【课件】写作润色--如何美化作文课件 2022届高考英语作文专题

1、How to beautify your writing?如何美化作文如何美化作文？ Learning objectives1. To know some methods to beautify your writing2. Learn to use advanced words and vary sentence patterns3. To beautify a composition using various kinds of grammar structures How to beautify（润色）（润色）Your Writing ?1. Apply advanced vocabul

2、ary2. Make use of advanced grammar structure3. Change sentence patterns 普通词汇普通词汇 chance result bear consider understand think believe important enough prepare like be good atI. Employ advanced vocabularyopportunityconsequencehave a better understanding ofput up withadequatesignificantmake preparatio

3、ns be convinced that / ofhold the view thathave a good command ofbe fond of take into considerarion我将不胜感激如果你考虑我的建议I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestionsI would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into considerationII. Make use of advanced grammar structure 强调句名词性从句 状语从

4、句定语从句with复合结构非谓语动词被动句高级句型 8 倒装句We all know the fact nothing is more important than health.thatIm writing this letter to apologize to you for the fact that I cant go with you 同位语从句1.我写信是为了我不能和你一起去的这个事实向你道歉(apologize)1. 名词性从句名词性从句(noun clauses)2. 我是李华，一名来自中国的交换生Im Lihua,an exchange student from Chinai

5、ntroduce sb or sththrough adding additional details you could make the whole sentence more vivid and complete3. 我为什么没有来的原因就是交通堵塞The reason why I didnt come was that I am caught in the traffic jam4我想知道你能否给我提供一些如何交友的建议。_ you can give me some advice on how to make friends.I wonder if/whether玛丽是一个外向的女孩子

6、玛丽是一个外向的女孩子她积极参加各种活动她积极参加各种活动Mary is an outgoing girlShe takes an active part in all kinds of activitiesMary is an outgoing girl, who takes an active part in all kinds of activities2. 定语从句定语从句(Attributive clauses)1.两个简单句的合并 例句：例句： 许多学生沉溺于玩电脑游戏，这使得学生难以集中学习 Many students are addicted to playing comput

7、ers,which makes it hard for students to concentrate on their study2.2. You can watch English movies ,which may expose you to a good learning atmosphere and contribute to your understanding of English.add reasons by using attributive clause1.你可以看英语电影，这将让你置身于好的学习氛围中以及有助于你对英语的理解I think it is a good cha

8、nce to appreciate local operas, (这有助于你学到中国文化）which contributes to your understanding of Chinese culture 结果、程度 sothat ; such that让步 no matter how what when where. =whatever, however, whenever, wherever时间 was doingwhen , as soon as, the moment, the next time, every time3 状语从句状语从句(adverbial clause) 2.他

9、如此吃惊以致于他站在那儿，嘴巴张开I was about to leave when Mary called me2. He was so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open. 1.我即将离开，这时玛丽打电话我1. 1. 我写信申请这个岗位是为了丰富我的经验我写信申请这个岗位是为了丰富我的经验Im writing this letter _2.2.得知你喜欢北京，我可以向你推荐一些名胜古迹得知你喜欢北京，我可以向你推荐一些名胜古迹_ ,I can reccommend some places of interest. (know)

10、3. 我写信是为了邀请你出席即将在会议大厅举办的会议我写信是为了邀请你出席即将在会议大厅举办的会议Im writing to invite you to attend the meeting _ in our school hall (hold)4. _ (feel) a sense of relief, Roy cant wait _ (apologize) to our teacher for his behavior.5. _(step)out of the office, we felt a sense of relief with the sun _ (shine) down ove

11、r us. to enrich my experienceto do 作目的状语作目的状语4.4.非谓语非谓语 (non-finite verb：to do/doing/done)doing 作状语Knowing that you are fond of Beijingto be heldFeelingto apologizeSteppingshiningWith + 宾语+ adj./ adv./ 介词短语/ to do/doing/doneExampleI lie on the grass,with my eyes looking at the sky常用句型with a populati

12、on of.with a long history of years5. ( with 引导的短语或者复合结构引导的短语或者复合结构)1.她转向我，眼睛中充满着恐惧2.她坐下来,眼泪顺着脸颊流下来(roll down)She turned to me, with her eyes full of horror.She sat down, with tears rollling down her cheeks6. 6. 被动语态被动语态(passive voice)In order to welcome the new students, We will hold an evening part

13、y in our school.In order to welcome the new students, an evening party will be held in our school.To make it more objective7. 7. 倒装倒装(inversion)Only by watching English movies We can improve my oral English by watching English movies can we improve my oral English 1.1.只有采用这个办法你才能提高你的阅读速度。只有采用这个办法你才能

14、提高你的阅读速度。 2.2.只有当你意识到环保的重要性时，你才能对垃圾分类有只有当你意识到环保的重要性时，你才能对垃圾分类有更好的理解更好的理解 Only in this way/by doing sth/when you realize sth can youOnly in this way can you increase your reading speed.Only when you are aware of the significance of the environmental protection can you have a better understanding of t

15、he garbage classificationinvert the order of main clause,not the order of the subordinate clause俱乐部不仅能丰富中国传统文化知识，而且俱乐部不仅能丰富中国传统文化知识，而且使得你的学校生活五彩缤纷且有趣使得你的学校生活五彩缤纷且有趣典例：典例：The clubs can not enrich your knowledge of Chinese traditional culture，but also make your school life colorful and interesting.Not

16、 only can the clubs enrich your knowledge of Chinese traditional culture，but also make your school life colorful and interesting. Not only can these activities enrich my experience but also they can build a bridge connecting more students who want to make friends 3.这些活动不仅仅能够丰富我的经验，而且他们还能建造一个桥梁连接想要交朋

17、友的更多学生8.8.强调句强调句(emphatic sentence)The strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the citys people helped the revival of Tangshan city.It was the strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the citys people that helped the revival of Tangshan city.例句： It is nec

18、essary for most students to concentrate on their study句型仿写：1.对我来说参加各种各样的活动是有好处的It is adj./n. (for sb). to do sth.If it is convenient for you,lets meet at the school gate2.如果对你来说方便的话，让我们在学校门口集合 It is beneficial for me to take part in all kinds of activitiesIt is of great benefit (for me) to to take p

19、art in all kinds of activitiesthink/find/feel/consider it adj./n. (for sb). to do sth.1.我发现对我来说与别人友好相处很重要I find it important for me to get along well with others2.首先你最好尽可能多地与本土人交谈，这使得你与其他人流利地沟通成为了可能Firstly, youd better talk with native speakers as much as you can ,which makes it possible for you to

20、communicate with others fluently.12 宾补或主补（宾补或主补（object complement or subject complement）1. 我回家，又累又饿2.我发现这些建议是有建设性的I returned home,exhausted and hungryI find these suggedtions constructive1.I am fond of western culture and it can increase our understanding. I am fond of western culture, which can increase our understanding.III. Change the sentence patterns_ (with复合结构),it is very beautiful. 2.Amy is surrounded by students and she is happy With students surrounding Amy Dear George， Im quite happy to learn that you have great interest in Chinese culture. Im very happy to tell you tha