高三英语第一轮复习书面表达讲解与训练三知识精讲

1、高三英语第一轮复习：书面表达讲解与训练（三）【本讲主要内容】书面表达讲解与训练（三）如何写好情景写作写作体裁训练 1）记叙文 2）描述文【知识总结归纳】一.考题的设置和要求：教学大纲的要求一书面表达是来考查学生是否能够运用所学过的英语知识和掌握的技巧进行思想交流，也就是说考查综合运用英语的能力。 试题的设置：更贴近实际生活，与日常生活息息相关， 让考生有话可说，更能充分的考查出学生的语 言交际能力。考查目标和要求-要求考生根据所给情景， 用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文。（北京试卷要求字数不 少于60字）情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、 提纲等。近年来的书

2、面表达一览表：2000全国卷记叙文看图写作根据目击的交通事故给警察局 写一份材料叙事2001全国卷论说文以表格形式提 供要点根据表格所提供的内容谈一谈 减负给你的学习和生活带来的 变化书信2001 春应用文文字邀请你的美国朋友 Peter来你校 在卜月举办的美国电影节上给 学生做一次关于美国电影的方面的讲座书信2002全国卷论说文以表格形式提 供要点根据表格所提供的内容谈一谈 公园要不要收门票书信2002北东卷记叙文看图写作写一篇野外生存训练的日记日记2002 春记叙文文字+图回给你的美国朋友写信介绍你们 是如何庆祝申奥成功的， 并邀请 他2008年来中国书信2003全国卷描述文文字+图回写信

3、给你的朋友介绍为他找的 住房情况书信2003北乐卷记叙文文字+图回记述一次配合迎奥运宣传学雷 锋活动日记2003 春应用文向一外教请求有关选择剧目方面的帮助，请他给与一些建议书信.如何写好情景写作.认真审题，确定体裁及篇章结构或提纲（包括开头点题句， 中间具体内容以及结尾（包括再现主题，感想和希望）。记叙往往和议论密不可分，说明也会包含于议论中，成为它的 支撑论据。.再读细节，确定人称、时态、主要情节、句式等。尤其要考虑动词：搭配（动词与名词的搭配、动词与介词的搭配），相关同义词或词组 （例如，visit, have a visit, pay a visit, on a visit to ）。

4、.成文（10句左右），囊括要点，按照文体和篇章要求组织语篇。.润色，注意措辞、复杂句式及承上启下的自然衔接，校对细节。.写作体裁练习：学习如何写记叙文：记叙文主要是记述所发生的事情和经历。常见的形式有：故事、传记、游记、日记、新 闻报道等。记叙文的写作要素：.要交代清楚五要素的内容即：where, when, what, who, how。.事件可按时间或空间顺序叙述。.时态通常与过去时有关的时态。（如果是当前的经常性事件，自然，社会现象。通常用与现在时有关的时态。）记叙文的篇章结构：开头the beginning交代必要的背景，如：时间，地点，人物等。中间the middle交代故事情节（事

5、情的主体）。如：事件的发生，发展和前因后果结尾the ending事情的结果或感想，愿望等（ the result or feeling ） 在记叙文中常用到的连接词:横线First . Then . Next . Finally纵线Some . Some . Others;the boys . the girls .;Some Ss . some others . the rest of us / them .时 间 顺 序Early in the morning / In the early morning;In the middle of the day / At noon;Late i

6、n the afternoon / In the late afternoon;Far / Deep into the nightIn the past / At present / In the futureFirst, second, next, then, finally;at first, in the beginning; at last, in the end;Shortly afterwards, at once, immediately, all of a sudden, suddenly, soon,The moment-l, as soon as, the first ti

7、me , not untiln ext time,before, after, etc2002年高考书面表达（北京卷）你和李明参加一次野外生存训练。以下 5幅图画表现了野外训练活动的过程，请根据图 示写一篇英文日记。注意：1词数100左右 2日记的开头与结尾已为你写好。生词：指南针：compass 手电筒：flashlight急救包：first-aid kit宿营地：campsiteSaturday,May4,2002CloudyLi Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival programme yesterday, and it was on

8、e of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems in the field. It was quite an experience for us both, which I，n ever forget for the rest of my life.2002.高考学生习作分析（| 北京卷）Sa

9、turday,May4,2002CloudyLi Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival programme yesterday, and it was one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.The two of us were to reach the campsite by evening. We set out early in the morning , eager to face the adventure. I was carrying a camp

10、 and a compass in my bag, While Li Ming loaded his with some bread, matches, candles, a map , a knife , a first-aid kit, a flashlight, and some clothes. We followed the marked route until we reached a brook. We had to swim across it, floating our supplies on a piece of wood in order to keep them dry

11、. What s worse, we lost sight of the signs onthe other side of the brook! Thanks to the compass, we finally arrived at the campsite on time, and managed to make the camp and a fire.The two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems

12、 in the field. It was qu ite an experience for us both, which I ll never forget for the rest of my life.Saturday,May4, 2002cloudyLi Ming and I took part n a wilderness survival program yesterday, and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school.Before we set out yesterday

13、morning, we checked the things that we took. Li Ming told me he brought a compass and a camp, which can be put in his small bag and I told him I took some clothes, some food, some candles, a box of matches and a first-aid kit. After that, we started our trip.We climbed up a high mountain and down to

14、 the foot. Then we swam to the opposite bank in a river and put our bags on a boat. We went into a forest. There were a lot of trees. We took out the compass and found out our campsite quickly. Then we set up the camp and set fire to cook food. The color got dark and dark .The two of us spent the ni

15、ght in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems. It was quite an experience for us both, which I ll never forget for therest of my life.如何写描述文描述文是把人物，事件， 景观， 地点，环境等用语言生动、形象地描绘出来。描述人物：1)开头要进行简明的介绍(introduction )2)文章主体(main part)可按时间顺序或事件的主次进行描述3)结尾(conclu

16、sion )可进行评论或谈感受。描述地点 卜1)要准确使用表示方位的词及短语2)描述地点的位置通常要从上到下，从里到外，从左到右，从远到近。3)注意详略。重点部分要突出，详细描述。学习并牢记下列常用短语和句型人at the front/back of something, with . in the centre /around a place;间in front of, behind; next to, close to, in and around,顺 on the left/ right,- in the south, in the west / east / north, 序,on t

17、he other side / opposite side of, inside, outside; where etc常用短语和句型： 加位There is a tall shelf on the left of my room. (on the right of, in the front of, near the window,)Above the bed, there is a large painting of the blue sea. (On the right of the room,)Next to it is a bed. (In front of it, At the b

18、ack of, In the middle of, To the right of )They are opposite the door. (on the left/right of the room.)The office building is in the east of the campus. (in the south of, to the west of, in front of, behind, at the back of,)The monument, which was built in 1894, stands in the center of the square.描述

19、国家，城市状况等China is located in Asia. (be situated be surrounded by , lie to the east )ofIt covers a huge area of 9,600 000 square kilometers.The population of this city is 100,000 .菽When you come out of (get to reach)(the second traffic lights, theCross the street (river)(keep walking along walk down T

20、urn right at the end of Bridge Street into Riverside Road.first crossing,Take the first turning on your left. (take the path which crosses the river.)Go straight on to the traffic light and then turn right.You ll see find ) it next to the cinema.h物My grandpa, kind and patient, enjoys talking with ki

21、ds.He is about 5feet and 7inches tall.She has a round face with two big eyes.,臃述物品s made of straw.This rope is 100meters long. =The length of this rope is 100 meters. = This rope is 100 meters in length. (in weight, in width, in height, in size, in color, in shape )It is a round yellow hat with pink

22、 flowers on it. ItThere are three books in the her drawer.2003年高考书面表达假设你是李华，彳的英国笔友Bob将9月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据画面提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告之 住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.词数100左右；2.房租rentDear Bob,Yours,Li HuaPossible version:Dear Bob,I m so glad to learn that you re coming in September. I ve found a

23、place for you. Ita small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In thebedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. Theflat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from jianxin Chinese School. BusNo.11 can take you strai

24、ght to the school. In fact, it s only one stop. Do you think youlike it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.Yours,Li Hua【实战模拟】写作练习：.你校成功地举办了一次摄影展览，现已结束。请根据海报的内容用英语把这次摄影展 写成一篇报道，并向 21st century school edition投稿。海报为了丰富学生的业余生活，我校学生会将于4月26日-28日举办一次学生摄影展览。参加对象：所有同学自愿参加。作品要

25、求：黑白、彩色均可；但必须是自己的作品。作品主题：学校生活、自然风光、节日活动等。展览地点：二层阅览室获奖作者将得到意外的的奖品。注意：(1)报道必须包括海报所给的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整。(2)报道的标题已给出。(3)次数：100左右。A Photo Show.假如你是李华，昨天学校为你们举办了18岁成人仪式。请你根据下列要点给你在美国的笔友发一封电子邮件，描述仪式过程并简述你的感受。(1)成人宣誓(2)感谢家长和老师的教育培养(3)老师送贺卡(4)表演节目注意：(1)邮件必须包括以上要点，可以适当发挥；(2)次数：100左右；(3)开头结尾已为你写好。生词： 宣誓： ma

26、ke an oath仪式： ceremonyDear Tom,It is great to receive your email. Now I d like to tell you something that took place in myschool yesterday.假设你是李华，你的美国朋友 Mike将于6月底到北京作短暂停留，请你帮他安排一天的活动。要求用所给的示意图写一封信向他提出建议并对各地点加以简单的介绍。注意：(1)包括示意图中的主要内容(2)次数100左右(3)信的开头已写好(4)生词：图书城 Book TownDear Mike,I nglad to hear you

27、 are coming soon. I vplanned a one-day trip for you in Beijing.假如你是王平，即将赴英国学习，今天早上刚刚买到机票，请根据票上标明的起飞时间，中途停顿的地点，在英国等候的时间及到达终点的时间，写信告诉将到机场接你的英国朋友John。FROMTOFLIGHTDATETIMEARRBeijingHongkongCA368Dec2120:00PM21:30PMHongkongLondonDec2122:00PM8:00AMLondonGlasgowBA163Dec2210:00PM11:00AM注意：1)词数100-1202)信的开头以给

28、出。Dec 10th 2001Dear John,A Photo Show【试题答案】答案1:Later in April, a photo show was held in our school. It was a great success! All the photo were taken by the students themselves. There were both black-and-white and color photos, presenting our school life, the beauty of nature, festival activities and

29、 so on. All the works of arts were on show in the reading room on the second floor. Every day, a large number of students went to enjoy it and they were surprised to find that the pictures were so wonderful. Those whose photos were chosen the best were given unexpected prize. In short, this photo sh

30、ow really made our life colorful. 答案2:Dear Tom,It is great to receive your email. Now I d like to yelu something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-up we should have a sens

31、e of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have been educating us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally, we put on wonderful performances, singing

32、and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it s very important for us. I will remember theday in my life. 答案3:Dear Mike,I m glad to hear you are coming soon. I vdpyaniipefoiayonuein Beijing.In the morning you can first go to the Summer Palace, which is one of the most beautiful parks in Beijing. There you ca