讲义分析身经百战4x

1、口语身经百战班第四讲，口语Part 2 点素材串讲1，点素材是Part 2 题目clues的整合，相当于把不同题目的clues拆拼后再结合起来。2，对于想要6分以上的同学，只需要把中文故事思路记下来即可。重点在clues本身的逻辑和得分点。3，要7分以上的同学注意地道表达方式和加分点的结合Part 2 cluesDescriptionProcessTenseCategoryExplanation注意会影响身经百战效果的一些问题1，语法硬伤2，发音奇怪雅思口语评分标准的变迁Part 1Part 2Part 3人物题目喜欢坐飞机的人，人物，喜欢共处的人，时尚的人，工作勤奋的人，让你发笑的孩子，好厨

2、师，外语人，对不喜欢的人友好Description小孩子I want to talk about Law, and he is my friends son, and he is a very naughty boy whocouldnt relax himself for just a minute. He is smart, and more energetic than most boys of the same age. And he is a bitty boy with big eyes, dark colored skin and a character of Indiana J

3、ones.Description 同龄人I want to talk about my friend, Law, and He has been my best buddy since high school.He is a promising one who always wear serious business suits and take a briefcaseto everywhee goes. He went to a Harvard-like university, and unlike otherwage slaves, he is a competitive guy with

4、 the ability of acquiring fun and profit atthe same time in his familiar water.Description 老年人I know an old guy called Law, and he used to be a senior chef in a famous restaurantcalled Go Believe. He really knows something about making buns, and his buns are the best ones that Ive ever had. He is re

5、ally somebody who just cant relax and watch his grandchildren around his knees.Description 不喜欢的人It is my university advisor, he is in charge of my scores of subjective in school. And youcan tell this is not something fair from its name. He is so hard to get along with, or to satisfy to be specific,

6、harder than anyone else. He is a bad ass with nasty smell, mean attitude and the perfect magic to kill a conversation.填充物外语人，坐飞机的人（接同龄人）Right now he is an advanced translator, who translate when foreign people speak out.You know that kind of job, but I dont know how to say it in English. He travels

7、a lot due to his job. So whenever I call him, I receive a busy tone. I asked him whether he worries about plane crash, he said he is used to that kind of ideas.填充物人物，（接老年人）I know this guy by a TV program called Road to be Rich, it was a self hel encourage people by telling some stories about success

8、ful people.show. To填充物小公司，好厨师，想学的技能（接老年人）His ancestor used to cook for emperor in Qsing Dynasty. So I guess he must havesome special recipes. After retirement, he runs a small diner sellingOn one side, he is the boss; On the other hand, he has to cook.buns.高频题目决定等待，想学的技能，长距离散步，驱车之旅，噪音困扰，朋友，对健康文章，忘记重

9、要事，朋友方式，工作人，借有用的东西，想去，见工作的惊喜，付钱工作，喜欢的阶段，起早经历，翘课一天，付钱噪音困扰，朋友It happened about four months ago when my roommate fell in love with rock music.He is awho sings out of tunes all the time. But this didnt bother him, andhis new hobby really did interfere my sleep. After telling him how I felt about hismusi

10、c talent, he looked at me angrily as if I had stolen his dream. He slammed the door and left. I felt sad about this, but at least I could sleep.朋友方式，见的惊喜I wanted to make a change when he didnt talk to me for three days. So I decided totalk things out. After sending him a 300 words wechat text, he st

11、arted to understand. And he came to me and apologized first, which I didnt expect. It wasquite a surprise. So wea deal, he sings music in the afternoon, duringevening time, he respects my rest time, this deal works fine by which we are allcool now.翘课一天，借的有用的东西，驱车之旅，I hate the communist philosophy cl

12、ass, but it is a compulsory course. So I decided toskip the class and had myself a day off. There is an old quiet village 30 km away from school. So I borrowed a car from my schoolmate and gave it a ride, the car was a bit of old, so it was not a comfortable journey. After a 40 minutes ride, I arriv

13、ed at this small village. The village has been abandoned since 1960, it used to be a dairy farm. There were a lot of soviet symbols in the village, with which I had an illusion that I was back to old days.忘记重要事，决定等待I registered the IELTS test about 3 months ago, but not this one. It supposed to be i

14、nlast month. But my ID card was expired. But I forgot to check it! Only until an examiner told me I couldnt get in, did I realize this. After spending about 40 minutes negotiating with an mid-aged poker face lady, I was refused to take the test. So I guess I had to wait. And thats my final call.文章,

15、想学习的技能对健康Ian article from a very oldmedicine book 3 weeks ago, and it wasmainly about acupuncture and Yinyang. I was deeply immerged in it since Iitfor 3 minutes.medicine is not like the modern medicine, it has so manyuntold wisdoms in it. If onehas more Yang elements than Yins, he will feelhungry a

16、nd thirsty all the time, but he never grows fat. And if onehasmore Yin elements than Yangs, he will be less interested in drinking and eating,but he never be thin. It is so amazing that I want to learn more in the future.喜欢阶段，付钱工作I joined Laws small diner as a part-time purchasing guy when I was on

17、school breaks. Iwas paid like 20 RMB per hour, which was not bad for alike me. Duringthat time, I raised at 4 am and went to food distribution center to buy meat, fishand vegetables. After buying all the things we need, I usually took a hitchhiking to the diner and waited for Law to open his diner.

18、It was a little bit tired though, but the job was a lot of fun, during which I improved my bargain skills.工作人I didnt know when my friend Law became a nurse, but I am pretty sure she was agood one. After seeing her dress bandage, draw blood, and answer endless worried questions with patience, I under

19、stood she truly loved her job. It is always good for patients to have a young and pretty one around, by which they could reduce their pressure and pain.长距离散步，I go to that place once a week, it is like myal retreat. The surroundings arenothing but trees and birds, and thats why I usually spend a hour

20、 or two to take awalk there. I have always been taken with these simple pleasures by seeing trees waving and hearing birds singing. This every-week walk makes me think a lot about myself, should I seek success or seek simplicity? Should I be well-off or be full of joy?通感填充物His sis like a sunflower s

21、eed, that will let the flower grow and blossom in yourheart.The whispers of trees is softer than a lullaby.People draw in like cold hands to a fire.After that, your muscle will be as tight as piano wire.Son of a gun低频题别人建议，作为团队一员的经历，不喜欢但现在喜欢的科目，发笑的孩子，别人没说实话，对不喜欢的人友好, 室内活动科目，别人建议I didnt do well in ch

22、emistry until my mom hired me a college boy to help me out. Hewas like a scientific maniac, but he was really good at chemistry. After teaching me a few strategies and techniques about chemistry, my score started to take off. It is magical! All his advices worked just fine with which chemistry was n

23、o longer asoul-crushing subject.别人没说实话，不喜欢但不得不友人Once， my teacher told me to translate a short article for him, because he knew I waspreparing the IELTS test. So I agreed. And when he sent me, I was shocked. It waslike about 40 thousandcharacters, it was not short at all! So I spent abouta week and a

24、 half to translate for him. And you know, what else I could do? Ididnt have a choice!室内活动I started to know war game when I began relationship with my ex boyfriend. He was aseasoned buff. After doing it myself for a couple of times, I started to like this activity. It was so exciting that I would spe

25、ak in tongues after a few rounds. And right now I play it very week to see how deep the rabbit hole goes.发笑的孩子It happened a couple of months ago, we family weaving a reunion dinner. Adultswere drinking liquor. After finding it interesting, my 3 years old cousin would liketo give it a try, so he dran

26、k up a cup of liquor all by himself. After 5 minutes, he said his head was like a watermelon, by which we all laughed out loud!团队一员, 喜欢的阶段So I began to learnmedicine and acupuncture in an interest class. This helpedme to eliminate my physical and psychological baggage. After being together with30 ot

27、her people, we felt happy about ourselves and we stopped fussing with money and profit stuff. Weve all separated the wheat from the chaff, and we have acquired the true meanings of life.旅行This place was such a special place, not only for its own style, but also for thesurroundings. After walking out

28、 the front gate of the building, you could see a lake in front of it and a wooden bridge. The building itself sits on a hillside, and you could enjoy all the beautiful coffee and desserts while you watch people and cars going around under the hill地点题目读写之地，休闲之地，餐厅咖啡店，想去外国，想住的房子I want to talk about an

29、 Italian restaurant, and the topic reminds me of this place. Thisbuilding is on the halfway up the hilltop near the sea, the pasta there is enormous and more bizarre than other relevant restaurants. It is a classy and exquisite place with painted glass windows, warm wallpaper and traditional Italian

30、 cloth patterns.想住的房子I want to talk about a newly built villa in my hoomtown, and the topic reminds me ofthis place. This building is on the halfway up the hilltop near the sea, the pasta there is enormous and more bizarre than other relevant restaurants. It is a classy and exquisite place with pain

31、ted glass windows, warm wallpaper and traditional Italian cloth patterns.想去I want to go to Italy some time in the future, but this dream hasnt come true yet. It issaid Italy has the most beautiful beaches in the whole Europe. And it is a rom country with special cuisine, fashion icons and lovely vie

32、w.补充process想去Italy has always been my favourite for multiple reasons. I am a soccer fan and Italy hasthe most handsome football team in the whole world, and it has Milan fashion week, which leads the worlds trends. After watching my favourite movie The God Father, I decided to go there after I pass

33、the IELTS test, which may gonna take me a while to cope with it.物品类题型选很久的，想买的，想买的特殊的东西，家中老画DeI swcarnitpttoitoanlkcollar, and it is more unique thanother dog necklace youve ever seen. It helps dog to get rid ofthe bad habit of barking all over. There is a sensor underneath the collar, if a dog barks

34、 loudly, it release electricity to stun the dog. The problem is, I dont have a dog, but I have an annoying sister. And she gonna need this.D eIswcarnipt ttiootnal车k aboutVolkswagen Polo, and I want tobuy this in the future. It is said it is one of the mostpopular cars in western countries. And the P

35、olo has a better reputation than other family cars. It is a fancy car with spacious cabin, streamline appearance and a superior engine.D eIswcrainpttitoontbout Zwilling cooking pack, andI bought one and gave to Mr. Song. And hehelped me a lot. And this gift took longer time than I thought it could.

36、And this was a really special gift with gratitude and happy memories.D eIshcarvipetaiopni画cture in my home and it is said thatit was from one famous artists in TsingDynasty.Unlike other collections, it is theoldest and the pictuas been yellowed bytime. And it is about 2 meters long and 60 cmswide物品补

37、充ProcessI first saw this product three months ago, and it was a pop-up ad on the Internet.Aftering some comments of the products, I started to realize that this was agood one. So at that time, I put this on my wish list, and in which Ive got myself alot of things to cess 补充 家中老画This picture c

38、aur house about 120 years ago. My grandpas father wasa arms dealer, he sold guns and cannons to different sides in the first civilwar. So one day a guy came to buy guns, but he didnt havemoney nor golden nuggets. So he left the picture and told my grandpasfather that one day he would come back to sw

39、itch the picture with gold. But this man had never showed up. So it is how we got the picture. We used to find someone to value the picture. And much to our surprises, it is worth about 10 million RMB right now!娱乐媒介题目让你印象深刻的歌，想再看的，教育节目一首歌I want to tell you about a song, which I heard through the rad

40、io. The name is calledWill you still love me tomorrow. And this song is much more meaningful for me cuz it reminds me a time that I was in love with someone that I care.一首歌，喜欢的阶段I fell in love with a girl when I was in high school. As others who were inrelationship, we ate together, study together a

41、nd walked along the playgroundevery evening. And that song was our favourite, we kept this song in our mp3 and listened it again and again and again. But we didnt end up good. After failing to attend the university that she went, her father didnt allow me to see her again and forced to change her mo

42、bile, even their apartment. So you could see this song is quite important to me which it reminds me of good old memories.想再看的I want to talk about a movie, and its name is called If You Love Me, it is an affectionalmovie tells a story about a school couple. It is more touching than other relevant mov

43、ies, its like the first sunlight after rain that makes people warm. And it is a brilliant movie with wonderful plot, fantastic performance and a classic theme song.情节In the movie, a boy fell in love with a girl when he was in high school. As others who were in relationship, they ate together, study

44、together and walked along the playground every evening. They almost did everything together. But after failing to attend the university that she went, her father didnt allow the boy to see her again and forced to change her mobile, even their apartment. And the boy began to write letters for the gir

45、l to tell how much he loved her, and put them in a box. After all, they met in schoolyard a few years later and be together again.教育节目I want to talk about a special tv program, the special thing is, it teaches people how tolove others, strange isnt it. This program has taught me a lot of about the m

46、ost important things in life.教育节目processThis program is on about once a week. It gives a guide to people who are fogged up bycommon value and helps them to find their own path. After watching it only once, I found this program groundbreaking, people dont feel happy by being well-off,and people are l

47、ookedy to kill somebody these days. And this program isquite a blow to me, by which I realized I was sleepwalking.tense 时态过去-是最常见的将来-想买现在-几乎没有，家乡改变tense-过去It was at my last summer vacation, my parents had planned a trip to Thailand, but Ididnt com along. So I had an empty holiday of my own.tense-将来 想买Well, I think I am going to buy it sometime later, because my dad wouldnt be glad topay me this. Maybe after a c