其他:Now I am so excited that I can't wait to share with you./1 would also like to know if you can./rm very excited to learn that./It is indeed a wonderful ide
42、a to.二、常用结尾1 .鼓励型:How delighted I am now! Actually, whatever happens, we must stay clam first and then find a wise solution.Try and write me in Chinese next time.2 .祝愿型:I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.I will value them forever. Many happy returns of the
43、 day(年年有今日).3 .请求询问型:By the way, could IBy the way, could I. ? Thank you very much in advance.4 .展望型:I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the steps we take to make our country an even cleaner place.I believe that this magazine will su
44、rely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it.5 .目的型:I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make more improvements.6 .期待型:I'm looking forward to your early reply.If you happen to know the news, please inform your classmates of it. I hope a
45、ll of you can leam a lot in this activity.真题精做精做1. (2020浙江高考真题)假定你是李华,你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter因病回国休假。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.询问近况;2.分享班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【答案】 Dear Peter,I am sorry to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave. How are you feeling now?I hope my good news for you will sw
46、eep away the shadow of disease. Last month, an English festival was held in our school, and our class performed a song which you taught us at the festival. As soon as we finished the song, all the audience gave us warm applause. If only you had been there.We all miss you very much and wish you a qui
47、ck and complete recovery.Yours,Li Hua【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向因病假回国休假的外教老师询问近况,分享消息和表 达祝愿。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构:三段式结构。第一段询问近况;第二段告知班级消息;第三段表达祝愿。要求:1.询问近况(How are you feeling now?)2 .告知班级消息 (my good news; performed a song which you taught us)3 .表达祝愿 (wish you a quick and compl
48、ete recovery)第二步:列提纲(重点词组)be sorry to do; on sick leave; sweep away; as soon as; give sb. warm applause; recovery第三步:连词成句1.1 am sony to hear that you have gone back home on sick leave.1.1 hope my good news for you will sweep away the shadow of disease.3. As soon as we finished the song, all the audi
49、ence gave us warm applause.4. We all miss you very much and wish you a quick and complete recovery.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,第五步:润色修改 精做2. (2020北京高考真题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学 在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:1 .条件及要求;2 .表示感谢并提醒
50、注意防护。注意:1.词数不少于50:3 .开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you.Our schoofs drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?He or s
51、he should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.Best wishes,Yours,【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫 情滞留英
52、国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内 容包括:1.条件及要求;2.表示感谢并提醒注意防护。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):drama club (戏剧俱乐部);plan to do sth.(计划做某事);in one's place(代替某人);recommend(推荐);a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人);currently(目前);experienced(熟练的);both.and.(两者都);take care of(照顾);wear a mask(戴口罩)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(
53、组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在 时。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美 观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in yourplace.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清 晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。精做3. (2020天津高考真题
54、)假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活 动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍有关情况,内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像);(2)时活动的感受: (3)对自己未来的展望。注意:词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行方连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony新冠脑炎COVID-F9Dear Chris,I'm so glad to hear from you.Yours,Li Jin【答案】 Dear Ch
55、ris,1 am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the video of alum
56、nus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue th
57、e dying, devoting myself to my work.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin【分析】这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信。【详解】第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,假如你是晨光 中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾,观看校友抗疫事迹录像等) 2.对活动的感受。3.对自己未来的展望。第二,人称为第一人称。第三,时态为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段
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