英语初三英语书面表达提高训练及解析

1、（英语）初三英语书面表达提高训练及解析一、英语书面表达1 .你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历？请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Once, I couldnt make good use of time and it had a bad influence on mystudy.【答案】 Once, I couldnt make good use o

2、f time and it had a bad influence on my study.I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also

3、upset.How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和

4、短语，为文章增色不少，如 make good use of, last weekend , how to do , play a game, a kind of, spent more time on , forget to do , in the end , be angry with , be going to do , on the paper , put up 等。而特殊非谓语动词结构 Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. 和 I think we should make a weekday plan. /We shoul

5、d write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习 中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性， 也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的

6、作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。2.随着社会的发展，通讯的方式从远古时代的书信到当今的互联网，经历着巨大的变化。请你写一篇短文，谈谈你对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。内容包括：.你喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些？.它们的优点和缺点是什么？.你认为使用现代通讯工具要注意什么？要求：1.不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和姓名；2.语意连贯，词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。As time goes by, ther

7、e are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me, 【答案】 As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As forme, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring gre

8、at convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones.By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face c

9、ommunication and try not towaste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对现代通讯工具的使用及看法。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：thereare ；- I prefer to , Mobile phones bring , we can ,- we should ,So let 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】

10、本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我喜欢使用的通讯方式有哪些；接下来介绍它们的优点和缺点是什么，以及使用现代通讯工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用现代通讯工具。止匕处 prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one s opinion,try one s b|驱些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。.书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计 划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示： 暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能（或自拟一点）生

11、活健康饮食；坚持锻炼（或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然（或自拟一点）注意：.表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. That s all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here

12、is my plan for it.First, Id like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. Im interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holid

13、ay.Second, health is the most important. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our e

14、nvironment so that we can make our Earth a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all o

15、f you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短 语，例如 Id like to do , help me open my mind , at least, be interested in , during the holiday , plan to do , join in , be kind to someone in need , pay more attention to , be close to nature , search the I

16、nternet 等。而 First, Id like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. 等表顺序词和综合句式的运用,既使 短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

17、它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。. ( B)根据要求完成大作文，词数:80-100体育运动是中学生的共同爱好.请根据下面提示写一篇题为What We Get from Sports的短文应该包含以下要点：1,学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同，理由各异.多数学生学习疲倦时，通过运动来放松自己.男孩参加各项体育运动，希望运动能使自己更强壮.女孩也喜欢运动，希望运动使自己减肥和保持健康，苗条.你对运动的观点.注意:文中不得出现自己的名

18、字和学校的名字短文开头已给出，不计入词数.参考词语：keep slim (保持苗条)What We Get from SportsStudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports.【答案】 Students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. But different students have different reasons for taking part in sports.Many students have

19、 sports when they feel tired after study. They just want to relax themselves and have fun. Most boys love sports. They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. They join in the sports that interest them most, such as soccer, basketball and volleyball. As for girls, they want to

20、lose weight. They want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.In my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【详解】1.本篇写作主要是谈论自己对运动的观点和看法，应该用一般现在时态，写作要点要包括： 提出目前学生对运动的不同看法及原因。2.具体分析（多数学生的观点、男生的观点、女生的观点）。3.提出自己对运动的观点。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习 惯

21、，准确运用时态，主谓一致，在文中使用了时间状语从句，定语从句，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 have fun , in order to , as for, in my opinion 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意 思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。5.假设你是来自中国的中学生李华，打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营，看完了这个网页后，你打算给Liz Payne留言，表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。内容包括：.简单介绍自己；.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间，听Liz Payne的讲座）；.预期收获。作文要求：.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；

22、.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne, I m Li Hua,Yours,Li Hua 【答案】Dear Liz Payne,I m Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. I m writing to tell you that oucity will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit LondonCa

23、nal Museum. From HYPERLINK .uk .uk, I kn ow you will have a report“An Update onthe Cotswold Canals Februawhich will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, theThames and Severn Canal. What s more, I

24、hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about the UK.I m looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给 Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个 部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作 时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使 用

25、第一人称I来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和 汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式结构以及适 当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰 当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏 要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介 绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好， 那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次

26、短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、 一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习 惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了一些复合句和较高级的句型，如 I m writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用 了 宾语从句；From HYPERLINK .uk .uk, I know you will have a report“ An Update on the Cotswold CanalsFebruary 6th, whi

27、ch will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. 中有个非限制性 定语从句； And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the StroudwaterCanal, the Thames and Severn Canal中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连 贯、表达流畅。6. 美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写要

28、求：.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；.行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；.词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior h

29、igh students,Let s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywh

30、ere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be politeto others and try to behave well. It s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can helpclean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep offg

31、rass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn t do. We shouldn t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throw rubbish everywhere.At the same time, we shouldn t break traffic rules.Let s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead

32、to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行 双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到双创”活动中来。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。根据这个内容， 写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现 在时态，第一人称 we来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不 能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用

33、恰当的词汇、短语和句 型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文 章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市双创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清 晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符 合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较 复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使

34、用了较好的连接成分，如 We should be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、 It s kind of you to help people in nele、 Meanwhile, We can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 We can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn t break 等affic r

35、ules.假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时 何地见面。提示词语： Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示问题： Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?kucyHi, Lucy 1旺加 Chinese tradition 也也【答案】 Hi, Lucy! I know you like

36、Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to LaosheTeahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let s meet at the gateaofbkjseshle813

37、0, OK? See you.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓 一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I wantto , We are going to，We can , Let s meet at 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们 去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处 wan

38、t to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。.你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy,感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：.虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要 多花工夫。.你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。(举例说明，适当发挥23句).老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说(适当发挥23句)注意：.要求语句通顺，意思连贯。.第2要点和第3要点要用23句

39、话作适当发挥。.词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【答案】例文Hello!Dear Amy, thank you for caring.Now I am working hard for the senior high schoo

40、l entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They

41、had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. Its important not to be afraid of any kind of d

42、ifficulty.How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.YoursLi Ming【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学 习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可 适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get good results, spend+时间 +on sth, be strict with, however, c

43、are for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one s best to, besfadjoto do sth 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符 合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突

44、出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确 性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还 要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。9.同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。写作内容：.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务

45、。.读自己喜欢的书。.远离危险的地方。写作要求：1.80词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.【答案】 My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer h

46、oliday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free.

47、I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a d

48、iary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.Im sure Ill have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“进行书写，不可使用“we/ you等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如： come to an end结束；on the way在途中；getclose to nature 亲近大自然； volu