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1、Make Your Compositions More BeautifulMake Your Compositions More Beautiful 1. words2. useful expressions3. linking words4. sentence structures5. passage organization一. 运用高级词汇1.这件事情挺难的。2. 我们就会了解父母的辛苦工作。Well then know about parents hardship.3. 这有助于我们学会节俭。This helps us learn to be thrifty.This is a cha

2、llenging job.高级词汇举例:significanthardshipavailablecontactdemandingrelativelywastefulfrequent二.增加形容词或副词1.在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。2. 如果父母的收入较好,There lies a lovely pond in our beautiful campus.If their parents have a relatively high income,. 表示程度的副词举例hardlyseldomrarelymerelyrelativelyslightlya bitpartlycompletely三

3、. 置于句首的副词1. 这极有可能使孩子养成依赖父母的习惯。2. 尤其当父母有足够的钱养家时，。Probably this will make the children develop the habit of living on parents.Especially when their parents have enoughmoney to support the family,. 句首副词举例strangelyfrequentlyespeciallyunbelievablyunexpectedlysurprisinglybesides四. 各类句型1.插入语然而, 其他同学持有不同意见。

4、 The other students, however, hold the different views.另外，他们会以为将来可以依赖父母。Besides, theyll think they can rely on their parents in the future.2. It 句型我们期望今年有个好收成。It is expected that there will be a good harvest.30%学生认为无必要让孩子知道父母的收入。30% of the students think it unnecessary to let children know how much

5、their parents earn.3. with 结构作业做完了，那个男孩出去玩了。With the homework finished, the boy went out to play.有了父母可依赖，他们就不再努力学习了。Theyll not study hard any more, with parents to depend on.4.分词短语30%同学不赞同这一看法， 认为孩子不应当。30% of my classmates disagree to it, saying children shouldnt.知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。Knowing this, theyl

6、l study harder and harder.5.从句他所做的一切使我们很失望。（主语从句）What he did disappointed us all. 我们应当知道父母的收入，因为这有助于我们理解他们的艰辛。（状语从句）We should know parents income,because itll help us understand how hard they have to work.五. 连接成分表示时间:first of all; to begin with; and then; finally; eventually-表示递进:whats more; moreove

7、r; furthermore; in addition; to make things worse; the most important of all; 表示并列:and; but; or; so表示转折:however; on the contrary; nevertheless; anyway; anyhow; in spite of; despite 表示因果:as a result; result in; thus; owing to; due to; as a consequence; therefore表示结论:in short; in brief; in a word; abo

8、ve all; on the whole Joe, who is a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem. Joe, a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem. Joe is a lawyer in town. Joe persuaded them to settle the problem. 六. 综合运用I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. I found four chairs there

9、. They were in good shape. They were at a reasonable price.I followed your advice and went to the supermarket, where I found four reasonably-priced chairs which were in good shape.Following your advice, I went to the supermarket where I found four reasonably- priced chairs in good shape.05年浙江卷书面表达:你

10、的英国朋友正在做一个课题: 世界各地的生日庆祝方式。 请你根据以下要点写一短文： 一. 通常方式: 1.生日聚会 2.生日礼物 3.生日祝福二. 我认为有意义的庆祝方式和理由。词数 100-120。 Chinese students celebrate their birthday in various ways. The most common way, however, is just to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On t

11、he birthday, one usually receive nice gifts as well as pure-hearted wishes. Besides, parents will prepare a special dinner or cake to show their deepest love for their children. Since birthday celebrations is one of the most important activities in ones life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For in