活动感想类基础写作解题指导

1、活动感想类基础写作解题指导一、重点诠释 1. 活动感想类作文主要分成两种： “目 的”型和“主题”型。 2. “目的”型一般前两句总体介绍 活动，三四句介绍活动的具体内容，最后一句说明意义 / 感受； “主题”型则第一句总体介绍活动， 二三四句介绍活动的具体内 容，最后一句说明意义 / 感受。二、具体布局（括号里数字代表在基础写作里的句子序号）“目的”型目的、活动名称、组织者、 （地点）时间（ 1）+ 参与者（ 2） + 内容（ 3、4）+ 意义/ 感受（5）参与者、活动名称（组织者）、地点、时间（ 1）+ 目的（ 2） + 内容（ 3、4）+ 意义/ 感受（5）“主题”型时间、活动名称、主题

2、、参与者、地点（ 1）+ 内容（ 2、3、 4）+ 意义/感受（ 5）时间、参与者、活动名称、地点、主题（ 1）+ 内容（ 2、3、 4）+ 意义/感受（ 5）温馨提示：如果“主题”型类“内容前”的信息比较多， 可以仿用“目 的”型的第二种布局：参与者、 活动名称、 地点、时间（1）+ 主题（ 2）+ 内容（3、4）+ 意义/感受（ 5）三、技巧点拨熟记“活动内容前的英文模板”。活动感想类作文在介绍具体活动内容前的信息比较多 （如目 的、主题、组织者、参与者、地点、时间等），而且“目的”型 和“主题”型的文章布局还各不相同， 所以笔者建议考生不要死 记具体布局，而是借助核心词背诵四个“活动内容

3、前的英文模 板”（见下面），这样以后遇到活动感想类的文章就可以依葫芦 画瓢，写出漂亮的地道的开头。“目的”型“活动内容前的英文模板”In order to support Guangzhou to hold the 2010 Asian Games and protect our environment，an activity wasorganized by the Youth League and the Students Union of our school during the week from January 3rd to January 8th. All the students

4、 in the senior grades took an active part in it.More than 1500 students in Senior Three in our schoolattended the grown-up ceremony on the playground at 3: 00p.m. on May 4th ， 2011. The aim/ purpose of the ceremony is to build up the awareness of students responsibility.“主题”型“活动内容前的英文模板”Last Wednesd

5、ay afternoon ，an activity on the theme ofwas held for thehow to become a popular student students of Senior Three in the school library.At 3 : 00 this after noon , the teachers and stude ntsinSenior Three as well as our parents attended the grown-up ceremony held in the school hall ， whose theme is

6、“Growth and Responsibility”.合理组织“活动内容”要点。 活动感想类作文不可避免要介绍一些活动内容， 考生需适 时借助一些句式或连接词 （如下文划线部分） 将活动内容要点合 理连贯地连接在一起。例 1：过程：1. 唱一首感谢父母的歌，拥抱父母；2. 宣誓：做合格公民，奉献社会，服务国家。Students sang a song to express their thanks to their parents first ， and then hugged them in the ceremony. Besides ， they swore that they woul

7、d become qualified citizens and devote themselves to society and serve the country.例 2：Somestudents cleaned the playground ， watered the young trees and flowers ， and removed weeds. Others collected waste paper ， old books， empty cans and old toys. Then theyhad them sorted and sent them to the recyc

8、ling center.阐述“意义 / 感受”。有些活动感想类作文最后要求作者就活动“自由”发表感 想。虽然是“自由发挥”部分，但是所写内容得跟主题有关，而 且要注意笔墨分配。 当然，考生还会发现这里其实也是一个增分 区域。同学们，有没有搜集积累有关“意义 / 感受”的高级词汇、 句型和观点呢？下面是一个同学就一次消防演习发表的感受部 分：After the activityis not only essentialfor us but also greatlyimproves oursense of safety.After the activitywe feel it sof import

9、ance for us to experience such a drill，whichgreatly improves our sense of safety.四、常用词汇和句型1. 活动名称activity ，competition ，match，celebration，a（n）speech/English /singing /dancing Contest， the English Corner ，the English Culture Festival， the School Art Festivalthe sports meet， a talent /robot show，a bir

10、thday /dancingparty ， a five-day tour /journey /trip，a ten-day wintercamp， the opening /closing ceremonyetc.2. 组织者和参与者， we all realize that such a drill团委 the Youth League ; 班、年级 Class xx,Junior /Senior xx； 选手 con testa nt (s)； 参加者 the participa nt(s)活动内容举行 hold ， organize参加，出席 take part in ， partic

11、ipate in ， attend报名参加 enter for ， sign up for ， go for a picnic ， go on an outing ， go hiking ， collect waste paper ， exchange presents ， put on performances ， deliver a speech ， give comments， compete with sb. for sth.The party began/ended with .We had quite a few activities such as( doing ) sth.Th

12、ere were various activities including singing，dancing on the stage ， a gameof tug-of-war on the playground and so on.活动结果获得名次 comefirst /second /third /last ， get the first /second /third place赢得比赛 win the championship ， be /become the champion输了比赛 lose the game ， be beaten in the game ， fail( in )

13、sth. ， fail to do sth.活动意义 / 感受sth. provide sb. with a（ n） chance/opportunityto dosth.sth. offer sb. a（ n） chance /opportunity to do sth.display ones talent for sth. improve ones ability /skillsenrich one s life broaden one s horizons have a deep influence onsth. increase one s interest in sth.sth.

14、increase/arouse one s enthusiasm /passion forsth.sth. play an important role /part in .sth. contribute to .sth . enable /allow sb. to dosb. have a good /wonderful time，sb. enjoy oneself ， sb， have great funsb. have a（ n） unforgettable /meaningful /interesting /exciting /challenging /fantastic evenin

15、gsb. have a better knowledge /understanding of sth.sb. come to realize sth.Never in my life shall I forget the impressive days in .五、学以致用报道下面活动的“活动内容前”部分。报道下面成人宣誓仪式的程序部分。3. 发表参加“地球一小时( Earth Hour )”活动的感想。 六、综合练习前不久， 你校举办了第三届科技文化艺术节活动。 请根据下 面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，报道这次活动，发表在你校 的校报上。参考范文学以致用 1. To/ In order t

16、o celebrate the great achievements in the past 30 years of reform and opening up ， a speech contest organized by Senior Two was held in the gymnasium of our school on the afternoon of March 15th，2010. More than 1200 people were lucky to listen to the speeches on the spot ，including all the teachers

17、and students in Senior 2， the leaders of our school and parents of some students.2. First ， we made an oath ， and then a student ， representing all ofus，madea speech ，showing our thanksto not only our parents but also our teachers and talkingabout our great ideals. After that ， some teachers and par

18、ents offered us their congratulations and expressed their expectations for our future. Eventually ， we watched wonderful performances put on by students from different classes.How meaningful the activity is，for it arousespeople s awareness to protect our earth.Thanks to Earth Hour ， more and more people will pay more attention to protecting our earth.Though it is a single mass event ， people are contributing in their own way to saving our planet and one hour s going dark means a bright future.综合练习In order to enrich the studentsschool li