英语六级写作替换用词训练

1、六级写作讲义(VIP)一, 简单的自我介绍, 学生状况的了解二, 开始总论 ( 介绍学习方法 )三, 进入写作的总论评分标准iDj英语作文网四、六级作文在准备和对策上基本一致，因为两者评分标准基本一致(除了字数上的差距：四级120词、六级150词)。英语考试的作文大多可分为：1、正反论证；2、原因现象描述类；3、图表；4、名言谚语。所谓的书信作文，无非就是在这四类的基础上，套用信件的格式而已。 评分标准的解释: 这些考区的考官将会在电脑前批阅作文，因此考生们最好使用黑色水笔做答，以保证扫描效果。写作考试就好像一次“博弈”。在写作考试中，考生是真正拥有最多信息的人，考官仅仅只能被动地接受你所给的

2、信息。所以，作文中遣词造句时请切记两点：一、“不会说的”处理；二、经典句的应用. 作文只在考核他们的语言表达能力。避免犯错误。总体评分1. 找：idea2. 扫：从，写作方法（例，数）3. 感：文字，文法，文体，文笔2分作文Whats happened to your pants? 形散神更散 不成句，不分大小写5分作文 表达方式错误 详见：最经典的中国英语8分作文 表达方式贫乏三大法宝1) there be 2) more and more 3) I think（Some people think Other people think I think）11分作文 表达方式：因为because

3、, in that, for the reason that, because of the fact that, on the basis that, on account of/that, inasmuch as “一些人认为”的基本原理14分作文 言之无文，行而不远写作的格式有两种：齐头式(full block form)和缩进式(indented form)。采用齐头式，要求所有段落的首行都在左边顶格，段落中间空行。缩进式要求每段首行缩进45个字母。iDj英语作文网第二、 构思简单，少犯错误。 请大家一定记住，（思维。标点，时态一致，单复数，结构。6分原则。写完后的检查） iDj英语作

4、文网行文大多可以套用“中心句1、2、3”模式。即每段第一句是topic sentence，改编自该段相对应的提纲，后面的1、2、3是衔接词，每个1、2、3后接分支观点。这种表达，中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考生构思结构的麻烦。衔接词是文章逻辑关系的体现，所以不妨尽可能多的使用。比如，“起”的过渡词：nowadays, at present, first of all, firstly；“承”的过渡词：second, besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words；“转”的过渡词：however,

5、on the other hand, but, instead, conversely；“合”的过渡词：therefore, so, as a result, in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion。十大闪光点（求求大家）1. 提问法2. 总结法3. “一些人认为”4. 从句：宾语从句、定语从句5. 并列句6. 理由词汇7. 理由段公式8. 路线句型9. 数据的表达10. 结语书信的训练信件类型：订购信、退货信、投诉信、建议信、道歉信、感谢信、邀请信、咨询信、安排信、通知信、倡议信、求职信和辞职信十三种。 主考类型：求职信、投诉信、订购信、咨询

6、信、倡议信、建议信和邀请信七种。 未考类型：求职信、投诉信、订购信和咨询信四种。 特殊要求主要体现在以下两个方面：一是要求信息点覆盖全面。至少应当包含：时间、地点、人物、主要事件（或观点）等。二是突出了语言的准确性、格式和语域。五大信函写作策略： 1. 求职信 开头段：表明信息来源，说明写作意图（时间、地点）。主体段：介绍自己相关的工作经历、学习经历，以此证明你能胜任这个职位（人物）。 次要段：表明自己申请这个职位的理由（事情）。结尾段：等待回音，联系方式。2. 投诉信 开头段： 说明与收信人的相关性，点明你写作的意图（人物、关系）。主体段： 写明投诉的原因，要展开说明，或者讲具体理由，或者谈

7、问题的具体体现方式（事情）。结束段：表达你希望上述问题得到尽快解决的强烈愿望，并对有关人员做出的努力表示感谢（时间、地点）。 3. 订购信 开头段： 开篇点出写信的目的，定购你要的东西（事情）。 主体段： 详细说明你订购货物的规格、大小、颜色、尺寸等（时间、地点）。 结束段：表示对方回函以便确认（人物）。4. 咨询信开头段： 明确写信的目的，说明写这封信的目的是寻求某信息或帮助（事情）。主体段：询问具体问题，强调所需信息的重要性（时间、地点）。结束段：表达获取信息的强烈愿望，提供联系方式以便收信人与你联系，并对有关人员表示感谢（人物）。批文 2002年1月 Range-finderA Lett

8、er to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President, 1. As（逻辑问题） one of your university students, I am not very satisfied with our canteen service. This letter is from one of your university students. I am not very satisfied with our canteen servic

9、e. 或者使用定语从句：This letter is from one of your university students, who is not very satisfied with the canteen service.1. The first reason is that there are many students coming from other places.（逻辑问题）My first suggestion for the canteen is that it ought to offer dishes of various kinds to students com

10、ing from all parts of the nation.2. They may *be not not be accustomed to the local food at the beginning of *the term their university life. 3. So our canteen should provide much more kinds of *food foods (fish, sheep, water, oil, beer, people) for them to choose from.1. Secondly, the price of the

11、food is higher than we can afford（绝对化）.2. I hope the price of some food can be *decreased lowered a little.3. Then we can have a larger choice than before（至今唯一没有问题的一句话）.1. In addition to *above suggestions the suggestions above, I want to reflect that many students will have lunch after classes（没有具体

12、时间段）have lunch during lunch time (coffee time).2. At that time, the canteen will become too crowded （第二句没有问题的话）.3. So we hope that you can arrange some more seats for students（逻辑问题）. 1. *There These are my suggestions *of (my own) for / on our canteen service.2. I really hope you can take some measu

13、res to make the canteen service better and better （经典的more and more结构）to better our canteen service.3. Thank you very much. （第三句没有问题的话）书信的格式Dear Sir / Madam, To Whom It May Concern Mr what-is-his-name Yours faithfullyDear Mr. / Ms / Mrs. / Miss（全名/名）, . Yours sincerely / trulyDear Tom, (With) Best w

14、ishes, Yours Tommy, Yours (ever) Hai, Love2002年1月 Range-finderA Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus.January 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President, 1. Im very lucky to attend read for Ph.D. / MA / BA / BSc at / pursue higher education at this world-famous world-renowned univ

15、ersity, but Im afraid Im not content at least 2/3 of the students would not be fully satisfied with the canteen service on campus.1. 小跑Firstly, the quality of the dishes should be improved. 修改稿：Firstly, we could not enjoy dishes of various kinds / suiting different tastes.2. *Undou(b)tedly, there ar

16、e a lot of delicious 质量好dishes, but all the year, they are the same. 修改稿：Although there are a lot of delicious dishes, yet we could not see big/substantial change in the menu around the year.3. More and more students are complaining about eating the same food each day.4. 小结So I think the most urgent

17、 problem is variety. 修改稿：The canteen, therefore, ought to offer an even greater variety of foods.1. Secondly, the price is *a bit too中式表达方式 high. 修改稿：Secondly, we ought to have the right to enjoy dishes suiting different pockets as well.2. Many of us hope that the canteen can provide us with not onl

18、y delicious but also *cheaper inexpensive food.1. Finally, the environment is so noisy that we cant enjoy our meals in good mood.2. I suggest that there be some soft music to help us relax.1. *Those These *presented suggestions suggestions presented are not just of my own, but also of many other stu

19、dents.2. We hope our *respectable respected president will pay attention to our suggestions.1. *By the way, the canteen workers are very patient and always smiling.2. So I think if our university offers them better conditions, they will offer us better service.Best wishes,求职信（139）Dear Sir or Madame,

20、I am writing to apply for the position / post / title of part time part-time English teacher you advertised in the newspaper yesterday （时间）. Enclosed with this letter is my personal resume curriculum vitae, which will give you further information about me.I am 24 years old （有简历）and I am a quite extr

21、overt （性格）person. I studied English Literature in at Nankai University from 1996 to 2000 and got a degree of bachelor Bachelor. After graduation, I worked in at a high school Anshan Middle School as a an English teacher. There were good comments from my students leaders / supervisors during my teach

22、ing. From For all the above reasons reasons above, I feel sure that I am the right person that you are looking for.Thank you for your consideration of my application letter (/). I am looking forward (to) a an interview at your earliest convenience. I could be contacted at the number 23131245 from 6

23、pm to 10 pm（时间段）. Yours Sincerely,Jason Lee求职信（317）Dear Consul,I am writing to apply for the post of visa clerk at American Consulate General upon my boyfriend (and your interpreter) Peters advise after serious consideration.Confidently speaking, I am well prepared for the demanding and challenging

24、work in your consulate. During my past 1.5-year service at UA (United Airlines), I adopted myself perfectly to the bilingual working environment and was therefore promoted to the position of CSO (Client Service Officer) prior to annual appraisal, which shall have been substantially justified on the

25、ground of my ability to manage a workload within set timeframe under minimum supervision, sound capability as an interpreter and translator, familiarity with visa application assessment (some of our clients need to apply for transit visa), high standards of client service, and capacity to play as a

26、team member. My initiative and enthusiasm have been highly appreciated by my colleagues and supervisors in and out of my section.Compared with the working conditions in our office, however, yours are more attractive to ambitious applicants including me to a greater extend. Firstly, your office kindl

27、y offers opportunities of self-development, which shall be beneficial to my study of advanced interpretation course and further training of communicative skills. Secondly, your office applies flextime system, which undoubtedly demonstrates the mutual understanding between managerial staff and your l

28、ocally engaged staff. Thirdly, your office enjoys better reputation of openness and integrity, whose clients enjoy the first and foremost place. Fourthly, you provide better package and welfare system. Last but not the least, my friend and former colleagues have successfully verified the correctness

29、 of my assumptions above.I would like to express my very willingness and eagerness to exert my utmost to the development of your consulate. Your kind consideration of my application shall present me the golden chance to prove myself an asset to you. I will be very much honored to receive your timely

30、 reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you.Yours Sincerely,Julia留学（157）Dear Emma,Sorry I havent written for ages. Ive been so busy over the last year and I never seem to have a minute to myself.Id like to study electrical engineering at university in Australia next year and I hope you can give m

31、e some advice. I think I would prefer Melbourne because I know a few people from my visit last year.This year Im doing math and physics at school and I hope to do well in my exams. However, I really dont know which university to apply to, so could you send me some information about different college

32、s? Also can you find out what qualifications I need? For instance, as an overseas student, do I have to take an English test?I hope you dont mind doing this for me. It is much better to get this information from someone who lives in the country, so I hope to hear from you soon.Many thanks!Yours,Tom道

33、别(235)Dear All,As you are now aware I am moving to the British Immigration Office. I am not having a farewell bash, but I would like to say see ya round nonetheless. I had been planning to say something truly inspirational, something that you would endlessly ponder, something that you would discuss

34、at great intellectual length amongst yourselves, something that would remain with you for the rest of your lives and perhaps tell your children and grandchildren. However, greatness seems to have escaped me. So, instead, what I will say is this; what makes the difference between a job and a good job

35、 is not only the work you do, but just as importantly, who youre doing it with (so to speak). I consider myself extremely lucky to have been doing it with people who are me mates (read my friends for those not colloquially inducted). I have enjoyed our time doing it together and although, geographic

36、ally, I am making a vertical movement of only five or six meters, my friendships and experiences in this office are unique and have their own place in my heart.Thanks to you Bernie for your guidance during this time of personal transition. I have been watching and learning. Thanks to Jack and the bu

37、siness staff for your patients with my incessant requests for pronunciation and the ease with which you have made working in the new section.Thank you everyone.Peter回顾到应用文模版1. 问候型Long time no see.2. I havent written to you for ages because Ive been so busy over the last year and I never seem to have

38、 a minute to myself.3. Long distance separates no bosom friends.4. Though we have never seen each other, yet I have long heard of you.5. How nice it was to hear from you at last!6. 告知型You will be very glad to hear that7. With great delight I learned that8. To tell a piece of good news, I have/am doi

39、ng9. I am writing this letter to tell/inform you that10. I have just received your kind letter regarding第三段1. 客套型Thanks for your precious time.2. Thanks again for your kind help / assistance.3. Thank you in advance.4. 展望型I am looking forward to seeing/meeting you here in Shanghai China.5. 寄语型Your ti

40、mely reply to this letter is highly appreciated by all the people concerned.6. I would appreciate it if you contact me as soon as possible.7. I am looking forward to your reply / hearing from you soon.8. Write to me a.s.a.p.9. Remember: I shall always my fingers crossed for you at any rate.10. Shall

41、 you come across any problem, please do not hesitate to let me know.11. Please let me know if I can help you any further.12. I hope this information will help you.13. Please feel free to contact me for more information / further confirmation.14. I trust these suggestions will be of use to you. 对立观点回

42、复到议论文模版例文12000年6月 Range-finder(149)A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET).1.1开篇提问Is it necessary? 总结并另启一段 修改稿What is your opinion?To which extent do you agree or disagree with 1. 简单句this idea / notion / concept / suggestion / proposal2. 复

43、杂句it when, as someone put it, the test of written English has already （使负担）posed / placed / put a heavy burden / workload on students / examinees / candidates?1.2语法错误 +一方面On the one hand / On the one side of the coin / For one thing Many people（一些人）, the majority十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”Some无数的numerous/myriad

44、(a myriad of)大量的A great / large / huge / (in)considerable / significant / noticeable number / amount / quantity / portion of对半的almost / nearly / some / close to / approximately half of大多的the (vast / overwhelming) majority of一些/另一些（抽象意义）：some others, majority minoritythink(s)（认为） so because spoken En

45、glish is widely （普遍/经常）generally / universally / constantly / frequently used employed in *(the) everyday life.1.3 反问 （强调句型：助，倒，反）If a person language learner who is only / merely good at written English cant （文体不正式：省文/略，口语词汇，只字片语）cannot speak it, 反问how can he communicate with others?2.1 赘言，逻辑错误 +另一

46、方面On the other hand / On the other side of the coin / For another, Some people the minority（对应关系工整） 十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”people公众the public各行各业people from all walks of life / the circle/community/walk of education学生examinees / testees / students特殊人群readers / drivers 支持/反对者followers objectors, dissenters co

47、nsenters参与者participants / candidates / interviewees think(s) claims spoken English is less important than not as essential as written English because in that / in light of the fact that / based on the observation that / inasmuch as *they *think 逻辑错误most science books are written in English2.2 One ca

48、nnot understand comprehend / appreciate the content if he can only speak English.2.3 And 强递进词开头furthermore, the test of spoken English The oral test of English, furthermore / moreover, is not so fair as it seems.2.4 A teacher can give the candidates / examinees scores according to his own like 之流 (

49、产生好感take a liking for / to sb. /爱好have a liking for = be / feel attached to / be additive to)3.1 非正式文体开头Anyway (1)Nevertheless, I think my humble / personal / *stupid (Forest Gump stupid be on the slow side, expect a baby, pregnant, be in the family way)opinion (2)however is that / the writer (3)how

50、ever is with the view opinion that it is necessary.3.2 语法错误 A test of spoken English can encourage stimulate / motivate / urge us to spend more time speaking English pay more attention to / attach greater importance to the practice of spoken English in the spare time.1.3 语法错误 It *(is) also *contribu

51、te(s) to our written English learning.1.4 I will try my best make/exert an effort to / 加倍努力redouble ones efforts to *study learn spoken English *(hard) and practice it as often as human possible.Human强调1.5 *I think牵强附会where there is a will there is a way.*Some *people *think we should read selective

52、ly. 十大闪光点之三“一些人认为”think认为assume / argue / hold (the opinion) / claim / suggest / declare / say / assert / state / believe / insist/ maintain / doubt / suspect that支持give / express / show / demonstrate ones support for赞成/反对vote / ballot for/againstcast ones vote / ballot for / againstside with / stan

53、d on the side of接受take the advise / follow the suggestion / accept the opinion / idea that意见是ones viewpoint is that / be with the view that2.2 They argue that 经典垃圾句型with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published.2.3 It is impossible for us to read all the bo

54、oks. 炼句：将2、3组合在一起They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published , which makes it impossible for us to read them all.2.4 Whats more To make the matter worse, (there are many) bad books (that) are poisonous harmful / dangerous / hazardous / nox

55、ious to our mind, and we shouldnt read them.2.5 Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively. （必须/一定）have to (must) = be obliged to = be bound to1.1 But others may not agree.3.2 They emphasize stress, point out , put / lay emphasis on , give emphasis to t

56、hat todays society is not what it was. 炼句：Others, however, do not agree by emphasizing that todays society is not what it was3.3 双”if”引导正反论述If one man has many kinds a wide range of knowledge hell have more chances to succeed.3.4 If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing little in other fie

57、lds others, he may be useless of no great use.3.5 Since we must have many kinds of knowledge keep up with the trend of the society, we must read extensively. 4.1 Whos right?4.2 I think both of them have something right.4.3 But I think we should read extensively first. 单刀式：Weighing / Balancing the pr

58、os and cons of the argument, I am inclined to stand on the side that 4.4 We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field. 十大闪光点之二总结法1. 玫瑰All roses have thorns.2. 花园No garden is without weeds.3. 金币Every coin has 2 sides.4. 利剑Every sword has 2 edges.5. 利弊Every advantage has its

59、disadvantages.6. 众口Its hard to please all.7. 仁智 So many people, so many minds.8. 伟人Great minds think alike.9. 毒肉One mans meat is another mans poison.10. 过及Throw the baby out with the bath water.详见：谚语参考书 回复到谚语 单一观点恢复到议论文模版2003年1月 Range-finderIt Pays to Be Honest1.1 开门见山Nowadays, 经典句型Todays world is n

60、ot what it was.many people in increasing number / a growing number of people / an increasing number of / the number of people who is on the rise choose not to be honest in our modern society. 十大闪光点之四从句（主语，宾语，表语，定语，状语，同位语） 宾语从句引出观点 定语从句引出人事物 修改稿As is known to all, dishonesty, unfortunately, is no lon