2015届高考英语二轮复习高效书面表达专题卷18Word版含解析

1、2015届高考英语二轮复习 高效书面表达专题卷18（含解析）1书面表达（满分30分）老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。 在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈你的想法。短文内容要点：墙报可以为同学提供信息；墙报可以帮助同学门学习；如何办好墙报。注意：词数120左右； 2. 开头已经写好， 不计入总词数。March 11, Friday FineToday I was requested by our teacher _ _2书面表达(满分15分)假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Dave来信想了解有关广州亚运会的举办情况。请你根据下列提示用英语写一封回信， 1 广州成功举办

2、了本届亚运会，吸引了成千上万的游客。2 亚洲各国运动员积极参与，展现了良好的体育精神。3 中国运动员表现完美，获得了199枚金牌。注意： 1. 短文须包含上述各要点，也可适当发挥、增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 词数：100字左右，文中所给出的词数不记入总词数。Dear Dave, I am glad to tell you what has happened here for the 2010 Asian Games._ _ Yours, Li Hua3进入高三后，学习任务重、压力大，因此，有效的学习显得尤为重要。请根据你的切身体会，从合理安排、劳逸结合等方面谈谈你对有效学习的看法。字数120

3、左右，可适当增加内容。4在智能手机日益普及的当下，我们已经跨入了移动时代。智能手机五花八门的功能影响着我们的生活、社交、学习、工作、消费、休闲等各个方面。请你就某一个方面谈谈智能手机带给你的影响以及你对这种影响的看法。要求：根据以上内容写一篇120词左右的短文。提示：智能手机：smartphone微信：Wechat5阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Many students in the colleges and universities are found taking no notice of the waste of water, electricity or pa

4、per.Very few students use washbasins when washing faces. Some schoolgirls do not turn off the taps when putting the facial cream on their faces, leaving the water flow away. There is a phenomenon which can often be seen in students public washrooms. A basin of clothes is put under a tap which is tur

5、ned on at the maximum, and the water in the basin is spilling over, but there is no one in the washroom. The owner of the clothes comes back and pours out half of the water in the basin.The same thing happens in the use of electricity in the colleges and universities. During supper time, all the lig

6、hts are turned on. However, there are only several or even no students in the classroom, which can hold over a hundred students. At night, some of the dormitories are locked, but the lights are still on inside. Quite a few students explain themselves that they dont have to pay the extra electricity

7、cost even if they overuse it because they have paid the school fee already.【写作内容】1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 以约120个词就“学生应增强节约能源意识”这个话题发表你的看法，内容要点包括：(1) 学生增强节约能源意识的必要性；(2) 你认为生活中如何做到节约能源。【写作要求】作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_参考答案1【解析】这是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也

8、很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。适当运用简单句，但是太多写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞贫泛、言之无物，要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，多运用复杂句。就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“firstof all “secondly”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，2Dear Dave, I am glad to tell you what has happened here for the 2010 Asian Games. With the

9、 devotion of all the workers and volunteers, Guangzhou has held the 2010 Asian Games successfully and attracted thousands of visitors Athletes from Asian countries participated the grand event with high enthusiasm, hoping to win gold medals for their homeland, which best explains the essence of the

10、Olympics. The achievement of Chinese athletes was remarkable. Not only did they win a great number of medals, but the respect and the honor as well. Behind the high ranking they approached and the honor they were given, we should think of their determination and hard work toward the long road to suc

11、cess which laid a solid foundation for their achievements. Though the Games have come to an end, our enthusiasm for sports wont reduce. I sincerely hope that you can come to Guangzhou to have an exciting journey! Yours , Li Hua【解析】略3 How to Be an Efficient Learner?Being Senior Three students, we hav

12、e a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. Because of limited time, its important to be an efficient learner. But how can we become efficient learners?Firstly, we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover. Secondly, divide our

13、spare time into several parts to make sure we go through all the subjects and try to be well-balanced students. Thirdly, take regular exercise to refresh our mind and energy and make sure we are healthy enough to get round our lessons. Remember: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Besides, d

14、iscussing with classmates about difficult problems to find best solutions can be of help. Its also important to read extra books to ensure you feed on new ideas from time to time.All in all, efficiency is the key to success.【解析】 试题分析：这是一篇开放性作文写作,话题是关于有效的学习，内容要考生自己发挥，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很

15、强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：divideinto将分成， go through通过，be of help有帮助， the key to success成功的关键，. Being Senior Three s

16、tudents, we have a tight schedule and seem to have endless homework to do every day. 这句话使用了现在分词做状语，Because of limited time, its important to be an efficient learner.这句话使用了it做形式主语， we should make a realistic agenda, which lists all we have to do and the deadline to cover. 这句话使用了非限制性定语从句，文章还使用了谚语： All

17、 work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.特别值得一题的是文章通过Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Besides, All in all, efficiency is 这些关联词的使用更加连贯了。考点: 考查开放式作文4Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world. Just as what computers once achieved

18、, smartphones are transforming our life in every possible wayhow we socialize, entertain, and study.I used to contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends. I can also receive

19、 the latest news by subscribing to famous websites. It makes me feel so connected with the rest of the world. I am truly grateful for the convenience, connection and comfort brought by this marvelous technology. But meanwhile I feel deeply anxious. To stay informed, I constantly update my Wechat, fo

20、r which I am often distracted. Therefore, we should be cautious not to fall slaves to the smartphones.【解析】试题分析：考查开放性作文。这篇作文给出了一个关于智能手机的话题，并没有什么提纲。要求考生我围绕智能手机带给你的影响以及你对这种影响的看法来写。这就要考生自由发挥，充实内容，要言之有物，不能干巴巴的几句话，对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。同时在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样

21、你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见短语：used to 过去常常，subscribe to 订阅，句型上更是变化多样：Nowadays, it is not rare to see a man walk on the sidewalks, smartphone in hand, completely absorbed in the digital world.这句话使用了it做形式主语和过去分词做状语， Just as what computers once achieved, smartphones are transf

22、orming our life in every possible wayhow we socialize, entertain, and study.这句话用了宾语从句， I contact friends by phone or QQ. But now I have switched to Wechat, a popular app that allows people to communicate and to share feelings and daily occurrence with friends.这句话使用了定语从句， To stay informed, I constant

23、ly update my Wechat, for which I am often distracted. 这句话使用了不定式做目的状语和非限制性定语从句。考点：考查开放类书面表达5 Lots of students in the colleges and universities pay no attention to the waste of water, electricity and paper, which causes a large amount of energy to be wasted.The waste and overuse of energy has influenc

24、ed ecological balance, which will have a harmful effect on our environment. It is necessary for us students to enhance the awareness of saving energy.Personally, I think we can save much energy in our daily life. First, we can walk or ride bicycles to school. If schools are too far away from our hom

25、es, we can take buses instead of taking private cars or taxis. Second, we should write on both sides of paper. Besides, we can take reusable bags with us when shopping. Fourth, we can save electricity by turning off the lights or other electrical appliances when we sleep or leave the rooms. In addition, we can reuse the water after washing to clean the toilets.In a word, as long as we make efforts, a lot of energy can be saved and the environment can be protected.【解析】 试