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1、巧译英语意美、音美、形美11. At last , a candid candidate !21. At last , a candid candidate ! 终于找到了一个厚道的候选人！32. It was a splendid population - for all the slow, sleepy, sluggish-brained sloths stayed at home. 42. It was a splendid population - for all the slow, sleepy, sluggish-brained sloths stayed at home. Ver

2、sion 1: 这是一批卓越能干的人民因为所有这些行动迟缓、瞌睡稀稀、呆如树獭的人都留在家乡了。（余立三译文）Version 2: 那是一批卓越的人因为那些慢慢吞吞、昏昏沉沉、反应迟钝、形如树獭的人留在了家乡。（杨莉藜译文）5Version 3: 这是一批卓越能干的人民因为那些行动迟缓、头脑迟钝、睡眼惺忪、呆如树獭的人留在了家乡。（杨莉藜译文）Version 4: 这帮人各个出类拔萃因为凡是呆板、呆滞、呆头呆脑的呆子都呆在了家里。（马红军译文）63. Predictably, the winter will be snowy, sleety, and slushy.73. Predictabl

3、y, the winter will be snowy, sleety, and slushy.译文1：可以预言，今年冬天将多雪，多冻雨，多泥泞。译文2：可以预言，今年冬天将雪花飘飘，雪雨交加，雪路泥泞。84. I am never at a loss for a word; Pitt is never at a loss for the word. 94. I am never at a loss for a word; Pitt is never at a loss for the word. Version 1: 我总是能凑合找个词儿说说，可是皮特什么时候都能找到恰如其分的词儿。Vers

4、ion 2: 我总能找到一个词，而皮特总能找到那个绝妙的好词。Version 3:我总能找到一个觉得妙的词，而皮特总能找到那个绝妙的词。10Version 4:我总能找到一个意思相当的词，而皮特总能找到那个意思恰当的词。Version 5: 我总是滔滔不绝，而皮特则是字字珠玑。（马红军译）Version 6: 我和皮特都能出口成章，但我用的词大都不可言妙，而他用的总是妙不可言。115. He tried to shake off his fear, and actually shook his head.125. He tried to shake off his fear, and actu

5、ally shook his head.Version 1: 他想驱除内心的恐惧，但实际上只摇了摇头，仿佛表示驱除不了。Version 2: 他拼命想摆脱内心的恐惧，结果只无奈地摆了摆头。13 6. Better late than the late. 146. Better late than the late. Version 1: 迟到总比丧命好。Version 2: 晚了总比完了好。Version 3: 迟了总比死了好。Version 4: 慢行回家，快行回老家。Version 5: 宁迟一时，不迟(辞)一世。version 6: 宁晚三分，不抢一秒；别到阎王爷那儿去报到！ 157.

6、Change is part of life and the making of character, hon. When things happen that you do not like, you have two choices: You get bitter or better.167. Change is part of life and the making of character, hon. When things happen that you do not like, you have two choices: You get bitter or better.译文：变化

7、是生活的一部分，而且也塑造了人的意志品德，亲爱的。当你不喜欢的事情发生了，你有两种选择：要么痛苦不堪；要么痛快达观。178. The professor tapped on his desk and shouted: “Young men, Order !” -The entire class yelled: “Beer !”188. The professor tapped on his desk and shouted: “Young men, Order !” -The entire class yelled: “Beer !”Version 1: 教授敲击桌子喊道：“年轻人，请安静！”

8、 学生：“啤酒 ！” （注：英语的 “order”含歧义，请安静；点菜；要饮料）Version 2: 教授敲击桌子喊道：“你们这些年轻人吆喝（要喝）什么？” 学生： “啤酒！”199. the output of the United Nations has not been commensurate with the input.209. the output of the United Nations has not been commensurate with the input .Version 1: 联合国的贡献与其花费已经不相称了。Version 2: 联合国的作用已难抵其费用。2

9、110. The ballot is stronger than the bullet.2210. The ballot is stronger than the bullet.Version 1: 选举权比子弹更具威力。Version 2: 选票比大炮更具威力。Version 3: 选票胜于枪炮。Version 4: 选单胜过子弹。23 11. You reckon your Dodge would help you up to all these dodges again ?2411. You reckon your Dodge would help you up to all these

10、 dodges again ?Version 1: 你以为坐上了你的道奇车就可以再次逃之夭夭？Version 2:你以为坐上了你的道奇跑车就可以再次跑掉么？2512. “What does that lawyer do after he dies?” “Lie still.” 2612. “What does that lawyer do after he dies?” “Lie still.” 译文1：“那个律师死后能干什么？”/ “静静地躺着”。 英汉翻译概要译文2：“那个律师死后还能干什么？”/ “躺着说鬼话”。 （马红军 译）27 12. I love my love with an

11、E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east. (Dickens, David Copperfield)28译文1：12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, b

12、ecause shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.我爱我的爱人为了一个E，因为她是Enticing (迷人的)；我恨我的爱人为了一个E, 因为她是Engaged (订了婚的)。我用我的爱人象征Exquisite (美妙)， 我劝我的爱人从事Elopement (私奔)，她的名字是Emily (爱弥丽)，她的住处在East (东方)。（董秋斯译）2912. I love

13、 my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.译文2： 我爱我的爱，因为她长得实在招人爱。我恨我的爱，因为她不回报我的爱。我带着她到挂着浮荡子招牌的一家，和她谈情说爱。我请她跟我一起潜逃私奔，为的是我和她能长久你亲我爱。她的名字叫爱弥

14、丽，她家住在爱仁里。（张谷若译）3012. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.译文3：我爱我的爱人，因为她很迷人；我恨我的爱人，因已许配他人；他在我心中是美人，我带她私奔，以避开外人；她名叫虞美人，是东方丽人。

15、（姜秋霞、张柏然）31译文4：12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.我爱我的那个“丽”，可爱迷人有魅力；我恨我的那“丽”，要和他人结伉俪；她文雅大方又美丽，和我出逃去游历； 她芳名就叫爱米丽，家住东方人俏丽

16、。（马红军译）32译文5：12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the sign of the exquisite, and treated her with an elopement; her names Emily, and she lives in the east.吾爱吾爱，因伊可爱；吾恨吾爱，因伊另有所爱。吾视吾爱，神圣之爱，吾携吾爱，私逃为爱；吾爱名艾米丽，吾东方之爱。 “中国翻译，1996年第六期”33译文6：12. I love my love with an E, because shes enticing; I hate her with an E, because shes engaged; I took her to the