高三英语专项复习：优秀作文教学研讨

1、书 面 表 达 与 短 文 改 错 书 面 表 达 -Approaches to pros & cons 10 月段考书面表达下面是对中学生对志愿工作的看法的调查表，请根据下面所给的词汇和短语写一篇英语小短文。70%的学生赞成参加志愿工作为社会作贡献，帮助别人是一件很有意义的工作，带来很多个人利益，为日后的工作获得宝贵的技能和经验，为自己创造机遇，增强信心、自觉意识、良好的交际能力和领导才能。25%的学生不愿意从事志愿工作无报酬，浪费时间，耽误学习。5%的学生无明确态度漠不关心。我对志愿工作的看法。对立观点展开议论写作这种题型一般会给出两个或两个以上的对立的观点，要求考生发表自己的看法或见解。

2、这类题型的基本模式可分四段：1. 对一个讨论的主题，仁者见仁智者见智2、有人认为3、有人认为4、我的看法是 参考模板 总-分原则 We have had a heated discussion about/on . Opinions are divided on the matter. / Different students have different attitudes towards the matter. Some students think / believe/hold the view that However, others argue that As far as I am

3、 concerned, I The reasons are as follows. First, Secondly, In conclusion / In a word ,文章框架结构Different students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. 25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. The rest of the students dont hav

4、e a clear attitude toward it , nor do they care about it.I hold the view that doing voluntary work is of benefit to us. 一些关键词的处理志愿工作 voluntary work对社会做贡献 make a contribution to the society一件有意义的工作 a worthwhile /meaningful job个人利益 personal benefits创造机遇 open up opportunities增强信心 build up ones confiden

5、ce无报酬 without payment/ for nothingDifferent students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. They consider that it can make a contribution to society and it is a worthwhile job to help others. It can also bring personal benefits and will co

6、ntribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build up their confidence, raise their self-awareness, and improve good communication skills and leadership ability.25% of the students disappr

7、ove of doing voluntary work. They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. The rest of the students dont have clear attitude toward it , nor do they care about it.I think I hold the view that doing voluntary work is of benefit to us. No matter how small it is, it will help m

8、ake a difference. Despite no payment, we can acquire valuable experience. Possible VersionDifferent students have different attitudes toward voluntary work.70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. They consider that it can make a contribution to society and it is a worthwhile job to help

9、 others. It can also bring personal benefits and will contribute to their future because they can gain valuable experience and skills for their future career. Voluntary work often opens up opportunities for them, build up their confidence, raise their self-awareness, and improve good communication s

10、kills and leadership ability. Read out the composition25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They think the work is done without payment and it is a waste of time. The rest of the students dont have a clear attitude toward it , nor do they care about it.I think I hold the view that

11、doing voluntary work is of benefit to us. No matter how small it is, it will help make a difference. Despite no payment, we can acquire valuable experience. 杨洋 There is a heated discussion on vloluntary work these days. Statistics show that 70% of the students are willing to take part in voluntary w

12、ork. They think being volunteers can make contributions to the society. It is a meaning job for high school students to help others. What s more, doing voluntary work is an effective way to obtain valuable skills and experiences. It can help people grasp opportunities and build up their confidence.

13、Those students also consider leadership and abilities to communicate with others to be important, and these can be acquired from voluntary work. However,25% of the students have the opposite opinions. They say students will waste a lot of time, which is bad for their health. Anyway, you cant get any

14、 reward from these voluntary work. Besides, 5% of the students dont care about the voluntary work. They havent formed any clear opinions so far. As far as Im concerned, voluntary work can help us a lot. Firstly, we can easily make any new friends. Secondly, students will be able to achieve courage ,

15、 faithfulness and other wonderful personalities from voluntary work. Thus, I think it is great for students to take part in voluntary work. 储备一些固定句型结构如何多样化表达不同看法 1）People _doing voluntary work 2）People _ doing voluntary work 3）People _doing voluntary work 4）_ doing voluntary work is worthwhile_ doin

16、g voluntary work is a waste of time . _ doing voluntary work. Every coin has two sides.have（take，adopt，assume ) different attitudes towardshave different opinions ontake different views of（on）Some people believe thatOthers argue thatOpinions are divided on 如何表示赞成?70% of the students approve of doing

17、 voluntary work.70% of the students _ doing voluntary work.70% of the students _ doing voluntary work.70% of the students _voluntary work_.70% of the students _doing voluntary work. are in favor of are forthink ofpositively support如何表示反对25% of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work.25% of t

18、he students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work.25% of the students _ doing voluntary work _. are againstobject toopposethink of negativelyare opposed to 如何表达个人看法I think each of us sho

19、uld make a contribution to society._, each of us should make a contribution to society._, each of us should make a contribution to society._, each of us should make a contribution to society._each of us should make a contribution to society.In my opinionSo far as I am concerned PersonallyI hold the

20、view that 在写作中除了使用以上谈到的重点句型外，还应该注意文章的逻辑结构和五种过渡词的使用。例如： 1.表示举例时使用： for example, such as, take .for example, another example of, here are a few examples, namely等。 2.表示列举时使用： first, second, third.finally; to begin with, for one thing, for another等。 3.表示归纳总结时使用： in a word, in all, to sum up, in brief, i

21、n short等。 4.要加强句与句之间的连贯时使用：in addition ,whats more ,furthermore, on top of that, besides, moreover等。 5.表示转折时使用： however, while, on the contrary等。May 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was

22、sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I got angry.I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized（批评）the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said

23、 goodbye to them and took it home happily.HoweverAt the beginning,In a wordso thatJust then/Just at that momentAfterAt last (In the end ),SoAnd thenMay 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _ ，the salesgirl treated me coldly. _，she didnt admit the c

24、oat was sold in her shop. _，She said that I made it dirty. _，She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _, the manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. _he knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me.

25、 I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.However At the beginningAnd then In a wordI got so angry thatAs soon as/ The momentJust at that moment 1） 表列举： for example、such as 、namely，etc 2) 表补充： besides、in addition、moreover，whats more ,etc 3) 表对比： in spite of，on the contrary, despite , etc 4) 表

26、原因：because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to，as a result of ,etc 5) 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so，etc 6) 表结论： on the whole 、in a word、in brief、 to sum up，generally speaking, etc 7) 表转折： however、nevertheless、yet，etc Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the

27、 survey.We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. In their opinion, making a contribution to society and lending a helping hand to others is a worthwhile job. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for f

28、uture career. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunities for them to build up confidence, raise self awareness, and improve good communication skills and leadership.However, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is

29、 a waste of time.5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they dont care about it at all.In my opinion, wed better take the chance to participate in voluntary work, no matter how small it is.Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the survey

30、.We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. In their opinion, making a contribution to society and lending a helping hand to others is a worthwhile job. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for future c

31、areer. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunities for them to build confidence, raise self awareness, and improve good communication skills and leadership.However, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is a waste o

32、f time.5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they dont care about it at all.In my opinion, wed better take the chance to participate in voluntary work, no matter how small it is.The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary work.70% of the students are in fav

33、or of voluntary work. By doing the work , we can make contributions to the society. And there is much point in helping others. It can bring us lots of personal benefits. We can also gain precious skills and experience which we can make use of in the future. Whats more, taking part in voluntary work

34、is a way to open up opportunities. Furthermore, it helps to build up our confidence and raise self-consciousness. Our ability of communication and leadership will also be developed by doing voluntary work.However,25% of the students dont approve of voluntary work. They consider voluntary work as a w

35、aste of time because they work without payment.The rest of the students dont have a clear attitude towards voluntary work.In my opinion, as we are members of the society, all of us should spare no effort to make it better and better.The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary

36、work.70% of the students are in favor of voluntary work. By doing the work , we can make contributions to the society. And there is much point in helping others. It can bring us lots of personal benefits. We can also gain precious skills and experience which we can make use of in the future. Whats m

37、ore, taking part in voluntary work is a way to open up opportunities. Furthermore,it helps to raise our confidence and build up self-consciousness. Our ability of communication and leadership will also be developed by doing voluntary work.However,25% of the students dont approve of voluntary work. T

38、hey consider voluntary work as a waste of time because they work without payment.The rest of the students dont have a clear attitude towards voluntary work.In my opinion, as we are members of the society, all of us should spare no effort to make it better and better.典型错误70% of the students are in fa

39、vor of joining in voluntary works. 70% of the students are in favor of joining in voluntary work. work works work job 2. 70% of the students approve that devote themselves to the society is a meaningful work.70% of the students approve that devoting themselves to the society is a meaningful job. 3.

40、However, we have to leave time studying and finishing our homework. However, we have to leave time to study and finish our homework. There are also 5% of the students have no clear idea about it.5% of the students have no clear idea about it.There are also 5% of the students having no clear idea abo

41、ut it.There are also 5% of the students who have no clear idea about it.There are also 5% of the students with no clear idea about it.5. The reasons for they dont want to join the voluntary work are as follow.The reasons why they dont want to join in the voluntary work are as follows.高考链接002年普通高等学校招

42、生全国英语统一考试书面表达试题 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为：1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙、会影响城市形象40%的同学认为1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divi

43、ded on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged.门票 an entrance fee免费 free of charge城市形象 the appearance/ image of a city园林工人 gardenerIm writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance

44、fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people a

45、way. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. However, they suggest that fees s

46、hould be charged low. Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the qusstion. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. Peo

47、ple need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.Whats more ,it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand ,40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers , and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest , however , fees should be charged low. Yours truly, Li HuaPractice 现在正是春暖花开春游时节。你校学生会以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”为题，向