雅思大作文写作ppt课件(PPT 93页)

1、IELTS WritingSunny Gao1第1页，共93页。Chapter 1 预备知识Work in pairs to decide whether these statements about IELTS are true or false.1. Grammar is the most important assessment criteria in writing. 2. IELTS Examiners can tell when someone is giving a memorized answer. 3. IELTS and TOEFL both use examiners t

2、o assess writing and speaking. 4. Your IELTS score in China will vary depending on which city you take the test.5. IELTS scores are carefully monitored and many are double checked. FTTFT2第2页，共93页。Chapter 1 预备知识学术类雅思写作考试内容类别官方建议时间字数题材学术类Task 1 20 min150字以上图表作文学术类Task 240 min250字以上议论文或报告3第3页，共93页。Task

3、 2 议论文两种形式 Argumentation 80%1. 题目给出一方观点（反方观点隐含），问Do you agree or disagree?To what extent do you agree or disagree?例：In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2. 题目中给出

4、双方观点，要求分析正反方观点后做出结论Some say Others argue that What is your opinion?Discuss both views and give your opinion.Express some reasons for both views and give your opinion.Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?4第4页，共93页。Task 2 中报告 Report ，出现概率为20%题目中没有观点，只给出一种现象，让考生分析该现象的causes, solutions

5、, effects . 通常题目的标志词为What are？例子：Today, there are more images of disasters and violence in the media. What are the causes and what are your solutions?5第5页，共93页。 雅思写作评分标准6第6页，共93页。TRTask responseTA -Task achievementCCCoherence and CohesionLRLexical resourceGRGrammatical range and accuracy 雅思写作评分标准7第7

6、页，共93页。IELTS TASK 2 Writing band descriptorsBand Task Achievement Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy7658第8页，共93页。Task Achievement9第9页，共93页。Coherence and Cohesion 10第10页，共93页。Lexical Resource 11第11页，共93页。Grammatical Range and Accuracy12第12页，共93页。Comments on Sample

7、Script 2 (International Tourism)Band 7TA: The candidate addresses both aspects of the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. Main ideas are generally clear and relevant, although some supporting ideas lack focus (as in the opening of paragraph 2).CC: Ideas are generally well-org

8、anised, and there is a clear overall progression with only minor lapses where points are not well-integrated into the argument. A range of cohesive devices is used effectively, although there is some under-use of connectives and substitution, and some lapses in the use of referencing. LR: A good ran

9、ge of vocabulary is used with some flexibility and precision. The candidate has a good awareness of style and collocation, although occasional awkward expressions or inappropriacies in word choice and word form limit the rating. GRA: Likewise, a good range of sentence structures is used with a high

10、level of accuracy resulting in frequent error-free sentences. Minor systematic errors persist, however, and punctuation is unhelpful at times13第13页，共93页。Comments on Sample Script 3 (International Tourism)Band 5TA: The input material is directly copied as an introduction to this response, and once th

11、is is deducted from the word count, the response is under-length at 194 words and so loses marks. Nevertheless, the topic is addressed and a relevant position is expressed, although there are patches (as in third paragraph) where the development is unclear. Other ideas are more evidently relevant, b

12、ut are sometimes insufficiently developed. These ideas are clearly organised and there is an overall progression within the response.CC: There is some effective use of a range of cohesive devices, including referencing, but there is also some mechanical over-use of linkers in places. Paragraphs are

13、sometimes rather too short and inappropriate. LR: A range of vocabulary is attempted and this is adequate for a good response to the task. However, control is weak, and there are frequent spelling errors which can cause some difficulties for the reader, thus keeping the rating down for the lexical c

14、riterion. GRA: The candidate uses a mix of simple and complex structures with frequent subordinate clauses. Control of complex structures is variable, and although errors are noticeable, they only rarely impede understanding of the message,14第14页，共93页。Practice 剑桥雅思7 P169请判断考官是怎样给这份试卷打出5分的？评分标准考官评语对应

15、评分标准描述得分评分标准Task responseCoherence &CohesionLexical ResourceGrammatical Range and Accuracy其他Under length/Off-topic/ Illegible 15第15页，共93页。评分标准考官评语对应评分标准描述得分评分标准TRIt does not address all parts of the questionAddresses the task only partially 5C&C正评价(6分）+there is also a lot of repetition due to inadeq

16、uate use of referencing and substitutionmay be repetitive because of lack of referencing and substitution 5.5LRThe high level of repetition indicates limitations in range of vocabularyUses a limited range of vocabulary 5GRAThe answer includes attempts at complex sentence forms, but+正评价nevertheless,

17、there are examples of accurate complex structures （6分）Attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate 5.5其他 Less than 250 words扣0.5总分（5+5.5+5+5.5）/4=5.25 5.55.5-0.5=516第16页，共93页。其他预备知识1. 格式：不用抄题目，齐头格式2. 缩写： 不要使用were , cant , dont 等缩写，应使用正式文体，可以使用全球通用首字母缩写，如NBA, KFC, WTO等，国内通用的不可以写，如CET

18、-43. 数字：十以下数字用英语单词表示4. 标点符号： 、 “Avatar” , ， and so on5. I , My, We, You的使用17第17页，共93页。6. 美式和英式拼写-re 与ercentercentre theater-theatre -our 与 orcolorfulcolourful laborlabour-ise, -isation 与 ize, -izationrealizerealise organizationorganisation-ce与-selicenselicence defensedefence 英式在美式拼写中被简化programme-pro

19、gram traveller-traveler其他预备知识18第18页，共93页。雅思写作流程5+33+25分钟构思，写提纲 （写作观点，2个主要论据，1个例子）33分钟写作2分钟检查 语法：主谓一致，标点词汇：用同义词和代词（it,them)替换重复过多的单词逻辑：是否需要在句子中添加therefore, moreover, in contrast等linking words19第19页，共93页。练习：请利用在本节课学到的内容找出下面句子的错误。1. 下面的句子从写作风格看存在什么问题？Mobile phones are so important to our lives. Everyon

20、e should use mobile phones!2. 请在下面的两个句子中间加上一个恰当的连接词将其改写为复杂句：Air pollution is increasingly serious. Measures should be taken to tackle this problem.3. 请迅速找出下面句子里的拼写错误：The color scheme of this design is not very organised.4. 请找出下面句子的非正式词汇并替换：Lots of rivers and lakes have been severely polluted.5. 请改写下

21、面句子中的词汇使其用词更正式：The crime rate in cities is higher and higher, so the advantages of these security measures are more than disadvantages.20第20页，共93页。Chapter 2 语法与从句 考官最敏感的三大语法错误 可数名词单数孤立出现。请判断下列翻译是否正确 ：“狗是朋友。 ” Dog is friend. Dogs are friends.A dog is a friend. The dog is a friend. 21第21页，共93页。 主谓不一致T

22、he growing use of computers_causing enormous changes in work. (be)Watching TV and playing computer games _one of the most important childrens leisure activities. (be)How we can cope with these problems _an interesting issue. (be) 逗号不能连接两个独立的句子。isisare22第22页，共93页。练习： 请找出下列句子的语法错误（每句仅有一个错误）1. Allow em

23、ployees to work from home can help employers to reduce costs. 2. Because many parents do not spend enough time with their children. 3. Some companies have plans to replace for their human workers with robots. 4. The Internet is a useful educational tool, spending too much time online is harmful to c

24、hildren. Allowing-Allowing删掉 Because删掉 forAlthough the23第23页，共93页。5. The results of space research has also increased our knowledge about our own planet. 6. An ageing population means an increased tax burden for worked adults. 7. Students are expected to sit quietly and pay attention on their teache

25、r. 8. They argue that, large cities offer a higher standard of living. 9. These activities can improve students foreign language skills. has-haveworked-workingon-to删掉 ，studentsstudents24第24页，共93页。复合句的写作1. 什么是复合句？I love you. I love you, and you love me. I love you that you love me. 简单句并列句 and/or/but复

26、合句25第25页，共93页。复合句是不是越多越好？剑桥雅思考官范文平均每篇12句话简单句 2句并列句 2句从句 8句平实通顺简单句、并列句和基础的复杂句易懂把意思表达清楚不长也不难不要让考官数词数到手软26第26页，共93页。高分复合句1. 宾语从句Many people believe that we have developed into a “throw-away society”.This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life. While there are

27、 both benefits and drawbacks to a multicultural society, it is safe to say that the pros out weigh the cons.Traditionally, the approach has been to punish criminals by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done.27第27页，共93页。2. 状语从句If 引导的条件状语从句如果学生想知道具体的职业信息，他们无需坐在教室里就可以得到。如果一个人失去工作仍能获得帮助，

28、或者一个少数民族仍能够获得和其他人一样的成功机会，那我们才可以说这个国家是进步的。If a student wants to learn about job-specific information, they do not need to sit in a classroom to get it. If a person loses a job but get assistance, or a minority still has an equal opportunity of success, then we can say this country is advanced. 28第28页

29、，共93页。While 引导的让步状语从句尽管经济的进步使我们的生活变得舒适，但同时也使社会在财富分配中产生了两极分化。尽管传统建筑外观美观，但通常内部使用起来却并不是很方便。While the economic development has made our life more comfortable, it has also polarized the society in the distribution of wealth.While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside, they are often not

30、very user-friendly. 29第29页，共93页。3. 定语从句who 引导，修饰“人”Those who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the professionals with real talent are very few. Student without teachers will surely be lost; but students who simply rely on teachers for knowledge are not really learning. C

31、hildren who enter school at an early age are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents. 30第30页，共93页。 that 引导，修饰“物”如何处置罪犯是所有国家和社会都需要面临的问题。 原本需要人工花费数月时间完成的工作现在可以由机器人在几分钟内毫无瑕疵的完成。How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face.

32、 The workload that could take months to finish by manual labor now could be done flawlessly by robots in minutes. 逗号加which引导非限制性定语从句If fuel prices go up, either fewer people will drive or people will drive less, which makes sense for reducing pollution.Demand for various commodities creates a huge m

33、arket for the local and international businesses, which in turn increases demand for the labor market. 31第31页，共93页。4. 主语从句 whether 引导的主语从句Whether is a controversial issue/ has caused a heated debate. it 引导的主语从句It is obvious that what引导主语从句 + not butWhat most companies and workforces need are not rob

34、ots, but creative people who can contribute ideas.What the poor countries need most is not money, but advanced technologies and talent in some key areas. 32第32页，共93页。5. 同位语从句The fact that we have different languages demonstrates that we have different cultures. Nowadays, an increasing number of peop

35、le are concerned about the phenomenon that our kids are spending more time watching TV. 6. 表语从句 This is because it is the rich and powerful people in our society who are able to impose changes. Another reason for this is that old buildings, like native languages, form a cultural identity and keep a

36、unique record of a country. 33第33页，共93页。作业：语法改错练习易错词选择练习判断练习定语从句练习宾语从句练习34第34页，共93页。Chapter 3 写作思路哪里来？无话可说没有思想具体分类法举反例法关键词法35第35页，共93页。1. 具体分类法- it dependsMany people use distance-learning programs (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring

37、 the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 36第36页，共93页。2. 举反例法only/ -est/

38、always/ never/ ban/ stopThe only way to improve safety on the road is to impose severe punishment on driving offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this

39、 would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 37第37页，共93页。3. 关键词法身体（健康） VS. 心理 （安全，求知，自信，被尊重）物质上 （经济基础） VS. 精神上（文化娱乐）International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more

40、 tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages?Skill & Efficiency Technology & SafetyRight & Responsibility Environment & HealthEmployment & Money Culture & Fun38第38页，共93页。PracticePlease write down your main ideas or arguments for the following two writing tasks. 1. Som

41、e people think that students should focus on a few subjects while others think they should study a wide range of subjects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 2. Some people think the media should stop reporting on details of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 39第39页，共93

42、页。1. Some people think that students should focus on a few subjects while others think they should study a wide range of subjects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Skill & Efficiency: core subjects help students to develop important skillsFocusing on these subjects helps them to g

43、ain knowledge quickly Employment & Money : students who have a good understanding of a wide range of subjects can find jobs more easily after graduationCulture & Fun: art subjects, such as painting and photography, develop their interest in art. 40第40页，共93页。2. Some people think the media should stop

44、 reporting on details of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Safety: People are better informed about criminal activities, which helps them to protect themselves and their communities against crime.Health: Detailed media reports on crime may increase peoples fear of crime. Right & Respons

45、ibility:These reports may violate the victims privacy. Media crime reports are likely to mislead the public. Money: Such reports can attract more viewers, listeners or readers and increase advertising revenue for media companies. 41第41页，共93页。Chapter 4 最简化15句框架模板 到底要不要模板？模板的好处：操作简单见效快分数高模板的缺点：结构死板千篇一

46、律有被判定“Memorized”的可能性42第42页，共93页。最简化15句框架模板脱胎于官方7分以上评分标准结构固话但句子自由规范文章的逻辑简化思维和写作难度低碳环保，无毒，无副作用43第43页，共93页。A 15-Sentence Solution to IELTS Writing第一段（引出话题，表达观点）1Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about_背景介绍2However, whether_is a controversial issue.辩论话题3My view is that_写作观点第二段（说理）4F

47、irst, it is obvious that_原因一，中心句5(This means that)_具体理由6So, _所以观点成立第三段（举例）7Moreover, _原因二，中心句8For example, _举例，越具体越好9_例证解释说明第四段（让步）10That is not to say that_not _并不完全否定反方观点11Of course, _承认反方观点的合理性12But_驳斥反方观点不合理性第五段（结尾）13In sum, _重申观点14Meanwhile, _不能忽视反方观点15By doing so we can make sure that_思想升华44第4

48、4页，共93页。实战练习Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What

49、in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words. 45第45页，共93页。第一段第1句. Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university educa

50、tion. Tips:Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon thatNowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose that university education serves.Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities. Universi

51、ties are one of the most important institutions in modern society. 46第46页，共93页。第一段第2句. A. “是否应该”However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue.B. “是这样还是应该那样”However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills or pure kn

52、owledge to graduates has caused heated debate. However, what kind of knowledge and skills universities should mainly provide to graduates is a controversial issue.C. 一些人认为另一些人认为Some people state that universities should focus on giving access to knowledge; others believe that the knowledge and skill

53、s needed in the workplace are more important for university graduates. 47第47页，共93页。第一段第3句 In my view, My view is that I agree with the view that， for the following reasons. I mainly agree with the former/ latter view for the following reasons. My view is that job-related knowledge and skills should

54、be the main focus of universities. 48第48页，共93页。第二段第1 句 First , it is obvious/ clear that for most students, the purpose of receiving university education is to obtain practical knowledge and skills which will enable them to become qualified employees in the future job market. First, there is no doub

55、t thatOne reason for this is that 49第49页，共93页。第二段第2句1. This is because most of them, after graduation , will enter workplace ,earn a living, and support their own families. (想上一句话的原因）2. This means that the courses focusing on jobs will become the most welcomed subjects which the majority of students

56、 will select. (想上一句话的结果）3. If universities do not pay enough attention to such skills, most graduates will not be able to find satisfactory position in the workplace, leading to a higher unemployment rate.(反证中心句）50第50页，共93页。第二段第3句So universities, as service providers, have to give top priority to th

57、ese customers real needs. (重申写作观点）OrTherefore, it is necessary/ crucial/ important for universities to give top priority to the students real needs. 51第51页，共93页。第三段第1句Moreover/ In addition/ Besides , focusing on the job-related skills can benefit the university itself. 52第52页，共93页。第三段第2句For example,

58、 the sci-fi blockbuster Avatar has marked a milestone in the filmmaking industry and drawn massive interest in 3D technology. or For example, 3D technology has become a hot topic after the movie Avatar made the whole world crazy. 53第53页，共93页。第三段第3句If a university can quickly respond, and consolidate

59、 teaching resources to offer courses about 3D, not only will its graduates be more competitive in the job market, but the university itself will keep pace with the technological development and move forward. OrAnother example is 54第54页，共93页。第四段第1句1.That is not to say that universities should not pay

60、 any attention to developing pure science and knowledge. 2. It is also true that universities should develop pure science and knowledge. 3. Those who harbor the view that the main function of universities should be to give access to the knowledge believe that the theoretic knowledge is the foundatio