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1、应用文审题：内容：邀请不回国的Mr. Hall来家里一起过春节要点：1.时间 2.介绍家里人 3.有特色的春节活动着眼点： 1. 时间和介绍家里人可以用常用句型表述清楚即可 2.有特色的春节活动要多点功夫考虑一下所写活动 是否有吸引力。参考范文 1 Dear Mr. Hall, Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. its traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my br

2、other will all be there. Well make dumplings together and have a big dinner. Well also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If youre able to come, Ill go and pick you up at your place. Best! Li Hua 参考范文 2 Dear Mr. Hall, Im writing on beha

3、lf of my whole family to invite you to join us for dinner at 6:30, Feb. 13 at my house for the Spring Festival the most important festival for Chinese people, during which we will put up various decorations to in crease atmosphere of holiday, especially red paper-cutting with the character “fu”, mea

4、ning blessing. Whats more, you can also try the local food at dinner and there will be your favorite dumplings. Only in this holiday can my entire family get together. Your presence is highly expected. We are looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua参考范文3Dear Mr. Hall, I am writing to invite you

5、sincerely to spend the Spring Festival with my family for Ive heard you are not going back to your hometown. The time scheduled is at 6:30 pm. Prior to the Spring Festival, lots of activities will be well-prepared, such as making dumplings and setting off fireworks. It would be a great pleasure if y

6、ou could come and have fun with us. My parents and grandparents are expecting your arrival with sincerity. If youd like to participate, please let us know at your earliest convenience. Yours, Li Hua续写1. 读2. 段首研究3.做好3个位置的衔接写作4.确定内容大纲5.注意使用一些复杂词汇和复杂句型6.卷面段首研究每次按顺序思考下列问题：1. 所给段落首句是否有互相限制的内容存在2. 段1 的段落首

7、句队段一的内容写作是否有限制3. 内容上怎么做好对所给材料的最后一段的衔接4. 段一的完整内容对段二有什么限制作用 5. 文章的主旨是什么做好3个位置的衔接 每一个段落自己动笔的第一个句子必须在内容上做好跟2个所给段落首句的衔接 段一的最后一句必须在内容上做好和段二所给首句的衔接确定内容大纲 段一内容：母亲因为健忘引发的一件事，最好是有趣的，不能是跟帐篷完全没关系的。 段二内容：一些美丽风景的描述，以及一些其他内容的开放性拓展复杂词汇和句型 的使用从句的使用：名词性从句，形容词性从句，状语从句特殊句型的使用：强调句，常见倒装句，非谓语动词，宾补结构 The next day we rememb

8、ered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. But then we were half an hour away from the hotel, where the tent was left behind. Dad recommended buying a new one, whole mom insisted on our going back to fetch it, saying “forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly, so its unwise to give up

9、 the tent.” finally, we got back the tent and hit the road again. If mom hadnt been that absent-minded, it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. One day, towards evening, we found a great camping sit

10、e at the foot of a high mountain. David and I helped dad put up the tent, and mom was busy preparing supper. When the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains, the tent was set up and the mal was ready. Sitting around the camp fire, we talked and laughed . Every time we mentioned the funn

11、y incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over moms face. The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. To our delight, mom gave up the idea of camping in some strangers backyard. Instead, we found a wonderful camping site in the wild. It was a clearing in the

12、woods by a small lake. Where dad could catch some fish for dinner. We had no trouble setting up our tent, but we were disappointed to find that mom forgot to pack up pillows. Needless to say, we all woke up with a sore neck the next morning. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sight along the way. It was a fantastic trip. We crossed big fivers and vast plains, climbed high mountains, and overlooked deep valleys. During the trip, moms being absent-minded not only got us into mu