how to describe a city（主课件）

1、Writing: How to describe a city授课教师：梁 玉 衡单位：茂名市祥和中学How many paragraphs? Hello, ladies and gentlemen .Welcometothe wonderful cityShenzhen.Imyourtourguide, Mike. Letmetellyouour two days travelplan. This morning,welltaketheundergroundtoa large modern theme park HappyValley. It is located in Nanshan Di

2、strict of the city. In the park, there are nearly one hundred exciting games and some excellent performances. Im sure youll have a good time there.Afterlunch, wellgo toSplendidChina on foot. SplendidChina is famous for mini historic buildings and natural landscapesinChina.Tomorrowmorning, wellgotoYa

3、ntian Port. Itisoneofthe busiestportsin theworld. In the afternoon, welltake a bus toDongmen andyoucandosomeshoppingand taste delicious local food there. Ihopeyoulllike our plan.HaveagoodtimeinShenzhen. Thankyou.BeginningBodyEnding1Beginning: ntroductionreetingsHelloWelcometoIm LetmetellGI Hello, la

4、dies and gentlemen .Welcometothe wonderful city-Shenzhen.Imyourtourguide, Mike. Letmetellyou our two-day travel plan.Lets write the outline of the beginning.2 This morning,welltakeanundergroundtoa large modern theme park HappyValley. It is located in Nanshan District of the city. In the park, there

5、are nearly one hundred exciting games and some excellent performances. Im sure youll have a good time there.Afterlunch, well go toSplendidChina on foot. SplendidChina is famous for mini historic buildings and natural landscapesinChina.Tomorrowmorning, wellgo toYantian Port. Itisone of the busiestPor

6、ts in theworld. In the afternoon, welltake a bus toDongmen andyoucandosome shopping and taste delicious local food there.Body:a two-day travel planlaces of interestocationctivitiesWhat to seeWhat to doransportationIt is located 介词Sb take a/an 交通工具 toSb go toon foot/by 交通工具There is/areYou can see/tas

7、te/doIts famous forIt is a/an adj+n. It is one of the 形容词最高级+名复. PLTALets write the outline of the body.3 Ihopeyoulllike our plan.HaveagoodtimeinShenzhen. Thankyou.Ending:Best wishes.Lets write the outline of the ending.4The number of paragraphsThe tenses of the composition The main idea and the typ

8、e of the compositionThe personal pronouns of the composition体裁时态人称expository writingan introduction about travel plan;说明文threethe Present Tensethe Simple Future Tense thefirstpersonthe second person the third personLets fill in the blanks.52005年深圳中考书面表达： 假如你是深圳的一名导游,刚接了一个从英国来深圳的旅游团。请你先简单地自我介绍，然后以口头通

9、知的方式向游客介绍两天的行程，需要对所要参观的景点作简单的介绍。通知的开头已给出。(要求:必须写在答题卷上，字数6080,不包括已给的句子。)以下景点仅供参考:HappyValleySplendidChina(minilandscape微缩景观) WindowtotheWorldDameishaDongmenYantianPort(盐田港) 书面表达审列扩连书面表达 步法改5一、审题注意“四定”1.定时态: 记叙文、日记一般用一般过去时；说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用一般现在时；计划等用一般将来时。2.定人称： 用第一人和第二人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。3.定框架：根据作文题目内容定段落。

10、4.定内容 ：根据题目的要点定写作内容。John 2.介绍这个城市的亮点，如景点、美食或风俗等。 3.对约翰此次旅行提出一些建议。邮件的内容包括： 1.推荐一个广东省的城市，并简要介绍这个城市的概况。 现在请帮助Elaine老师给她的好朋友约翰发一封电子邮件告知他相关的情况。内容包括： 1.推荐一个广东省的城市，并简要介绍这个城市的概况。 2.至少介绍这个城市的亮点，如景点、美食或风俗等。 3.对约翰此次旅行提出一些建议。The number of paragraphsThe Tenses of the composition The type and the main ideaof the

11、compositionThe personal pronouns of the compositionthreethe Present Tensethe Simple Future Tense thefirst，second and third personan E-mail ; description of a city in Guangdong and some advice for the tripFill in the blanks.6 根据要点列提纲，列提纲的时候应以动宾短语或者系表短语的形式罗列。 将提纲里的动宾短语或系表短语加上主语、修饰词(形容词、副词等)时间或地点状语等扩展成

12、完整的句子。 定时态、定人称、定框架和定内容。 把两个简单句合为句意连贯的复合句。在句 与句之间补充适当的连词、过渡句，使之时间 、空间、 细节有逻辑、连贯呼应。审题四定列提纲扩展成句连句成文查错改错主要检查人称代词的主格和宾格形式、动词的时态形式、名词的复数形式、固定搭配、单词拼写、标点符号、大小写和格式的书写。Beginning:Ending:Main body:Outlinepopulation:location:area:lie in; be located incover an area of; its area ishave a population of; with a popu

13、lation ofthere beplaces of interestlocal foodcustomadvice for trip luggagetransportationhotelsafety 茂名：位于广东省西南部，超过7,900,000万人，11,427 平方千米 lie in the southwest of Guangdong Province be located in the southwest of Guangdong Provincelocation:have a population of over 7.9 million cover an area of 11427

14、square kilometerspopulation:area:=with a population of over 7.9 million =There are over 7.9 million people.=Its area is 11427 square kilometersComplete the outline.7Beginning:Outlinepopulation:location:area:lie in; be located incover an area of; its area ishave a population of; with a population oft

15、here behotelsafety 茂名：位于广东省西南部，7,900,000人，11,427 平方千米 lie in the southwest of Guangdong province be located in the southwest of Guangdong provincelocation:have a population of over 7.9millioncover an area of 11,427 square kilometerspopulation:area:Maoming liesMaoming isIt has=Its population is over7

16、.9million.=There are over 7.9million people.=Its area is 11,427 square kilometersIt covers Write sentences.8It lies in the southwest of Guangdong province. It covers an area of 11427 square kilometers. 只要我们在连句成文的过程中善于扩充、适度添加单词、短语或从句，句子就会更有表现力，句意也将更加连贯。Maoming is a beautiful city.It has a population of over7.9 million.Maoming is a beautiful city with a population of over 7